bahcpan

by sulmuh on January 22, 2005, 08:46:18 PM
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bachpan k dukh b kitnay achay hua karty thy,
tab to sirf khilonay toota karty thy.......
woh khushian b najanay kaisi khusian the ,
titli k par noch k uchla karty the.....
paun maar k khud barish k pani mein ,
 apni hy nao daboya karty the........
choty thay to makaro faraeb b choty the,
dana dal k chirian pakra karty the......[/code]
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«Reply #1 on: January 22, 2005, 10:34:24 PM »
wah wah bohot hi ache!!!!

sometimes i wish i was a little kid again,
skinned knees r easier to fix than broken hearts! (NM)
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«Reply #2 on: January 23, 2005, 03:36:35 AM »
very nice Sulmuh ji

n well said Meena..
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«Reply #3 on: January 23, 2005, 04:09:46 PM »
thanx

 :D
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«Reply #4 on: January 23, 2005, 08:07:55 PM »
gr8  reply meena...tuchin!!!!
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«Reply #5 on: January 23, 2005, 08:37:48 PM »
Quote from: "sulmuh"
bachpan k dukh b kitnay achay hua karty thy,
tab to sirf khilonay toota karty thy.......
woh khushian b najanay kaisi khusian the ,
titli k par noch k uchla karty the.....
paun maar k khud barish k pani mein ,
 apni hy nao daboya karty the........
choty thay to makaro faraeb b choty the,
dana dal k chirian pakra karty the......[/code]


really nice... Puzzled !  :oops:
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«Reply #6 on: January 23, 2005, 08:39:47 PM »
thanx pandit ji
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«Reply #7 on: January 24, 2005, 10:51:22 AM »
good  sulmuh n meena......
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«Reply #8 on: January 24, 2005, 11:55:18 PM »
Nice wordings!!!!
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