Bas Ek Nazuk Sa Dil Hi To Tha...(Shihab)

by majid on December 11, 2010, 08:00:39 PM
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          Aasman  Se  Koi  Taara  Chamak  Kar ,  Phir  Toot Gaya
          Nam  Aankhon  Se  Ek  Qatra  Aansu , Aur Chhoot Gaya.

          Dhundle  Se   Lafzo.n  Mein  Likha   Hua  Tha  Jo  Kahin
          Woh Be-matlab  Kaagaz  Sa  Rishta ,  Aakhir  Toot Gaya.
 
          Sochta  Tha  Ki  Zindagi Bas  Tere  Saath Hi Guzar Jaaye
          Magar Pura  Hone Se Pahle Hi Yeh  Khwaab , Toot Gaya.

          Aur Kya  Karta  Mein  Us se Apni Barbaadi Gila , Shihab!
          Bas Ek Nazuk Sa Dil Hi To Tha Toot Gaya So Toot Gaya.


                               ~Shihab~
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«Reply #1 on: December 11, 2010, 08:12:03 PM »
Khwaab, Zindagi, Rishte Ye Sab Toot Hi Jaate Hain,.
Kyun Inpar Ehtemaad Liye, Jeene Ki Aas Lagaate Ho,.

Wo Agar Tumhaara Hai, To Laut Aaayega Zaroor,.
Apni Zindagi In Tanhaaiyon Mein Kyun Bitaate Ho,.

Dekh Liya Maine Koi Kisi Ka Nahi Hota Yahaan "Shihab,.
Jo Chala Gaya Door Tumse, Use Kyun Bulaate Ho,.

{AS}


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«Reply #2 on: December 11, 2010, 09:34:30 PM »
           Aasman  Se  Koi  Taara  Chamak  Kar ,  Phir  Toot Gaya
          Nam  Aankhon  Se  Ek  Qatra  Aansu , Aur Chhoot Gaya.

          Dhundle  Se   Lafzo.n  Mein  Likha   Hua  Tha  Jo  Kahin
          Woh Be-matlab  Kaagaz  Sa  Rishta ,  Aakhir  Toot Gaya.
 
          Sochta  Tha  Ki  Zindagi Bas  Tere  Saath Hi Guzar Jaaye
          Magar Pura  Hone Se Pahle Hi Yeh  Khwaab , Toot Gaya.

          Aur Kya  Karta  Mein  Us se Apni Barbaadi Gila , Shihab!
          Bas Ek Nazuk Sa Dil Hi To Tha Toot Gaya So Toot Gaya.


                               ~Shihab~

Mere bhai..
bahaut kam likhte ho yahan mager jab bhi likhte ho, dil choooo jate ho..
Kitni masoomiyat aur sadgi se apne dard bayan kiya hai..
Mere pas lavz nahin tariff kay..
Allah apko khush rakhe..
Yunhi likte rahiye..
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«Reply #3 on: December 11, 2010, 09:35:52 PM »
Khwaab, Zindagi, Rishte Ye Sab Toot Hi Jaate Hain,.
Kyun Inpar Ehtemaad Liye, Jeene Ki Aas Lagaate Ho,.

Wo Agar Tumhaara Hai, To Laut Aaayega Zaroor,.
Apni Zindagi In Tanhaaiyon Mein Kyun Bitaate Ho,.

Dekh Liya Maine Koi Kisi Ka Nahi Hota Yahaan "Shihab,.
Jo Chala Gaya Door Tumse, Use Kyun Bulaate Ho,.

{AS}



Wah wah wah wah..
Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: December 11, 2010, 09:48:25 PM »
Wah wah wah wah..
Applause Applause

Thanks Rahim ji
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«Reply #5 on: December 12, 2010, 11:21:09 AM »
bahut khoob Shihab Ji
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«Reply #6 on: December 12, 2010, 12:24:00 PM »
Wah Kya Baat Hai Bohat Achhey Janab
Dil Ko Chhu Lene Waali Peshkash.
Sabhi Ashaar Badiyan Rahen

Aur KT ji Aapne Bhi Bohat chha Rep Diya Hai
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«Reply #7 on: December 12, 2010, 09:23:19 PM »
Mere Khayal Se Aapko
Khudki Baaton Pe Gaur Karna Chahiye
Kyon Ki Mujhse Jyada Aap Aise Haalton Se
Guzar Rahe Hain...Khair Bahut Achha
Rep Kiya Hai Aapne Bhai...Ab Aapke
Saamne Bhala Main Kya Likhun...
Chalo Aapki Sohbat Men Koshish Kar Lete Hain
Shayad Kuch Ban Jaaye....



Zindagi  Hai  Chhoti Si , Aur  Badi  Kahaani Hai
Kya Kahun  Kis  Qadar  Uljhi  Yeh  Jawaani Hai.

Pal  Do  Pal  Main , Dard  Ko  Bhool  Bhi  Jaata
Magar Kya Karun Isse Pahchan Badi Purani Hai.

Wohi To Rehta Hai Har Waqt Mujhme , Azeem
Kuch Aisa Jurha Usse Mera Rishta Ruhaani Hai.

Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: December 12, 2010, 11:59:44 PM »
Mere Khayal Se Aapko
Khudki Baaton Pe Gaur Karna Chahiye
Kyon Ki Mujhse Jyada Aap Aise Haalton Se
Guzar Rahe Hain...Khair Bahut Achha
Rep Kiya Hai Aapne Bhai...Ab Aapke
Saamne Bhala Main Kya Likhun...
Chalo Aapki Sohbat Men Koshish Kar Lete Hain
Shayad Kuch Ban Jaaye....



Zindagi  Hai  Chhoti Si , Aur  Badi  Kahaani Hai
Kya Kahun  Kis  Qadar  Uljhi  Yeh  Jawaani Hai.

Pal  Do  Pal  Main , Dard  Ko  Bhool  Bhi  Jaata
Magar Kya Karun Isse Pahchan Badi Purani Hai.

Wohi To Rehta Hai Har Waqt Mujhme , Azeem
Kuch Aisa Jurha Usse Mera Rishta Ruhaani Hai.


Shukriya

And nice one
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«Reply #9 on: December 13, 2010, 12:08:18 PM »
Wah aapke toh likhne ka ek alag andaaz hai Shihab ji,lajawab peshkash hamesha ki tarah.great work.Khwab ji aapne bhi bahut acha saath diya.excellent.hats off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: December 13, 2010, 12:42:28 PM »
shihab aapki kalam k to hum hamesha se fanrahe hain par isski bat kuch aur hai
wkai kamaal.....behad khubsurat peshkash of dard....padhte hi kuch likhne ka dil ho jaye aisi peshkash hai ye apaki....
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«Reply #11 on: December 14, 2010, 06:27:01 AM »
bahoot hi khubsurat peshkash h aapki
          Akser khawab toot hi jaya krte h
          magar yehi zindgi ka sahara bhi hote h
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«Reply #12 on: December 14, 2010, 08:17:23 AM »
           Aasman  Se  Koi  Taara  Chamak  Kar ,  Phir  Toot Gaya
          Nam  Aankhon  Se  Ek  Qatra  Aansu , Aur Chhoot Gaya.

          Dhundle  Se   Lafzo.n  Mein  Likha   Hua  Tha  Jo  Kahin
          Woh Be-matlab  Kaagaz  Sa  Rishta ,  Aakhir  Toot Gaya.
 
          Sochta  Tha  Ki  Zindagi Bas  Tere  Saath Hi Guzar Jaaye
          Magar Pura  Hone Se Pahle Hi Yeh  Khwaab , Toot Gaya.

          Aur Kya  Karta  Mein  Us se Apni Barbaadi Gila , Shihab!
          Bas Ek Nazuk Sa Dil Hi To Tha Toot Gaya So Toot Gaya.


                               ~Shihab~


abhut bahut khoob sihab ji..

der se dkhne ki maafi chahta hu ..

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«Reply #13 on: December 25, 2010, 07:10:13 AM »
Wah Wah Maju Meri Jaan Kya Kehne
Sach Mein Tera Jawaab Nahi Hai Yaara
Kya Hi Khoob Shabdon Ko Piroya Hai
Behad Hi Umda Peshkash Bohat Khoob Applause Applause Applause

allah pak tujhe khush rakhe ameen
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«Reply #14 on: December 26, 2010, 04:16:44 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Bohot Khoob Shihab Ji...


hum b likhenge... Koshish Jaari hai..
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