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chahto ney teri
assa jaduu kiyaa hai
mari raato ko cheena hai
din ko chan kaha hai
mari hathoo ki lakiroo mein
tera hii nam likha hai
tu mera hai mery dil ney
mujhsey yahi kaha hai
aayina bhi mujhsey kuch kah raha hai
dil mein koi mitha aa dard ho raha hai
in nazroo ney khulney sey kyu mana kiya hai
shayad khaaboo mein tera didaar ho raha hai
khamosh shamey hai meger
khamoshyo mein bhi dil kuch bool raha hai
tari yaado mein khoker
mera tan or man dool raha hai
assa lagta hai jasy
tu kano mein mary
shayahd ghool raha hai
tanhaeya mari mujhy chaidyr rahi hai
assa lagta hai jasy
ttari nazry mujhy dekh rahi hai
chahto mein tari
assa jaduu kiya hai
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«Reply #1 on: September 06, 2005, 05:44:04 AM » |
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wah!!!!!!!!!!! Ghazal............ excellent.................
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«Reply #2 on: September 06, 2005, 07:04:38 AM » |
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wah ghazal,khoob likha hai..................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #3 on: September 06, 2005, 07:09:32 AM » |
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"inn nazroo ney khulney sey kyu mana kiya hai
shayad khaaboo mein tera didaar ho raha hai "....kya baat kahi hai Ghazal.......good one ....keep it up!!!!!
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Ghazal
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«Reply #4 on: September 06, 2005, 09:13:56 AM » |
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thx a lot waheed jii & nidhi &isha
bohot bohot shukriya
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«Reply #5 on: September 06, 2005, 10:34:56 AM » |
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Bohat khoob Ghazal...
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«Reply #6 on: September 06, 2005, 10:50:16 AM » |
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thx aryaan jii
sapna jo jagti aakho sey dekha
wahi sapno ney thukra diya
sapno sey jagi to apno ney thukra diya
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ali
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«Reply #7 on: September 06, 2005, 09:00:00 PM » |
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chahto ney teri
assa jaduu kiyaa hai
mari raato ko cheena hai
din ko chan kaha hai
mari hathoo ki lakiroo mein
tera hii nam likha hai
tu mera hai mery dil ney
mujhsey yahi kaha hai
aayina bhi mujhsey kuch kah raha hai
dil mein koi mitha aa dard ho raha hai
in nazroo ney khulney sey kyu mana kiya hai
shayad khaaboo mein tera didaar ho raha hai
khamosh shamey hai meger
khamoshyo mein bhi dil kuch bool raha hai
tari yaado mein khoker
mera tan or man dool raha hai
assa lagta hai jasy
tu kano mein mary
shayahd ghool raha hai
tanhaeya mari mujhy chaidyr rahi hai
assa lagta hai jasy
ttari nazry mujhy dekh rahi hai
chahto mein tari
assa jaduu kiya hai
Bahot hi khub
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«Reply #8 on: September 12, 2005, 10:11:19 AM » |
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thx a lot waheed aryaa
n ali & nidhi isha
do kadan bhi na chaly thy
rasto ney muu moodr liya
appko chaha tha apna samjh ker
appny hee dil toor diya
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ali
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«Reply #9 on: September 13, 2005, 07:19:07 PM » |
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Wah Bahot khb
appko chaha tha apna samjh ker
appny hee dil toor diya
Jawab nahi
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«Reply #10 on: September 17, 2005, 07:16:57 AM » |
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thx ali jii
ashq to assye hote hai
ki saalo ki mohobat ko
doo lafzoo mein baya ker jate hai
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«Reply #11 on: September 25, 2005, 08:55:03 PM » |
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Tere ashq ka jo mol cukai
Usok apni wafa dedo
Dil jo todte hai unko
Ashq bana ke dil se baha do
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