Bidayi ..... (Jasbir Singh)

by jasbirsingh on August 15, 2009, 06:59:46 PM
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JANAZA TEY BARAAT APAS WHICH TAKRA GAYE
YEH DEKH, SARE LOG VI GHABRA GAYE
BIJLI KADKI TEH AKAASHWANI AAYI
MEHBOOB DI DOLI DEKHAN, AASHIQ DI LAASH AAYI




JASBIR SINGH
hira_company@yahoo.com
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #1 on: August 16, 2009, 02:23:56 AM »
Wah wah bahut khoob Jasbir ji,really touching and wonderful creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Sammual
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«Reply #2 on: August 16, 2009, 07:50:54 AM »
Bahut Khoob Jasbir Ji. Applause Applause
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #3 on: August 16, 2009, 11:15:41 AM »
Quote from: madhuwesh on August 16, 2009, 02:23:56 AM
Wah wah bahut khoob Jasbir ji,really touching and wonderful creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

thanks madhu ji..

jasbir singh
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«Reply #4 on: August 16, 2009, 11:16:00 AM »
Quote from: Sammual on August 16, 2009, 07:50:54 AM
Bahut Khoob Jasbir Ji. Applause Applause

thanks sam ji

jasbir singh
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Roja
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«Reply #5 on: August 16, 2009, 05:29:12 PM »
Quote from: jasbirsingh on August 15, 2009, 06:59:46 PM


JANAZA TEY BARAAT APAS WHICH TAKRA GAYE
YEH DEKH, SARE LOG VI GHABRA GAYE
BIJLI KADKI TEH AKAASHWANI AAYI
MEHBOOB DI DOLI DEKHAN, AASHIQ DI LAASH AAYI




JASBIR SINGH
hira_company@yahoo.com

Too good jas ji  Thumbs UP
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #6 on: August 16, 2009, 07:30:03 PM »
Quote from: Roja on August 16, 2009, 05:29:12 PM
Too good jas ji  Thumbs UP




thanks roja ji

jasbir singh
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DhavalRami
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«Reply #7 on: August 17, 2009, 04:25:06 AM »
jasbir bhaa'ii:

aapne bahot hi Khuub liKhaa haii!

liKhate raheN yuuNhi!

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #8 on: August 17, 2009, 09:13:55 AM »
Quote from: Dhaval on August 17, 2009, 04:25:06 AM
jasbir bhaa'ii:

aapne bahot hi Khuub liKhaa haii!

liKhate raheN yuuNhi!

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval

thanks dhaval

jasbir singh
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salil2002
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«Reply #9 on: August 17, 2009, 09:18:01 AM »
bahut achche jas bhai

jara ruk jao na oothao arthi meri
mere mehboob kii doli gujar jaane do
ashqon ko roko na beh jaaye yeh kaahin
khushi ka mauka dhoom se manane do
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #10 on: August 17, 2009, 09:25:31 AM »
Quote from: -Saahil- on August 17, 2009, 09:18:01 AM
bahut achche jas bhai

jara ruk jao na oothao arthi meri
mere mehboob kii doli gujar jaane do
ashqon ko roko na beh jaaye yeh kaahin
khushi ka mauka dhoom se manane do

thanks sahil ji and wah bahut khoob

jasbir singh
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Jiya
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«Reply #11 on: August 17, 2009, 04:41:06 PM »
Dard bhara tha wo manzar is kadar,
us waqt rone lagi thi khudai,
nadaan the ye duniya waaale samjhe nahin,
ki bin badal barsaat kyun aayi......


............................. Jiya ...

Jasbir ji bohot achha likha hai aapne,,,, Usual Smile
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #12 on: August 17, 2009, 06:06:09 PM »
Quote from: Jiya on August 17, 2009, 04:41:06 PM
Dard bhara tha wo manzar is kadar,
us waqt rone lagi thi khudai,
nadaan the ye duniya waaale samjhe nahin,
ki bin badal barsaat kyun aayi......


............................. Jiya ...

Jasbir ji bohot achha likha hai aapne,,,, Usual Smile


thanks jiya ji....
wah bahut hi khoob jiya ji



AASHIQ KA JANAZA TOH UTHNA HI THA
BICHAD KAR YEH HAAL TOH HONA HI THA
KUDRAT BHI MAJBOOR THI DUNIYA SEY
KABAR MEH AASHIQ KOH SONA HI THA



JASBIR SINGH
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punam
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«Reply #13 on: August 17, 2009, 06:28:42 PM »
Bahut khoob Jas ji....salil bro ..and jiya di...
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Pooja
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«Reply #14 on: August 18, 2009, 01:50:39 AM »
Jas ji, Sahil bro and Jiya... bahoot khoob!!!
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