Aur bhi Tanha !!!

by Ricky on June 12, 2007, 01:40:03 AM
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    एक तन्हा मुसाफिर था,
    राहों पे यूं चलते हुये
    अपनी ही धुन में ग़ाफिल था

    आयी लहर थी कुछ सपनों की,
    नए राहें रौशनी उसने भी
    देखी थी वहां झलक अपनों की

    अन्जान न था वो दुनिया के दस्तूर से,
    वो टूटते जज्बो़ से देखे
    इन्सानी चेहरे होते बेनूर से

    फिर शामिल वो भी था उस जमात में,
    बनते जहां कम ही फसाने
    पर मिटते ज़रूर चन्द क़दमात में

    था कभी मशगूल अपनी ही बातों में,
    चाहें हो तन्हा वो लेकिन
    त‍ल्लीन था अपनी ही सौगातों मे

    आया फिर एक हवा का झौंका,
    बनते हुये तमाम एहसास
    अलफाज़ को ऐसा उसने रोका

    और भी तन्हा दिन,अकेली रातें थीं,
    तन्हा तो वो था पर अब
    उसकी अपनीं तन्हाईयां भी न उसके हाथों थी

    एक बार फिर तन्हा मुसाफिर था,
    झूठे हुये सारे माइने
    टूट चुका जिंदगी का उसकी नाफिर था
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Now Angrezi mein :

    Ek Tanha Musafir tha,
    RahoN pe yun chalte hue..
    Apni hi dhun mein ghafil tha,

    Aayi leher thi kuch sapno ki,
    Naye rahe roshni usne bhi..
    Dekhi thi wahan jhalak apno ki,

    Anjaan naa tha woh duniya ke dastoor sae,
    woh toot-te jazbo sae dekhe
    Insaani chehre benoor sae

    Fir shamil woh bhi the uss jamaat mein,
    Bante jahan kam hi fasane..
    Par mit-te zarur chand kadmaat mein,

    Tha kabhi mashgool apni hi baton mein,
    chahe ho tanha lekin…
    tallin tha apni hi saugatoN mein,

    Aaya phir ek hawa ka Jhonka,
    Bante hue tamaam ahsaas
    Alfaaz ko usne aisa roka

    Aur bhi tanha din, akeli ratein thi,
    Tanha woh tha per ab…
    Uski apni tanhaiyaan bhi naa uske hathon thi,

    Ek baar fir tanha tha musafir tha,
    Jhoothe hue saare mayene..
    Toot chuka zindagi ka uski nafir tha !!!!!!
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«Reply #1 on: June 12, 2007, 09:23:37 AM »
Ricky sir Its really a wonderful creation.. just lyk a story... aap ki is creation ne maano us musafir aur uski tanhai aur jazbaato  ko mere saamne la kar kada kar diya ho...  really beautiful

Divya
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«Reply #2 on: June 13, 2007, 12:24:05 AM »
Thankyou Deepika_divya for your nice comments.
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«Reply #3 on: June 13, 2007, 12:32:33 AM »
very very nice Ricky ji....

meri tanhayi mein gum bhar diya kisne
main dard ke sholon ko chupaye firti thi
inhein hava ka pata diya kisne

agar na kar saka koi meri muhabbat ki kadar
to isse pairon tale rondne ka bhi haq unhein diya kisne

meri bhi tammana thi kissi se pyar nibhane ki
hal-e-dil sunane ki, dard-e-jigar sunane ki
magar mere jazbaton ko chor-2 kar diya kisne
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«Reply #4 on: June 13, 2007, 04:43:09 PM »
Nice creations Ricky....and Nikki !
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«Reply #5 on: June 13, 2007, 06:11:47 PM »
Ricky, Nikki

Bahut ache !

I like Ricky's effort to post in two languages :D
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«Reply #6 on: June 13, 2007, 06:30:47 PM »
Great Job Ricky Sir..

Also a Very Nice Addition Nikki....
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«Reply #7 on: June 13, 2007, 09:13:39 PM »
Post Deleted by Shikha....

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«Reply #8 on: June 13, 2007, 10:22:49 PM »
बहुत खूब ricky shikha and nikki

लगे रहो
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«Reply #9 on: June 16, 2007, 01:31:52 AM »
Nice Addition Nikki..
Shikha.. you also added those sweet lines..
Ankur.. Nice way of appreciating.
Rajbir ji.. third language mein likhne ki tayyari bhi chal rahi hai !

Thankyou for liking these few lines !
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«Reply #10 on: October 25, 2007, 11:12:29 PM »
BAHUT KHOOB RICKY... =D>  =D>  =D>
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«Reply #11 on: October 26, 2007, 01:11:26 AM »
Bhoot khoob Ricky!!! Nice Creation!!

गम ज़िंदगी का सब सीखा देता है
तन्हाई होती है  क्या, यह बता देता है
हर कोई निकलता है इनही रास्तो से
वक़त के साथ यह भी बता देता है

जिसने ना देखी तन्हाई वो जीना सीखा नही
जिसने ना पिए गम वो जीना सीखा नही
नूर तो आ जाता है जनम के साथ ही
जो ना हुआ बेनूर, उसने जीना सीखा नही

तन्हाई का सबक बहूत ज़रूरी है
हो जाती इसी से ज़िंदगी पूरी है
शायद ना समझो आज मेरी इस बात को
समझोगे मगर एक दिन, इस सोगात को!!!


अब अँग्रेज़ी मै

ab angrezi mai

safar zindagi ka sab sikha deta hai
tanhai hoti hai kaya , yah bata deta hai
her koi niklata hai inahi raasto se
waqat ke sath yah bhi bata deta hai

jisne na dekhi tanhai wo jeena sikha nahi
jisne na piye gum wo jina sikha nahi
noor to aa jaata hai janam ke sath hi
jo na hua benoor, usne jeena sikha nahi

tanhaai ka sabak bahoot jaroori hai
ho jaati issi se zindagi poori hai
shayad na samjho ajj meri is baat ko
samjhoge magar ek din, is sogaat ko!!!
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«Reply #12 on: October 28, 2007, 09:41:49 PM »
Bahut khoob... Mr Ricky, lovely creation... Daad hazir hai.

and Nikki, Majid ji and Pooja di... Sabne b bahut accha likha hai.
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