khwahish
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Aaj Laaiba Ji ki Ek Nazm padhi Thi Jo Dil Ke Bahut kareeb mehsoos Hui..Laaiba Ji Ki Nazm Se Inspired Aur Unki Izzazat Se Title Line Ko lekar Ek Nazm Pesh Kar Raha Hoon...Thankyou Laaiba Ji..
Bahut Din Hue Tumko Socha Nahi Tha..
Haan Kuch Pal Jo Guzar Chuke The
Kuch Aise Zakhm Jo Bhar Chuke The
Kuch Yaadein Hum Dafan Kar Chuke The
Par Inn AshqoN Ko Kabhi Roka Nahi Tha
Bahut Din Hue Tumko Socha Nahi Tha..
Tere Hone Se Khud Ko Muqammal Samajhta Tha
Tujhse Do Pal bhi Juda Hone Se Darta Tha
Tujhe Paane ke Liye Kaanton Se Guzarta Tha
Mushkilon Se Darr Ke Kabhi Lauta Nahi Tha
Bahut Din Hue Tumko Socha Nahi tha...
Kabhi Ek Lamha Aisa Bhi Aata Hai
Jisme Beeta Hua Kal Nazar Aata Hai
Waqt Apna Sab kuch Lekar Guzar Jaata Hai
Par Apne Kisi zakhm Ko Kharocha Nahi Tha
Bahut Din Hue Tumko Socha Nahi Tha...
Yeh sach Hai Kabhi Do Kinaare Nahi Milte
Doobne Wale Ko paas Koi Sahaare Nahi Milte
Jo Roshan kar Sake Woh Sitaare Nahi Milte
Tujhse Door Hona Majboori Th Koi Dhoka Nahi Tha
Bahut Din Hue Tumko Socha Nahi Tha.........
~~~~~Khwahish~~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: April 27, 2013, 11:12:06 PM » |
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waah waah bohat achi nazm huyi hai khwaish ji ,.........
sach hai ke aap ki iss nazm ne b saman bandh dia hai./,.....
yeh lines dil choo gayien ,........laajawab
bohat bohat c daad,............
Kabhi Ek Lamha Aisa Bhi Aata Hai Jisme Beeta Hua Kal Nazar Aata Hai Waqt Apna Sab kuch Lekar Guzar Jaata Hai Par Apne Kisi zakhm Ko Kharocha Nahi Tha Bahut Din Hue Tumko Socha Nahi Tha... Yeh sach Hai Kabhi Do Kinaare Nahi Milte Doobne Wale Ko paas Koi Sahaare Nahi Milte Jo Roshan kar Sake Woh Sitaare Nahi Milte Tujhse Door Hona Majboori Th Koi Dhoka Nahi Tha Bahut Din Hue Tumko Socha Nahi Tha.........
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khwahish
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«Reply #5 on: April 28, 2013, 06:16:44 PM » |
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bahut bahut bahut bahut bahut khub khawaish bhai.......
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«Reply #10 on: April 30, 2013, 03:09:12 AM » |
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Aaj Laaiba Ji ki Ek Nazm padhi Thi Jo Dil Ke Bahut kareeb mehsoos Hui..Laaiba Ji Ki Nazm Se Inspired Aur Unki Izzazat Se Title Line Ko lekar Ek Nazm Pesh Kar Raha Hoon...Thankyou Laaiba Ji..
Bahut Din Hue Tumko Socha Nahi Tha..
Haan Kuch Pal Jo Guzar Chuke The
Kuch Aise Zakhm Jo Bhar Chuke The
Kuch Yaadein Hum Dafan Kar Chuke The
Par Inn AshqoN Ko Kabhi Roka Nahi Tha
Bahut Din Hue Tumko Socha Nahi Tha..
Tere Hone Se Khud Ko Muqammal Samajhta Tha
Tujhse Do Pal bhi Juda Hone Se Darta Tha
Tujhe Paane ke Liye Kaanton Se Guzarta Tha
Mushkilon Se Darr Ke Kabhi Lauta Nahi Tha
Bahut Din Hue Tumko Socha Nahi tha...
Kabhi Ek Lamha Aisa Bhi Aata Hai
Jisme Beeta Hua Kal Nazar Aata Hai
Waqt Apna Sab kuch Lekar Guzar Jaata Hai
Par Apne Kisi zakhm Ko Kharocha Nahi Tha
Bahut Din Hue Tumko Socha Nahi Tha...
Yeh sach Hai Kabhi Do Kinaare Nahi Milte
Doobne Wale Ko paas Koi Sahaare Nahi Milte
Jo Roshan kar Sake Woh Sitaare Nahi Milte
Tujhse Door Hona Majboori Th Koi Dhoka Nahi Tha
Bahut Din Hue Tumko Socha Nahi Tha.........
~~~~~Khwahish~~~~~~
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«Reply #12 on: May 05, 2013, 07:31:33 PM » |
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Khwaish sahab aapki nazm aapke jazbaat ka bakhoobi izhaar karti nazr aayi wo maamlaat jo shayd kahiN raakh mai dabhi huii chingaari ki taraH thay aapne dil ke un ehsasaat ko qaghaz pe raqm karke bashkal e shola bana dia bhut khoob daad hazir hai qubool farmaaiye yuN hi likhte rahiye
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khwahish
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«Reply #13 on: January 30, 2014, 04:24:24 PM » |
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Thankyou Soooooo Much Pawan Ji 
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