bewafaai

by salil2002 on July 08, 2009, 05:58:09 PM
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sheeshe ka banaya ek ghar aur phir oose toda maine
apne haathon main lahoo dekh sukoon aaya bahut

na roka behne diya, ashqon k saath usko
kya karoon tere kisso ne mujhe rulaaya bahut

doon sazaa kya tujhe is bewafaai kii
tujhe badduan doon is baat par dil ghabraaya bahut

mohabbat bhi shayad teri dost nikli
jab bhi karni chahi nafrat ,tu yaad aaya bahut

saahil ko mita gayi lehrein oos tufaan kii
jinhe tere saath 'Saahil' ne chhakaya bahut
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«Reply #1 on: July 08, 2009, 06:11:16 PM »
Wah Saahil ji,wonderful creation,very nice,excellent. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: July 08, 2009, 06:33:00 PM »
Waah waah Saahil .. bahoot bahoot khoob!
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«Reply #3 on: July 08, 2009, 06:35:50 PM »
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Excellent ! Beautiful creation Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: July 08, 2009, 06:48:43 PM »
Bahut khoob saahil ji...
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«Reply #5 on: July 08, 2009, 08:37:03 PM »
Wow ... Bahut khoob Saahil ji  Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: July 08, 2009, 09:10:57 PM »
Very nice indeed, why didn't you make it a ghazal instead, Mr. Saahil
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«Reply #7 on: July 08, 2009, 11:19:12 PM »
bahut khub Saahil ji
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«Reply #8 on: July 09, 2009, 04:52:52 AM »
wah kay abaat hai, bahoot khoob Sahil!!
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«Reply #9 on: July 09, 2009, 05:43:35 AM »
Bahut khoob, Sahil Ji! Applause
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«Reply #10 on: July 09, 2009, 01:06:21 PM »
Kaise na rote dekh_kar uska janaza hum

Zalim ne jeete jee hain hasaya bohat....
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«Reply #11 on: July 09, 2009, 01:51:34 PM »
KYA BAAT HAI SAAHIL JI....

TUM BEWAFAA THI,TUMNE BEWAFAAI KI,
HUMNE CHAHA TUMKO,AB BHOOLANA HAI MUSHKIL HUMKO.
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«Reply #12 on: July 10, 2009, 01:26:57 AM »
Bohot Khoob Salil  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: July 10, 2009, 10:46:54 AM »
Wah Saahil ji,wonderful creation,very nice,excellent. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Waah waah Saahil .. bahoot bahoot khoob!
Saahil

Excellent ! Beautiful creation Applause Applause Applause
Bahut khoob saahil ji...
Wow ... Bahut khoob Saahil ji  Applause Applause
bahut khub Saahil ji
Bahut khoob, Sahil Ji! Applause
sophi, rajbir bhai,roja dear, deepati,punam puja and laila dear aap sabka shukriya
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«Reply #14 on: July 10, 2009, 10:50:14 AM »
Bohot Khoob Salil  Applause Applause Applause
wah kay abaat hai, bahoot khoob Sahil!!
Very nice indeed, why didn't you make it a ghazal instead, Mr. Saahil

pooja di and talat di thanks a lot
Mhussain bhai mujhe likhna achcha lagta hai aur zyaadatar mein isi section main likhta hoon toh socha yahion likhun
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