Ashq Palkon Mein Chupa Kar:Shayri-E-Dard

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Ashq palkon mein chupaa kar ham
Tere kehne pe muskuraate hai

Jo vafaa ka yaqeen dilaate hai
Vaade aksar vo bhool jaate hai

Teri yaadon ke saaye bhi ab to
Dil ke aangan se laut jaate hai

Le ujaale tu bhar le jee bhar kar
Ghar jalaa kar, yeh dil jalaate hai

Dil ki uljaan na kum ho yeh kahe the hai
Yeh dard ka bojh na bhar paye yeh kehe the hai

Kya karen kuch nahi dawa nahi milti iss dard ki
Ashq pi kar yeh gham bhulaate hai

Ab nah kaanton ke karo ye parwaa
zaKhm to phool bhi lagaate hai


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Re: Ashq Palkon Mein Chupa Kar

«Reply #1 on: March 11, 2008, 05:36:05 AM »

bahut ache honey di

dil me bhare zakhmo ko chupate hai
jab bhi aate hai hum muskurate hai


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Re: Ashq Palkon Mein Chupa Kar

«Reply #2 on: March 11, 2008, 05:38:36 AM »

Bahut khoob honeyji..bahut acha likha hai aapne..


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Re: Ashq Palkon Mein Chupa Kar

«Reply #3 on: March 11, 2008, 05:48:35 AM »

Shukriya chote bro aur khwaish ji..

Itni mohabbat hai mere dil mai aapke liye.
Ke ye kabhi kam na hone payegi.
Hum aapna pyaar na rok paye
Jis din jayenge is duniya se
Us din mout bhi aansu bhaegi.


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Re: Ashq Palkon Mein Chupa Kar

«Reply #4 on: March 11, 2008, 10:12:10 AM »

Honeyji,
Aap ne bahut aacha likha hai............

Sabse aacha... zakm to phool bhi lagate hai....

Hum lipte rahe phoolon k daaman se,
Kaaton ki dard se bachne ki liye...
The anjaan phoolon k zakhm se,
Socha na tha kabi woh b zakhm denge...
humko kaaton se bachane k liye....


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Re: Ashq Palkon Mein Chupa Kar

«Reply #5 on: March 11, 2008, 10:38:08 AM »

Shukriya tushu...

Aankhon mein koi kwaab liye nahi jaate
Woh dard ka gum mujhe chan se jiye nahi jaate
Pyaar mein haad se guzare woh kwaab toota nahi jaate
Mujhe iss dard-e-mehfil mein tanha ruswa kiya nahi jaate


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Re: Ashq Palkon Mein Chupa Kar

«Reply #6 on: April 01, 2008, 06:26:29 AM »

Ashq Palkon Mein Chupa Kar humhe ye kya hogaya
Teri Mohabbat Mein Ghayal Hue Ye Kya Hogaya

Raaste Mein Dard Dil Mein Liye Roye Ye Kya Hogaya
Teri Wafa Amaanat Rakhe The Iss Dil Par Ye Kya Hogaya


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honeyrose

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Re: Ashq Palkon Mein Chupa Kar

«Reply #7 on: April 03, 2008, 10:03:50 AM »

Ashq palkon mein chupa kar pal pal roye
Itne tadape kye yeh kya sitam hue pal pal roye

Zamane se tujhe door dekha hai yeh kya hue pal pal roye
Aab milne ki koi raasta nahi hai yeh kya hue pal pal roye


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Re: Ashq Palkon Mein Chupa Kar

«Reply #8 on: April 03, 2008, 03:45:50 PM »

Quote from: honeyrose on March 09, 2008, 11:10:52 AM

I really hate to write what I am going to write ....but copy-paste is something which I cant tolerate...whenever I see something which is copied without giving credit or without NM, its hurts me like anything....

This poem was written by someone else....moreover..you did not simply copied it BUT YOU CHANGED FEW WORDS HERE AND THERE TO MAKE IT LOOK DIFFERENT.....Its just so sad....

I wish you had written NOT MINE.

People would have still PRAISED you for your beautiful sharing !!

http://wafakadard.com/vade-aksar-bhool-jate-hai/

http://forum.kalpoint.com/1001619-post910.html

http://www.ebazm.com/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?p=17980&sid=f94545f65a50e763d15272d6c07d9b9a


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