Cancer se pidhit hai maa Beta din raat bechain hai

by mistufer on July 08, 2009, 10:26:53 AM
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Cancer se pidhit hai maa Beta din raat bechain hai
Kis tarah de rahat maa ko, Dil mein aisi uljhan hai

Din raat karta vo sewa Lata neye ilaaj hai
Vo kya jane doctoron ko, Kaise unke meejaz hai

Roz roz vo karte tazurbe Istimaal nayi dawaiyan ke
Koi naa bach paya inse Aise inke illaz hai

Dard mein tadapta dekh maako Ankh se lahoo tapakta hai
Dil par kya guzarti hai, Kahan zamana samajhta hai

Jin sangh lagi vo tan jane Maa ki kitni ahmiyat hai
Maan hai toh duniya jannat, Na ho toh kabrastaan hai

Dua karo un sabke liye, jinke pass maa hoti hai
Bilakhte hain bache kaise, samne jab maa ki lash hoti hai

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«Reply #1 on: July 08, 2009, 10:31:47 AM »
apki last do line ne to rula diya Nira ji... bahoot achi rachna likhi hai apne....
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«Reply #2 on: July 08, 2009, 10:43:07 AM »
apki last do line ne to rula diya Nira ji... bahoot achi rachna likhi hai apne....

pooja ji
sorry mera yeh irada nahi tha
main khud is daur se guzar chuki hoon.
is peeda ko janti hoon
aapko pasand aayi rachna
shukriya
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«Reply #3 on: July 08, 2009, 10:47:10 AM »
Aapne aacha likha hai Neera ji, par aapne jo 2 lines last me likhi hai wo sach me bahut dukhdayi hai mein to kabhi inn kalpana bhi nahi karna chahti..shayri ko sachayi ka roop dena aachi baat hai magar iss tarah se padna thoda mushqil laga..

Shally.
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«Reply #4 on: July 08, 2009, 10:49:01 AM »
bahut hi badiya likha hai aapne  nira ji.......

na zammen chaahiye,na aasman chaahiye,
loutasakhte ho,to mujhe "MAA" chaahiye.
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«Reply #5 on: July 08, 2009, 02:25:17 PM »

DARD BHARAA HAI MAA KAA MOQABLAA DUNIYA KAA KOI BHI RISHTAA NAHIN KAR SAKTAA

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«Reply #6 on: July 08, 2009, 09:32:37 PM »
Aapne aacha likha hai Neera ji, par aapne jo 2 lines last me likhi hai wo sach me bahut dukhdayi hai mein to kabhi inn kalpana bhi nahi karna chahti..shayri ko sachayi ka roop dena aachi baat hai magar iss tarah se padna thoda mushqil laga..

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aapne mehsoos kiya, samajha aor saraya meri nazm ko
aapka bahut bahut shukriya.
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«Reply #7 on: July 08, 2009, 09:37:19 PM »
bahut hi badiya likha hai aapne  nira ji.......

na zammen chaahiye,na aasman chaahiye,
loutasakhte ho,to mujhe "MAA" chaahiye.

cara ji
aapki lines bahut dilke kareeb lagi
kash koi lauta de maa ko meri sari duniya lele.
aapko nazm achi lagi aapka shukriya adaa kartiu hoon
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«Reply #8 on: July 08, 2009, 09:42:08 PM »
DARD BHARAA HAI MAA KAA MOQABLAA DUNIYA KAA KOI BHI RISHTAA NAHIN KAR SAKTAA

 GOOD ONE NIRA JI Applause

marhoom bahayaat ji

aapko yahan dekh kar acha laga
hausla afzaayi ka bahut bahut shukriya
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