********BAS YEH KHATA KII MAINE**********

by salil2002 on April 09, 2009, 10:01:30 AM
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salil2002
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tujhe pyaar kiya toot kar,teri chahat main sab bhula diya
ta ummra aur koi nahin bas yeh khata kii maine

tere sang dekhi mohabbat kii galiyan, ghooma wahan tafreeh kii
aur aaj but kii nigaho se dekhi duniya, khud ko yeh saza di maine

teri tadap thi ya tujhe paane ka junoon tha mujh par
ab iska gila nahin kyun tujhse wafa kii maine

mujhe aetbaar tha , tu mujhe ansuna bhi kar degi
isliye honth si liye koi  sargoshi bhi na kii maine

tujhe main kya kahoon teri khata kya thi mohabbat k khel main
bas tujhe yaad rakha har pal , bas yeh aakhiri khata kii maine
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«Reply #1 on: April 09, 2009, 10:04:24 AM »
Bohat khoob Salil..
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«Reply #2 on: April 09, 2009, 10:22:10 AM »
keep going Salil ji
too good

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«Reply #3 on: April 09, 2009, 10:54:36 AM »
BOhat Achche Salil Bhai, Nice One. Yunhi Likhte Rahiye,.
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«Reply #4 on: April 09, 2009, 11:42:24 AM »
tujhe pyaar kiya toot kar,teri chahat main sab bhula diya
ta ummra aur koi nahin bas yeh khata kii maine

tere sang dekhi mohabbat kii galiyan, ghooma wahan tafreeh kii
aur aaj but kii nigaho se dekhi duniya, khud ko yeh saza di maine

teri tadap thi ya tujhe paane ka junoon tha mujh par
ab iska gila nahin kyun tujhse wafa kii maine

mujhe aetbaar tha , tu mujhe ansuna bhi kar degi
isliye honth si liye koi  sargoshi bhi na kii maine

tujhe main kya kahoon teri khata kya thi mohabbat k khel main
bas tujhe yaad rakha har pal , bas yeh aakhiri khata kii maine

Bohot Khoob Salil, aaj bohot din baad dekha.....Good work.
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Tanha(Saurabh)
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«Reply #5 on: April 09, 2009, 11:48:36 AM »
bohat pyaara, kya kaha aapne bohat khoob salil ji ......
 Applause Applause Applause
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #6 on: April 09, 2009, 11:51:28 AM »
Hey! salil Too gud dude. Very Good lines....
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salil2002
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«Reply #7 on: April 10, 2009, 07:44:17 AM »
Bohat khoob Salil..
keep going Salil ji
too good

 Applause Applause Applause

shukriya sajid bhai and diya ji
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salil2002
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«Reply #8 on: April 10, 2009, 07:45:14 AM »
BOhat Achche Salil Bhai, Nice One. Yunhi Likhte Rahiye,.
Bohot Khoob Salil, aaj bohot din baad dekha.....Good work.
shukriya janasheen bhai and talat di....ab paper start hone wale hai isliye kam kar diya hai sis..........
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salil2002
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«Reply #9 on: April 10, 2009, 07:47:11 AM »
bohat pyaara, kya kaha aapne bohat khoob salil ji ......
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Hey! salil Too gud dude. Very Good lines....
thnks sophi and tanha,,,,,,,,,

haan ek aarzoo kar loon main jo izazat do mujhe
mere maut k badle tujhe zindgi naseeb ho
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #10 on: April 10, 2009, 05:01:02 PM »
tujhe pyaar kiya toot kar,teri chahat main sab bhula diya
ta ummra aur koi nahin bas yeh khata kii maine

tere sang dekhi mohabbat kii galiyan, ghooma wahan tafreeh kii
aur aaj but kii nigaho se dekhi duniya, khud ko yeh saza di maine

teri tadap thi ya tujhe paane ka junoon tha mujh par
ab iska gila nahin kyun tujhse wafa kii maine

mujhe aetbaar tha , tu mujhe ansuna bhi kar degi
isliye honth si liye koi  sargoshi bhi na kii maine

tujhe main kya kahoon teri khata kya thi mohabbat k khel main
bas tujhe yaad rakha har pal , bas yeh aakhiri khata kii maine

Bahut Bahut Khooooooob SALIL Bro... Kamaal ke Alfaaz likhe hain aapne..!! Waqai Dard Ko Behad Khubsoorati se Lafzon me Dhaala hai aapne..!! Great Work.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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salil2002
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«Reply #11 on: April 11, 2009, 11:27:37 AM »
Bahut Bahut Khooooooob SALIL Bro... Kamaal ke Alfaaz likhe hain aapne..!! Waqai Dard Ko Behad Khubsoorati se Lafzon me Dhaala hai aapne..!! Great Work.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
shukriya vicky bhai........par aapne kuch kaha nahin yahan par
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k.shael
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«Reply #12 on: April 11, 2009, 11:39:35 AM »
tujhe pyaar kiya toot kar,teri chahat main sab bhula diya
ta ummra aur koi nahin bas yeh khata kii maine

tere sang dekhi mohabbat kii galiyan, ghooma wahan tafreeh kii
aur aaj but kii nigaho se dekhi duniya, khud ko yeh saza di maine

teri tadap thi ya tujhe paane ka junoon tha mujh par
ab iska gila nahin kyun tujhse wafa kii maine

mujhe aetbaar tha , tu mujhe ansuna bhi kar degi
isliye honth si liye koi  sargoshi bhi na kii maine

tujhe main kya kahoon teri khata kya thi mohabbat k khel main
bas tujhe yaad rakha har pal , bas yeh aakhiri khata kii maine

First of all sorry bahut der baad dhayan gaya iss topic par,

 Applause  Applause  Applause
And bahut khoob likha hai aapne salil ji, really har line dard me doob ke likhi hai...

So true..

Shally.
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #13 on: April 11, 2009, 05:28:32 PM »
shukriya vicky bhai........par aapne kuch kaha nahin yahan par

AB Kya Likhe Mere Dost.. Dard Itna hai ki Kaagaz Me Samaata hi Nahi..!! Koshish karta Hoon..!!

Wo Kahate The Humse, Tumhe Jaan Se Zyada Chahte Hain,
Aaj Jaan Lekar Bhi Humaari, Humen Bewafa Kahe Jate Hain..

**~** Mann **~**
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #14 on: April 11, 2009, 06:34:52 PM »
tujhe pyaar kiya toot kar,teri chahat main sab bhula diya
ta ummra aur koi nahin bas yeh khata kii maine

tere sang dekhi mohabbat kii galiyan, ghooma wahan tafreeh kii
aur aaj but kii nigaho se dekhi duniya, khud ko yeh saza di maine

teri tadap thi ya tujhe paane ka junoon tha mujh par
ab iska gila nahin kyun tujhse wafa kii maine

mujhe aetbaar tha , tu mujhe ansuna bhi kar degi
isliye honth si liye koi  sargoshi bhi na kii maine

tujhe main kya kahoon teri khata kya thi mohabbat k khel main
bas tujhe yaad rakha har pal , bas yeh aakhiri khata kii maine


wah wah wah, bahut khoob salil, wah

jasbir singh
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