Chitta me aag aaj bhi hai...

by Meena on January 05, 2005, 12:13:14 PM
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Nafrat ki chadar se nam tera lapete hue hai,
Par dil me kahi pyar tere liye aaj bhi hai!

Raste humare ek nahin, manzil humari ek nahin,
Par tere sang sang chalne ka sapna aaj bhi hai!

Hogaya ek arsa teri bewafai ko mane hue,
Par zindagi me tere hone ka ehesaas aaj bhi hai!

Mittha diya kab ke un ashkon ko jo thi teri nishani,
Par ankhon me samundar aaj bhi hai!

Na koi shikwa na koi gila karenge tusme sanam,
Par di hue zakhmo ka hisab mere pas aaj bhi hai!

Mukht honge jab rakh hojayega yeh jism,
Par tere intezaar me meri chittia me aag aaj bhi hai!
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yog
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«Reply #1 on: January 05, 2005, 12:17:15 PM »
Chot kha k baithe hai iss tarah se aaj bhi
gumo kii kittab aaj bhi hai...

very nice but sad meena ji
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«Reply #2 on: January 05, 2005, 02:25:50 PM »
Excellent Meena..
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«Reply #3 on: January 05, 2005, 02:32:59 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Nafrat ki chadar se nam tera lapete hue hai,
Par dil me kahi pyar tere liye aaj bhi hai!

Raste humare ek nahin, manzil humari ek nahin,
Par tere sang sang chalne ka sapna aaj bhi hai!

Hogaya ek arsa teri bewafai ko mane hue,
Par zindagi me tere hone ka ehesaas aaj bhi hai!

Mittha diya kab ke un ashkon ko jo thi teri nishani,
Par ankhon me samundar aaj bhi hai!

Na koi shikwa na koi gila karenge tusme sanam,
Par di hue zakhmo ka hisab mere pas aaj bhi hai!

Mukht honge jab rakh hojayega yeh jism,
Par tere intezaar me meri chittia me aag aaj bhi hai!


wow.meena ji aap nahin janti apne kitna accha likha hai;its among the category of my favourites now.
Thanx for writing this Usual Smile
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Meena
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«Reply #4 on: January 05, 2005, 04:58:19 PM »
shukriyaaaaaaaa yog ji, aryaanji aur nidhi sis!

thanx a lot for liking and reading my poem!

 :D
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«Reply #5 on: January 05, 2005, 05:12:32 PM »
Ae dil kisi ki yaad me rona fizul hai
          Aasu bade anmol hai inhe khona fizul hai
          Rona to unke liye jo humpar nissar hai
          Unke liye kya rona jinke aashique hazzar hai.


Meen u hav written very nice. i think it is straight from heart isn't it?
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #6 on: January 05, 2005, 05:25:10 PM »
Nice lines meenaJi. Beautiful!
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nikki
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«Reply #7 on: January 05, 2005, 06:13:03 PM »
wao ...meena ji .....thats superb.....right from heart

sab ka dard banti ho, sab ki tareef karti ho,
khud dil mein ansoyon (dard) ka samandar liye baithi ho
auron ko na rone ki takeed karti ho

jinke khud ke dil mein dard hota hai,
unhe hi auron ke dard ka ehsaas hota hai,
jo sab ke saath hasta hai, woh akele mein rota hai
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«Reply #8 on: January 06, 2005, 10:17:46 AM »
Quote from: "sayak"
Ae dil kisi ki yaad me rona fizul hai
          Aasu bade anmol hai inhe khona fizul hai
          Rona to unke liye jo humpar nissar hai
          Unke liye kya rona jinke aashique hazzar hai.


Meen you hav written very nice. i think it is straight from heart isn't it?


Nice sayak.

"Rona fizul hota to ankho k liye ansoo na bante,
 zaroori nahi jo hampar nisar ho,ham us par nisar rehte,
 agar aisa hota to ham jis par nisar hain...
 . . .wo ham par kyun nahi nisar hain,
 ye to pyar mohabbat ki baat hai,
 kisi k ansoo kisi ka dard hain...,
 to kisi ki jaan kisi par nisar hai."
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«Reply #9 on: January 06, 2005, 11:34:01 AM »
Quote from: "sayak"
Ae dil kisi ki yaad me rona fizul hai
          Aasu bade anmol hai inhe khona fizul hai
          Rona to unke liye jo humpar nissar hai
          Unke liye kya rona jinke aashique hazzar hai.


Meen you hav written very nice. i think it is straight from heart isn't it?


thanx a lot!  :D

shayari woh jo dil ka ehesaas ho,
shayari woh jisme kahani koi khas ho!
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«Reply #10 on: January 06, 2005, 11:34:32 AM »
Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"
Nice lines meenaJi. Beautiful!


shukriya ji shukriya! :D
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«Reply #11 on: January 06, 2005, 11:37:25 AM »
Quote from: "nikki"
wao ...meena ji .....thats superb.....right from heart

sab ka dard banti ho, sab ki tareef karti ho,
khud dil mein ansoyon (dard) ka samandar liye baithi ho
auron ko na rone ki takeed karti ho

jinke khud ke dil mein dard hota hai,
unhe hi auron ke dard ka ehsaas hota hai,
jo sab ke saath hasta hai, woh akele mein rota hai


thanx nikki!  :D

dard ka rishta lekar hum guma karte hai gali gali,
ankhon ki deheleez bhi hai bighi bighi,
dukh to bohot hai is duniya me aye dost,
phir bhi hum chahate hai ke bagh me khil uthe har khali khali!

 :D
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«Reply #12 on: January 06, 2005, 11:38:12 AM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
Quote from: "sayak"
Ae dil kisi ki yaad me rona fizul hai
          Aasu bade anmol hai inhe khona fizul hai
          Rona to unke liye jo humpar nissar hai
          Unke liye kya rona jinke aashique hazzar hai.


Meen you hav written very nice. i think it is straight from heart isn't it?


Nice sayak.

"Rona fizul hota to ankho k liye ansoo na bante,
 zaroori nahi jo hampar nisar ho,ham us par nisar rehte,
 agar aisa hota to ham jis par nisar hain...
 . . .wo ham par kyun nahi nisar hain,
 ye to pyar mohabbat ki baat hai,
 kisi k ansoo kisi ka dard hain...,
 to kisi ki jaan kisi par nisar hai."


beautifilllllllllllllll nidhi!
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«Reply #13 on: January 06, 2005, 11:42:10 AM »
It was superbMeenaji.

Hogaya ek arsa teri bewafai ko mane hue,
Par zindagi me tere hone ka ehesaas aaj bhi hai!

Touching line......s.
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Meena
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«Reply #14 on: January 06, 2005, 11:43:53 AM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
It was superbMeenaji.

Hogaya ek arsa teri bewafai ko mane hue,
Par zindagi me tere hone ka ehesaas aaj bhi hai!

Touching line......s.


shukriya ji shukriya!

 :D
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