~~Awaaragardi~~:Shayri-E-Dard

badnaam_shayar

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Awaaragardi me mohabbat ki.....
Main ek baat batana bhool gaya......

Rishtey nahi bandhe hote Zanzeeron se.....
Ya main apne Rishton pe tala lagana bhool gaya.....

Fisalti hai Kalam....Toh kayi Raaz khol jaati hai.....
Chale Jaane pe bhi unke....hume Marhoom ki bahut yaad aati hai.....

Shauk me unke.....
Main khud ko murda batana bhool gaya.....

Tadap ke reh gayi aahein bhi meri.....
Kyu me usko Mohabbat ki misaal banana bhool gaya.....

Ya de gayi woh dard mujhe aisa......
Ke uske saath Khud ka nishaan mitaana bhool gaya.....

Awaaragardi me Mohabbat ki.....
Main ek baat batana bhool gaya.....!!!!


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punam

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~~Awaaragardi~~

«Reply #1 on: September 02, 2007, 12:36:14 AM »

wah bahot khoob gaurav ji....

Tadap ke reh gayi aahein bhi meri.....
Kyu me usko Mohabbat ki misaal banana bhool gaya.....

kya dard hai....


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badnaam_shayar

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~~Awaaragardi~~

«Reply #2 on: September 02, 2007, 12:41:19 AM »

Quote from: "punam"

wah bahot khoob gaurav ji....

Tadap ke reh gayi aahein bhi meri.....
Kyu me usko Mohabbat ki misaal banana bhool gaya.....

kya dard hai....

Thnx Punam....Dard hee ab Zindagi hai....

Dard Jaano toh pata lage kya hai Zindagi.....
Humne toh jaani kya hai maut jab aayi Saanson me mandi...!!!


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angel4u

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~~Awaaragardi~~

«Reply #3 on: September 02, 2007, 01:52:26 AM »

Lovely Gaurav,
itna dard,..... sad5

sach mein it was really touchy


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Roja

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«Reply #4 on: September 02, 2007, 08:38:07 AM »

Quote from: "badnaam_shayar"

wow Gaurav... what a creation..!! u amazed me... Daad hazir hai.


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Pooja

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«Reply #5 on: September 04, 2007, 08:58:37 AM »

Quote from: "badnaam_shayar"

Rishtey nahi bandhe hote Zanzeeron se.....
Ya main apne Rishton pe tala lagana bhool gaya.....

wah wah kaya baat hai Badnaam ji.. bahoot hi acha likha hai khas kar yah lines... simple magar bahoot gahari.... good work..

Shabdo se kah kar, Rishta torra nahi jaata
lakh koshish per bhi, rote ashqo ko roka nahi jaata
jaane wale chale jaate hai, de kar umarbhar ka dard
kisi tarah se bhi yah dard, sambhala nahi jaata hai!!!


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deepika_divya

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~~Awaaragardi~~

«Reply #6 on: September 04, 2007, 10:20:14 AM »

wonderful gaurav.. its really a good one

Good one pooja di

Dard -e- samunder mea beh gaye sare armaan
jinhe meain apne ankho mea sambhale rakha
chal pade uss raah mea ab chod k sab
jahan dard k siva kuch nahi rakha

Divya


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Talat

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~~Awaaragardi~~

«Reply #7 on: September 20, 2007, 01:41:40 AM »

Bohot khoob Gaurav, Punam, Pooja and Divs !


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badnaam_shayar

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~~Awaaragardi~~

«Reply #8 on: September 30, 2007, 12:31:03 AM »

Well thnx all of u....and Pooja ji and Deepika ji...ap dono ne bhi kuch lafzon me baat kahi hai.....bahut khoob...!!!

Unns hai ek tere Khayal bhar me......
Ke Kalam naam pe tere rukne ka naam leti nahi......

Cheer deta hai harr Lafaz bhi Kaaghaz ka seena......
Aur tu hai ke meri Shaksiyat ki cheekh par bhi gaur karti nahi......

Kya doon Wajood uss Mohabbat ko......
Jisko me Awaaragardi se apni Talaashna bhool gaya......

Sab rooth gaye apni bhi mujhse......
Aur main Paraye ko apna banana bhool gaya.......!!!!!


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«Reply #9 on: September 30, 2007, 04:38:58 PM »

Quote from: "badnaam_shayar"

BAHUT KHOOB GAURAV...BAHUT ACHA LIKHA HAI AAPNE


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badnaam_shayar

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«Reply #10 on: September 30, 2007, 11:40:43 PM »

Thnx Khwaish...!!!

Anjaan Safar pe nikle the ek baar hum bhi kabhi......
Socha tha Mudke na dekhenge apne Khayal abhi nahi kabhi nahi......

Manzar toh na paye humne......
Par raahon me sab apna luta baithe......

Fikar kar rahe the bas tumhari fakeeron ki tarah.....
Jinse hum aas ka ek daaman sila baithe......

Socha tha phir kabhi Zikr hoga na tumhara Khawabon me bhi kabhi......
Armaan toh Jale mehez ek dhang se sanam.....

Bas hum Awaara kehlaye harr kahin.........

Dekho bikhre honge meri Mohabbat ke Nishaanat dunia me harr kahin.....
Anjaan Safar pe nikle the ek baar hum bhi kabhi......!!!!!


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