Cher na hum deewaano ko...

by Aryaan on March 16, 2005, 05:28:46 PM
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Aryaan
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Aye duniya kya tujh se kahein
jaa, cher na hum deewaano ko
pighli huwi iss aag mein jal kar
marne de, parwaano ko
Waade jhoote, pyar bhi jhoota
jhoote pyar ke rishtey hain
zehar pilaa kar sula rahe hain
hum apne armaano ko
Sathi jinko loot gaye
aur maut bhi jin se rooth gayi
log sharabi kehte hain
unn dard bhare insaano ko...
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sanya310
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«Reply #1 on: March 16, 2005, 05:34:05 PM »
arey wah nice one Aryaan

Ye dunya jo rooth gayi hai humse
Ise manana hamare bas ki baat nahi
Log udaate hain mazaak is dukhi dil ka
kyunki is dukhi ko sahara dena
kisi bedard ki bas ki baat nahi
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Aryaan
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«Reply #2 on: March 16, 2005, 05:42:26 PM »
Shukriya Sanya .....n Nice reply.....
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Meena
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«Reply #3 on: March 16, 2005, 06:36:21 PM »
"Sathi jinko loot gaye
aur maut bhi jin se rooth gayi
log sharabi kehte hain
unn dard bhare insaano ko..."


bohot hi achi lines hai!!!!! brillient!!!!

sanya apne bhi bohot hi acha likha!! keep it up kuddiye!

 :D
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Aryaan
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«Reply #4 on: March 16, 2005, 09:51:22 PM »
Shukriya Meena.....
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Pooja
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«Reply #5 on: March 16, 2005, 09:53:40 PM »
wah Aryaan and sanya310 bahoot khoob!!!
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Aryaan
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«Reply #6 on: March 16, 2005, 11:39:00 PM »
Shukriya Pooja.....
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dhadkan
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«Reply #7 on: March 17, 2005, 08:35:33 AM »
Bahut khoob Aryaan and Sanya..
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sanya310
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«Reply #8 on: March 17, 2005, 09:17:57 AM »
thanx meena sis pooja sis n dhadkan sis :D !
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nikki
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«Reply #9 on: March 17, 2005, 11:18:23 AM »
excellent Aryaan n Sanya
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Aryaan
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«Reply #10 on: March 17, 2005, 03:46:45 PM »
Bohat shukriya Dhardkan & Nikki.......
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Aryaan
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«Reply #11 on: March 17, 2005, 04:57:20 PM »
Jab tumko hamari yaad aaye
Aur dil bhi tumhara ghabraye
Seene se laga kar yaad meri
Tasweer se baatein kar lena
They sath kabhi, jin raahon par
Unn raahon se munh moar chale
Paa kar bhi tumhe hum paa na sakey
Apne they magar apna na sakey
Yeh khel hai saara Qimat ka
Tum dil ko tassali de lena
Tum jinko kabhi bhoolo ge nahi
hum aisi yaadein choar chale...
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jalpari
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«Reply #12 on: March 17, 2005, 06:26:00 PM »
Lajawaab...Bohat hi achey...very touchy Aryaan!
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Meena
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«Reply #13 on: March 17, 2005, 06:29:59 PM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"
Jab tumko hamari yaad aaye
Aur dil bhi tumhara ghabraye
Seene se laga kar yaad meri
Tasweer se baatein kar lena
They sath kabhi, jin raahon par
Unn raahon se munh moar chale
Paa kar bhi tumhe hum paa na sakey
Apne they magar apna na sakey
Yeh khel hai saara Qimat ka
Tum dil ko tassali de lena
Tum jinko kabhi bhoolo ge nahi
hum aisi yaadein choar chale...


wah!!!!!!!!!!!

 :D
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pandit
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«Reply #14 on: March 17, 2005, 06:43:54 PM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"
Jab tumko hamari yaad aaye
Aur dil bhi tumhara ghabraye
Seene se laga kar yaad meri
Tasweer se baatein kar lena
They sath kabhi, jin raahon par
Unn raahon se munh moar chale
Paa kar bhi tumhe hum paa na sakey
Apne they magar apna na sakey
Yeh khel hai saara Qimat ka
Tum dil ko tassali de lena
Tum jinko kabhi bhoolo ge nahi
hum aisi yaadein choar chale...


nice aryanji........... :oops:
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