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by Meena is back on July 24, 2007, 02:30:26 PM
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raat ko neend nahin ayi to raat bar sochti rahi ke kis topic pe aur likha jaye to mere dimag me yeh topic aya jo ke aab bhi hota hai india me. dahej ki lalach me log bol jate hai ke woh kisi aur ke angan ke phool ko leke aye hai aur unke sath acha saluk nahin karte. ek koshish pesh hai:

Ek ghar chodti hai ladki, ek ghar basane ke liye,
Gairon ko apnaati hai ladki, naye rishte nibane ke liye,

Kuch sapne, kuch tamanye leke ati hai kisi ki ladli,
Kismat naya rukh lati hai uski zindagi dikhane ke liye,

Tarasti hai who hurdum pyar ki kuch mithi baato ke liye,
Par sirf gaaliyon ka shor hi hota hai sunane ke liye,

Do waqt ki sukhi roti mil hi jati hai hai usse,
Par laati ki mar bhi hoti hai saath me khilane ke liye,

Sehe leti hai sab kuch woh, apne gareeb maa baap ki katir,
Unhe hi yaad karti hai who zindagi me thoda muskurane ke liye,

Kisi ek ki nahin, bohot ki yeh kahaani hai “Meena”,
Shayad bahuyen hoti hi hai, zinda jalane ke liye!
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«Reply #1 on: July 24, 2007, 02:34:18 PM »
this is beautiful Meena, cant even express how wonderfully uve written .. im in love with this one! Its amazing how uve put so much emotion..aankhon mein aansu agaye..
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«Reply #2 on: July 24, 2007, 02:55:40 PM »
thanks sanya kuddiye for liking it!!! bas is topic ke bare me soch rahi ti phir woh ek movie yaad aa gayi mujhe "Saajan ka ghar" aur poem ban gayi  :D
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«Reply #3 on: July 24, 2007, 05:00:24 PM »
good one...bahut achi soch hai aapki
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«Reply #4 on: July 24, 2007, 07:37:26 PM »
That is nicely knitted Meena !
What I want to say that it is reality of many but not of all. WE should see other half too where women are happy.. they married !
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«Reply #5 on: July 24, 2007, 09:40:55 PM »
wah kaya baat hai, bahoot khoob Mena!!! bahoot acha likha hai..
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«Reply #6 on: July 25, 2007, 12:02:52 AM »
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raat ko neend nahin ayi to raat bar sochti rahi ke kis topic pe aur likha jaye to mere dimag me yeh topic aya jo ke aab bhi hota hai india me. dahej ki lalach me log bol jate hai ke woh kisi aur ke angan ke phool ko leke aye hai aur unke sath acha saluk nahin karte. ek koshish pesh hai:

Ek ghar chodti hai ladki, ek ghar basane ke liye,
Gairon ko apnaati hai ladki, naye rishte nibane ke liye,

Kuch sapne, kuch tamanye leke ati hai kisi ki ladli,
Kismat naya rukh lati hai uski zindagi dikhane ke liye,

Tarasti hai who hurdum pyar ki kuch mithi baato ke liye,
Par sirf gaaliyon ka shor hi hota hai sunane ke liye,

Do waqt ki sukhi roti mil hi jati hai hai usse,
Par laati ki mar bhi hoti hai saath me khilane ke liye,

Sehe leti hai sab kuch woh, apne gareeb maa baap ki katir,
Unhe hi yaad karti hai who zindagi me thoda muskurane ke liye,

Kisi ek ki nahin, bohot ki yeh kahaani hai “Meena”,
Shayad bahuyen hoti hi hai, zinda jalane ke liye!


Meena aapne bahut accha likha hai...sach ...Kadwa sach...!! :cry:
Hum sirf bathein karte hai... There are many Women still
suffer a lot..,  ghar main ... baher duty jagah main... her jagah
main aaj bhi auraton ko peeda utani padti hai.
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«Reply #7 on: July 25, 2007, 07:54:26 AM »
khwais ji.... shukriya ji!!!

ricky ji... well definitly it does not apply to all women in india. its just one topic about few women. aaab agar koi bewafa sanam ke bare me likhta hai to iska matlab yeh bhi to nahin hota ke duniya ka har ashiq bewafa hai. its just a topic which i picked up!!

Pooja didi....thank u ji thank u didi!!! Usual Smile

Roja ji... dhayawad!!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: July 27, 2007, 08:39:24 AM »
Kya bayaa kiya hai aapne bahu ka dard...

SACH...
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«Reply #9 on: July 30, 2007, 08:51:25 AM »
Waah Meena bahoot Khoob aar Superb,...
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«Reply #10 on: July 30, 2007, 09:01:55 AM »
Chordkar Angan Apna Gairon Ka Ghar Basaati Hai,..
Pait Nahi Bharta Do Roti Se Jab,. Tab Galiyaan Bhi Khaati Hai,..

Dehaj Ke Lalji Log Bhool Jaate Hain Ke Unke Bhi Beti, Behne Hain,..
Jinhe Rukhsat Unhe Bhi Karna Hai Phir Ye Baat Unke Samajh Kyun Nai Aati Hai,..

Mazloom Bahu Par Karti Hai Saas Zulm Bahoot Pati Bhi Marta Hai,..
Mooh Se Kuch Kehti Nahi ye Dil Se Aah De Jaati Hai,..

Naukraani Ki Halat Behtar Hain Inse Wo To Zabaan Chalaati Hai,..
Par Ye Bahuyein Lachaar Hain Jo Sab Seh Jaati Hai,..

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«Reply #11 on: July 30, 2007, 12:28:37 PM »
thanks pani ji...and azeem ji...bohot hi khoobsurat likha hai apne!!

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«Reply #12 on: July 31, 2007, 02:36:27 PM »
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thanks pani ji...and azeem ji...bohot hi khoobsurat likha hai apne!!

 :D

Shukriya Ji,.
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