....~~Barish~~....

by HumTum on March 07, 2005, 01:26:53 PM
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On a rainy morning
When the sun was hiding
I was out in the open
Drenched from top to bottom

My love had asked me to meet
Our usual place in the field
Behind the wind mill
Under the cedar tree

It was a lovely place
Near the quiet lake
Where the lovebirds met
When the sun is about to set

But nobody was there today
Just the rain and me
Been waiting the whole day
but she had never been late

Then She came running
i reached out and pulled her to me
She was breathing heavily
Her eyes were watery

She then moved away
And opened her wet hands
She gave me the chain
I gave her on our first date

I looked in her eyes
And she looked in mine
I understood what she didn't say
She realised, turned, ran away

I stood there for hours
Holding my heart in my hand
I didn't know how to cry
For with her I always smiled

I thank god it rained
Oh I just love the rain
for It hid my tears,
It hid my pain

That day that rain
those tears and that pain
The rain stopped then
but in my eyes it still rains

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«Reply #1 on: March 07, 2005, 04:44:12 PM »
wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!


aye barsat tujhe bulaon mai kis bahane se,
aaj phir woh askh behen ko hai jine rokha hai is deewane ne!
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«Reply #2 on: March 07, 2005, 04:45:11 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!


aye barsat tujhe bulaon mai kis bahane se,
aaj phir woh askh behen ko hai jine rokha hai is deewane ne!


wah nice very nice Meena ji.....
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«Reply #3 on: March 07, 2005, 04:48:34 PM »
shukriya ji shukriya!!!

 :D
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«Reply #4 on: March 07, 2005, 04:51:23 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!


aye barsat tujhe bulaon mai kis bahane se,
aaj phir woh askh behen ko hai jine rokha hai is deewane ne!


ab do aalam se sadaa-e-saaz aatii hai mujhe
dil kii aahaT se terii aavaaz aatii hai mujhe

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«Reply #5 on: March 07, 2005, 04:58:10 PM »
niceee!!!!

dil me kuch iss tara se basaya hai tujhe,
ke nikalna waha se aab munkin nahin,
tere bewafai ke toofan me ujad gayi meri pyar ki basti,
usse chand umeedon se sajana aab munkin nahin!!
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«Reply #6 on: March 07, 2005, 04:59:48 PM »
very nice hum tum and my meena darling :oops:
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«Reply #7 on: March 07, 2005, 05:00:24 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
niceee!!!!

dil me kuch iss tara se basaya hai tujhe,
ke nikalna waha se aab munkin nahin,
tere bewafai ke toofan me ujad gayi meri pyar ki basti,
usse chand umeedon se sajana aab munkin nahin!!

good one....

ab to yahii hain dil kii duaayen
bhuulane waale bhuul hi jaayen

wajah-e-sitam kuchh ho to bataayen
ek mohabbat, laakh Khataayen


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«Reply #8 on: March 07, 2005, 05:05:16 PM »
woh tohume kab ke bhula baithe hai,
humare dil se natha tood baithe hai,
aab intezaar hai to maut ka hume,
rooh ko kab ka hum jala baithe hai!
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«Reply #9 on: March 07, 2005, 05:08:43 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
woh tohume kab ke bhula baithe hai,
humare dil se natha tood baithe hai,
aab intezaar hai to maut ka hume,
rooh ko kab ka hum jala baithe hai!


hosh aur un ki diid kaa daawaa
dekhanewaalen, hosh mein aayen

dil ki tabaahii bhuule nahiin ham
dete hain ab tak unko du'aayen

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«Reply #10 on: March 07, 2005, 05:09:17 PM »
wah...wah...kya baat hai.maza aa gaya.
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«Reply #11 on: March 07, 2005, 05:10:13 PM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
wah...wah...kya baat hai.maza aa gaya.



Shukriya niddi ji......:D
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«Reply #12 on: March 07, 2005, 05:20:15 PM »
wah hum tum ji!

thanx nidhi!!  :D
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«Reply #13 on: March 07, 2005, 05:50:40 PM »
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wah hum tum ji!

thanx nidhi!!  :D


Thanku ji.....:D
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«Reply #14 on: March 08, 2005, 06:47:25 AM »
most welcome hum tum and meena. Usual Smile
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