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by bekarar on September 18, 2012, 06:48:17 AM
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हर गुल पे, पत्तों पे, वो खुल के ही बरसता था,
बस मै ही तना बनकर बूंदों को तरसता था,

har gul pe, patton pe, vo khulkar hi barsta tha,
bas main hi tanaa ban bankar, boondon ko tarsta tha,
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«Reply #1 on: September 18, 2012, 06:55:44 AM »
waah waah sanjeev ji bahut khoob bahut dino ke baad aanaa huaa itnaa lambaa gap mat maaraa karo
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«Reply #2 on: September 18, 2012, 08:31:14 AM »
हर गुल पे, पत्तों पे, वो खुल के ही बरसता था,
बस मै ही तना बनकर बूंदों को तरसता था,

har gul pe, patton pe, vo khulkar hi barsta tha,
bas main hi tanaa ban bankar, boondon ko tarsta tha,


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«Reply #3 on: September 18, 2012, 05:53:45 PM »
हर गुल पे, पत्तों पे, वो खुल के ही बरसता था,
बस मै ही तना बनकर बूंदों को तरसता था,

har gul pe, patton pe, vo khulkar hi barsta tha,
bas main hi tanaa ban bankar, boondon ko tarsta tha,


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«Reply #4 on: September 18, 2012, 07:09:45 PM »
हर गुल पे, पत्तों पे, वो खुल के ही बरसता था,
बस मै ही तना बनकर बूंदों को तरसता था,

har gul pe, patton pe, vo khulkar hi barsta tha,
bas main hi tanaa ban bankar, boondon ko tarsta tha,

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«Reply #5 on: September 18, 2012, 08:15:47 PM »
Sanjeev Bhai Aadaab!


Janab aise tanhaa rah kar aik aadh sher kahne par koi daad
nahi deNge hum... janab bazm ko apni raah chhod kar aise
gum hona kahaaN se sikh liya aapne... Huh?

Hume bhai banaakar gayab nahi ho sakte janab... bus pesonaly
itna hi kaheNge yeH jo sher hai humare hi dil ki halat bayaaN
karta hai... bahut khoob..

Par bhaijaan aate rahiye.... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye....

Khuda Hafez...

                   
                   

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«Reply #6 on: September 19, 2012, 07:10:37 AM »
wah....
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«Reply #7 on: September 19, 2012, 09:30:20 AM »
Bahut umda
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«Reply #8 on: September 19, 2012, 01:23:10 PM »
 :clapping:very nice
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«Reply #9 on: September 19, 2012, 04:43:19 PM »
yad fir gujray jamanay aa gaey
fir vahi sathi puranay aa gaey
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«Reply #10 on: June 16, 2014, 03:34:26 AM »
हर गुल पे, पत्तों पे, वो खुल के ही बरसता था,
बस मै ही तना बनकर बूंदों को तरसता था,

har gul pe, patton pe, vo khulkar hi barsta tha,
bas main hi tanaa ban bankar, boondon ko tarsta tha,


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