Bohat Ghutan Hai Dil Ko Jhalne Do.:Shayri-E-Dard

Yaash

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      Aadab.
   Doston Pahli Baar Aap Sabke Aagey
   Apni Ek Adna Si Koshish Ko Pesh Kar Raha Hoon
   Umeed Hai Aap Sab Ko Pasand Aayegi Aur Aapka
   Saath Milega...Shukariya.

Kisi Ki Yaad Mein Do Pal Mujhey Machalne Do
   Ki Bohat Ghutan Hai Dil Ko Thoda Sa Jhalne Do


   Kaash Ki Mil Jaaye Thodi Si To Raahat Mujhey
   Dard-o-Gham Ko Meri Rag Rag Men Pighalne Do.

   Dum Hi Naa Tod Den , Kahin Hasraten Meri Dost
   Shaam-e-Furqat Ko Tanhaai Mein Hi Dhalne Do.

   Dekhlun Mein Bhi Kab Tak Aazmati Hai Muhabbat
   Zara Sa Aur Aazmaish Ki Talwaar Ko, Chalne Do.

   Suna Hai Bade Meharbaan Hain, Is Bazm Ke Log
   Socho Mat Yaash , Bas Apni Qalam Ko Chalne Do.

      ~~~Yaash~~~


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Re: Bohat Ghutan Hai Dil Ko Jhalne Do.

«Reply #1 on: October 06, 2010, 08:43:48 AM »

bahut khoob likha hai aaapne Yaash ji... aapka pehla post aur hum aapke pehle paathak... ummeed hai aapko padhne ka mauka milta rahega .. bahut achcha likhte hain aap.. yunhi likhte rahiye aur hamaare saath share karte rahiye...

shukriya...!!!


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Re: Bohat Ghutan Hai Dil Ko Jhalne Do.

«Reply #2 on: October 06, 2010, 09:23:05 AM »

yaash ji badi khubsurat peshkash he apki...bahyut badhiya lagiii..
isi tarah pesh karte rahe ham padhte rehege....


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Re: Bohat Ghutan Hai Dil Ko Jhalne Do.

«Reply #3 on: October 06, 2010, 09:32:34 AM »

Bahut Bahut Khoob Yashji..


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Re: Bohat Ghutan Hai Dil Ko Jhalne Do.

«Reply #4 on: October 06, 2010, 09:37:41 AM »

yaash ji kya kahun har lafz apne aap me alag sa laga...jis tarah aapne likha hai sari lines ek hi length me bht mushkil hai ye karna..kaafia chche shayar bhi nahin kar pate apne feelings ko iss trah express...really too good.....

yunhi likhte rahiye ..


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Re: Bohat Ghutan Hai Dil Ko Jhalne Do.

«Reply #5 on: October 07, 2010, 06:29:40 AM »

Nice work Yash............kisi achche shayer dost se islah karate raho apne kalamo ki, trust me it would be of great help.


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Re: Bohat Ghutan Hai Dil Ko Jhalne Do.

«Reply #6 on: October 07, 2010, 06:31:33 AM »

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 06, 2010, 09:37:41 AM

Arey aapke liye kya mushkil ho sakta hai Kasak jee aap to hamari is mehfil ki champion hai agar aap aisi batein karegi to hum jaise anadi shayro ka kya hoga............fatafat kuch sochiye aur pesh kijiye.


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Re: Bohat Ghutan Hai Dil Ko Jhalne Do.

«Reply #7 on: October 07, 2010, 06:46:08 AM »

Quote from: Sajid_Ghayel on October 07, 2010, 06:31:33 AM

aap sharminda kar arhe hain ab gayel saheb...aap sabko padh padh k hi kuch likhti hun aur aap hi ye kehte hain....


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manzil-e-ishq

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Re: Bohat Ghutan Hai Dil Ko Jhalne Do.

«Reply #8 on: October 07, 2010, 06:52:04 AM »

kya baat hai yash ji...
bahut bahut khoob..


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Yaash

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Re: Bohat Ghutan Hai Dil Ko Jhalne Do.

«Reply #9 on: October 12, 2010, 04:14:30 AM »

Quote from: ~Hriday~ on October 06, 2010, 08:43:48 AM

Bohat Bohat Shukariya Jaanb Is Qadar Hausla Afzai Ke Liye
Aapka Tahe Dil Se Shukar Guzaar Hoon..Yun Hi Sath Banaye Rakhiyega

Shad o Aabad Rahen.

Yaash...


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Re: Bohat Ghutan Hai Dil Ko Jhalne Do.

«Reply #10 on: October 12, 2010, 04:16:15 AM »

Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on October 06, 2010, 09:23:05 AM

yaash ji badi khubsurat peshkash he apki...bahyut badhiya lagiii..
isi tarah pesh karte rahe ham padhte rehege....

Nawazish. Bohat Shukariya Janaab Abhi Sahab Sath Dene Ke Liye
Ji Insha ALLAH Kuch Bana To Jarur Aapki Nazar Karte Rahenge.

Shad o Aabad Rahen.

Yaash...


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Yaash

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Re: Bohat Ghutan Hai Dil Ko Jhalne Do.

«Reply #11 on: October 12, 2010, 04:17:12 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on October 06, 2010, 09:32:34 AM

Bahut Bahut Khoob Yashji..

Bohat Bohat Shukariya Janaab Khwaish Ji...

Shad O Aabad Rahen.

Yaash...


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Yaash

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Re: Bohat Ghutan Hai Dil Ko Jhalne Do.

«Reply #12 on: October 14, 2010, 05:50:11 PM »

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 06, 2010, 09:37:41 AM

Bas Ji Sab Aapki Nazron Ka Karam Hai Baqi Bhala Meri Kya Bisat
Aapka Tahe Dilse Shukar Guza Hoon Is Qadar Khoobsurat Tahsin Ke Liye.

Yun Hi Saath Banaye Rakhiye.

Shad o Aabad Rahen.

Yaash


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Yaash

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Re: Bohat Ghutan Hai Dil Ko Jhalne Do.

«Reply #13 on: October 14, 2010, 05:55:49 PM »

Quote from: Sajid_Ghayel on October 07, 2010, 06:29:40 AM

Nice work Yash............kisi achche shayer dost se islah karate raho apne kalamo ki, trust me it would be of great help.

Janab Ghayel Dahab Sabse Pahle To Shukariya Ki Aapne Waqt Diya
Aur Ishla To Janaab Main Shayari Ko Rozi Roti Ka Zariya Nahi Bana Na
Chahta Hoon Aur Na Hi Isme Naam Kamaane Ki Bhook Hai Mujhey. Bas Zara Sa Shok Hai Likhne Ko Aur Main Janta Hun Waqt Ke Saath Yeh Bhi
Ek Na Ek Din Insha ALLAH Jarur Chhut Jaayega.Aur Dusri Baat Main
Kisi Aise Insan Ko Nahi Janta Jo Meri Galtiyon Ko Thik Kar Sake
Main Khud Kam Pada Likha Hoon Ab Zahir Hai Mere Dost Bhi Kam Pade Likhen Hi Honge...Phir Bhi AbMain Koshish Karunga Ki Main Agli Post Kisi Ki Islah Ke Bagair Na Karuna.Bahut Shukariya.

Shad o Aabad Rahen.

Yaash.


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Yaash

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Re: Bohat Ghutan Hai Dil Ko Jhalne Do.

«Reply #14 on: October 14, 2010, 05:57:35 PM »

Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on October 07, 2010, 06:52:04 AM

kya baat hai yash ji...
bahut bahut khoob..

Bohat Bohat Shukariya Ishq Ji.

Shad o Aabad Rahen.

Yaash


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