Beti ka dard~~~ Saahil

by salil2002 on May 07, 2009, 03:18:06 PM
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bahut si jagah jab ghar mein beti hoti hai toh baap ko ya doosre ghar walon ko khushi nahin hoti....is kavita main main aisi hi ladki ka dard likh raha hoon

dadi kehti hai yeh mujhse
jis din mein ghar mein aayi thi

tumhe khushi nahin huyi babul ,
mein ek aankh na tumko bhayi thi

bachpan mein jab aati main chalkar
tumne chapat lagayi thi

jaise main na hoon tera hissa
kya main teri parayi thi

bhaiya aaya jab is ghar mein
teri aankhen bhar aayi thi

baanti tune khoob mithaayi
main kitni sakuchayi thi

maine kaha mujhe hai padne jaana
tumne majboori jatlaayi thi

huyi jab shaadi meri,
is ghar se meri vidaayi thi

tujhse lipat kar royi thi main
par tere dil se mil na paayi thi

socha maine tab kyun
main is duniya main aayi thi

taras gayi tere pyaar ko
par tujhe na vipda kabhi sunayi thi

maaf kar de mujhe tu, jo tera dil dukhaya ho
chalte chalte , main tujhse yeh keh aayi thi

maanga main rab se bas yeh,
 agle janam main ladki ban na aaun main

paa loon tera pyaar,
jo kabhi is janam mein, pa na paayi thi

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«Reply #1 on: May 07, 2009, 05:58:54 PM »
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bohat khoob salil bhai...
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«Reply #2 on: May 07, 2009, 11:01:59 PM »
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Bohot achcha likha hai Salil
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«Reply #3 on: May 07, 2009, 11:10:47 PM »
Bahut Bahut khoob Salil.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: May 08, 2009, 11:19:17 AM »
Salil Bhai.. Humesha Ki tarah Bahtreen likha Hai Dost.. Bahut Bahut Khooooooob.. Applause


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«Reply #5 on: May 08, 2009, 11:21:54 AM »
wah wah bahoot khoob salil
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«Reply #6 on: May 08, 2009, 07:06:47 PM »
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bohat khoob salil bhai...
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Bohot achcha likha hai Salil
Bahut Bahut khoob Salil.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Salil Bhai.. Humesha Ki tarah Bahtreen likha Hai Dost.. Bahut Bahut Khooooooob.. Applause


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wah wah bahoot khoob salil
shukriya pooja di, jaya di, talat di. khwahish and vicky bhai
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«Reply #7 on: August 31, 2009, 09:55:16 AM »
be-araami se sari zindagi jaati hai
jis ghar main beti janam le jaati hai

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«Reply #8 on: August 31, 2009, 12:13:35 PM »
be-araami se sari zindagi jaati hai
jis ghar main beti janam le jaati hai


bahut achche di do lines main aapne badi baat keh di

kya likhun iske jawaab main samajh nahin aa raha
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«Reply #9 on: September 01, 2009, 03:04:07 AM »
bahut achche di do lines main aapne badi baat keh di

kya likhun iske jawaab main samajh nahin aa raha

jo bhi likhoge, mai janti hu ki acha likhoge app saahil.
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«Reply #10 on: September 01, 2009, 03:14:46 PM »
Saahil jee:

namaste!

aapne bahot hi achchhaa liKhaa hay.. liKhate raheN yuuNhi!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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«Reply #11 on: September 12, 2009, 11:39:07 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya dhaval bhai
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