Bahut qareeb kaa rishtah hai dard sey apnaa!

by abdbundeli on December 07, 2008, 01:10:15 PM
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Bahut qareeb kaa rishtah hai dard sey apnaa!
Har lamhey saabiqah hotaa hai dard sey apnaa!
Woh na hotey, to, dard bhi naheen huaa kartaa;
Un sey rishtah hai, to, rishtaa hai dard sey apnaa!

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«Reply #1 on: December 07, 2008, 11:14:18 PM »
Nice Abd Ji

Ek dard hai jo seene se laga rahta
Ek woh hai jo door door hai rahti
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«Reply #2 on: December 08, 2008, 01:24:58 AM »
Applause Applause

Bohat khoob Abd ji...

Nice lines Rajesh ji...
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«Reply #3 on: December 08, 2008, 06:28:20 AM »
Thanx Honey Ji
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«Reply #4 on: December 08, 2008, 10:30:22 AM »


Bahut qareeb kaa rishtah hai dard sey apnaa!
Har lamhey saabiqah hotaa hai dard sey apnaa!
Woh na hotey, to, dard bhi naheen huaa kartaa;
Un sey rishtah hai, to, rishtaa hai dard sey apnaa!

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Very nice, Abd Ji


Dard jab teri ataa hai tou gilaa kisase karein,
hijar jab tune diya hai tou milaa kisase karein.

Main safar mein hoon mere saath judayi teri,
hamsafar gam hai tou phir kisko kisase juda karein.
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«Reply #5 on: December 08, 2008, 10:31:40 AM »
Nice Abd Ji

Ek dard hai jo seene se laga rahta
Ek woh hai jo door door hai rahti

Very nice lines, Rajesh Ji
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«Reply #6 on: December 08, 2008, 09:32:10 PM »
Nice Abd Ji
Ek dard hai jo seene se laga rahta
Ek woh hai jo door door hai rahti
Thanks, Rajesh Harish ji!
Dard hota hai tabhee, jab na hamsafar ho,'abd',
Warnah kaantey bhi guloun kaa gumaan deytey hain!
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«Reply #7 on: December 08, 2008, 10:44:57 PM »

Very nice, Abd Ji


Dard jab teri ataa hai tou gilaa kisase karein,
hijar jab tune diya hai tou milaa kisase karein.

Main safar mein hoon mere saath judayi teri,
hamsafar gam hai tou phir kisko kisase juda karein.

Nice Deepati Ji
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«Reply #8 on: December 08, 2008, 10:46:47 PM »
Thanks, Rajesh Harish ji!
Dard hota hai tabhee, jab na hamsafar ho,'abd',
Warnah kaantey bhi guloun kaa gumaan deytey hain!
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Thanx Abd Ji
Also Nice one presented
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«Reply #9 on: December 09, 2008, 10:49:49 AM »
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Bohat khoob Abd ji...

Nice lines Rajesh ji...

Thanx Abd Ji
Also Nice one presented
Thanks YOU a lot!
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«Reply #10 on: December 09, 2008, 11:01:14 AM »
Very nice, Abd Ji
Dard jab teri ataa hai tou gilaa kisase karein,
hijar jab tune diya hai tou milaa kisase karein.

Main safar mein hoon mere saath judayi teri,
hamsafar gam hai tou phir kisko kisase juda karein.
Shukriyah Deepati ji!
Woh, jo deytaa hai, hai qubool, khushee ho, gam ho!
Wo bahut zyaadah ho, yaa fir, wo bahut hi kam ho!
Us ko deynaa hai, to, leynaa hi parheygaa ham ko;
Kaisey kar deyngey judaa dil sey, 'abd', ham-dam ko?
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«Reply #11 on: December 10, 2008, 04:38:41 AM »
Shukriyah Deepati ji!
Woh, jo deytaa hai, hai qubool, khushee ho, gam ho!
Wo bahut zyaadah ho, yaa fir, wo bahut hi kam ho!
Us ko deynaa hai, to, leynaa hi parheygaa ham ko;
Kaisey kar deyngey judaa dil sey, 'abd', ham-dam ko?
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Bahut khoob, Abd Ji
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«Reply #12 on: December 10, 2008, 06:18:34 AM »
Very nice lines, Rajesh Ji
Thanx Deepati Ji
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«Reply #13 on: December 10, 2008, 09:14:47 AM »
Bahut khoob, Abd Ji
Deepati ji! Thanks! I'm happy you liked it!
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