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Aakhir Kab Tak koi Dard Apna Chupata Rahega
Kisi Na Kisi Bahane Yeh Nazar Aata Rahega
Beete hue Pal Guzare Hue Kal Ki Kahani Bankar Reh Jaate Hai!!
Guzra Hua Har Ek Pal Tujhe Yaad Apni Dilata Rahega
Jagmagate Shehar Ki Raunake zaroor Dil Lubhayegi!
par Mann ke Aaene mein Chehra Kisi aur ka nazar Aata Rahega
Jo Tu Hai bas Wahi Teri Ek Pehchaan Hai!!!
Duniya Ke Mutaabik Tu Pehchaan Apni Chupata Rahega
"khwaish" Yahan Dard Ki Dawa Khud Dard Hi Hai!!!
Kab Tak Yuh Dard Apna Tu Sunaata Rahega
Kadam-kadam par Yahan Sannate Hai Aur Kuch Nahi!!!!!
Kab Tak Inn Mehfilon mein Tu Dil Apna Lagata Rahega
"Khwaish" yeh Haqeeqat hai Ke Teri Kalam Sach Bolti hai!!!!
Yaad kar Tujhe Koi To Hai Jo Umarbhar Muskurata Rahega..
~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: March 04, 2011, 08:33:26 AM » |
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very nice theame khwaish ji....
i lyk 4th & 5th one alot....
bht khoob....
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«Reply #2 on: March 04, 2011, 10:56:55 AM » |
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very nice theame khwaish ji....
i lyk 4th & 5th one alot....
bht khoob....
Aapne pasand Farmaya Aapka Tehhhh Dillll Se Shukriya Priyaji  |
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«Reply #3 on: March 04, 2011, 12:11:51 PM » |
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 Ek aur super duper nazm dost.. Akhri shaer wakei dil main baith gaya.. Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #4 on: March 04, 2011, 12:14:54 PM » |
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«Reply #5 on: March 04, 2011, 08:14:55 PM » |
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Bahut Khub Khwaish Bhai Nice Creation
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«Reply #7 on: March 06, 2011, 01:22:56 PM » |
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Bahut Khub Khwaish Bhai Nice Creation
Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya Rishiji |
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«Reply #9 on: March 09, 2011, 03:57:17 PM » |
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Thanks a Lotttttttttt Dear Madhu..atlast aapka comment aa gaya meri poetry par..u have been my poetries Nowadays.. 
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«Reply #12 on: May 19, 2011, 10:18:07 AM » |
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Thanks A Ton Anju Ji..
yeh Threads Main Khud Bhool Chuka Tha..Aapka bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #13 on: May 23, 2011, 09:18:11 AM » |
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on eTI community..
