Chohti Si Umr.............AD

by anjaan dharkan on October 27, 2009, 05:49:29 PM
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Chohti si umr me kya kuch in kandoh ne saha hai,
Na himmat hai aur sehne ki, na aur sunne ko humme dum raha hai.

Sunay hain taane dunya k humne, kya kuch sub ne humko kaha hai,
Na zialti aur koi baqee hai, na situm ka koi boje bacha hai.

Raaton k andheron me, mumma daddy kee subkiyan, unka tadrapna gunja hai...
Na ki c ne madat ka haath badraya, na ki c ko ahchchai ka khayal suja hai,

Parehsaaniyon k pahadr toote humpe, kaisa kaisa humpe waqt padra hai,
Apne baegaano se lagte hain, dunya ne unme nafrat ka zehar bhara hai.

Azmaeshaen hain k ek k baad ek aati rahee,
Apna sub kohne se, dil pal pal dadra hai...
Kis Kis ki nazar se khudko mehfooz karaen, humne na jaane sub bachaane ki khaatir kya kya kara hai.

Palkaen, ahkiyaan tahk gayi- ashqon ka samandar in se baha hai,
Allah se, rub se, maalik se, binti ki sijdon me, shareer aksar unke aagay pihgla hai,

Waqt-e- sukoon kareeb sa ub dihkta hai, magar,
Hai jhoota khwaab wo, humme jo jo aaj tak sachcha laga hai!!

Please, sub azeezon, muhje aur mere "unko" duwaon me yaad rahkkiyega!
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«Reply #1 on: October 27, 2009, 08:19:35 PM »
aaww bahut accha likha hai. Haan choti si umr mein se jo taklif sehte hai usko bahut accha bayan kiya hai.

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Azmaeshaen hain k ek k baad ek aati rahee,
Apna sub kohne se, dil pal pal dadra hai...
Kis Kis ki nazar se khudko mehfooz karaen, humne na jaane sub bachaane ki khaatir kya kya kara hai.

Padkar dil mera pigal sa gaya sidr. God bless you
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«Reply #2 on: October 27, 2009, 08:29:46 PM »
aaww bahut accha likha hai. Haan choti si umr mein se jo taklif sehte hai usko bahut accha bayan kiya hai.

Padkar dil mera pigal sa gaya sidr. God bless you

thank you didi....

dil k ehsaas hain
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«Reply #3 on: October 28, 2009, 04:27:23 AM »
Bahut bahut khoob Sidraah ji,really touched ,marvelous creation,excellent
God bless you and Azeem bhai,aap dono sada khush raho. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause love4 love9
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«Reply #4 on: October 28, 2009, 09:01:44 AM »
Bahut bahut khoob Sidraah ji,really touched ,marvelous creation,excellent
God bless you and Azeem bhai,aap dono sada khush raho. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause love4 love9


Ameen, bass didi, humme duwaaon k khazaane chahiye!
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«Reply #5 on: October 28, 2009, 10:16:06 AM »
bahut achche sidra bahut achche.......aajkal waqt ka mohtaaj ho gaya isliye yo par aa nahin pa raha....
bahut bahut khoob likha hai tumne aur hum sabki duayein toh hamesha tum dono k saath hi hain

take care god bless u

dard na ho toh dil ko khushi ka pata na aaye
hansi bhali lage jab ashq aankhon main na aaye
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«Reply #6 on: October 28, 2009, 10:51:38 AM »
CHOTI SI UMAR HAI,NAAZUK UMAR HAI
BAHUT KATIN DAGAR HAI
YEH MAALIK HAR WAQAT KHAYAL RAKHNA MERA
MERI UMAR SE BADA BHOJ, MERA SAFAR HAI..
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«Reply #7 on: October 28, 2009, 11:34:19 AM »
Bahut bahut khoob Cara ji ,wonderful lines. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: October 28, 2009, 05:42:33 PM »
bahut achche sidra bahut achche.......aajkal waqt ka mohtaaj ho gaya isliye yo par aa nahin pa raha....
bahut bahut khoob likha hai tumne aur hum sabki duayein toh hamesha tum dono k saath hi hain

take care god bless u

dard na ho toh dil ko khushi ka pata na aaye
hansi bhali lage jab ashq aankhon main na aaye

thank you bhaijaan....

i have missed your comments...
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«Reply #9 on: October 28, 2009, 05:42:45 PM »
CHOTI SI UMAR HAI,NAAZUK UMAR HAI
BAHUT KATIN DAGAR HAI
YEH MAALIK HAR WAQAT KHAYAL RAKHNA MERA
MERI UMAR SE BADA BHOJ, MERA SAFAR HAI..

nice lines...
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«Reply #10 on: October 28, 2009, 08:06:18 PM »
Nice And Excellent and Hum duaa krenge ki khuda aappe mehrbaan ho jaye Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: October 28, 2009, 10:37:36 PM »
Nice And Excellent and Hum duaa krenge ki khuda aappe mehrbaan ho jaye Applause Applause Applause

bahot dhanyavaad janaab
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«Reply #12 on: October 29, 2009, 06:06:11 PM »
Karam Maangta Hooon, Ataa Maangta Hooon,.
Elaahi Main Tujhse Duaa Maanta Hooon,.

Ya Rab Please Sidra Ki Har Pareshaani KO Door Kar De,.
Uska Aanchal Khaali Hai, Unme Khushiyaan Bhar De,.

Ya Rab Uski Har Chaahat, Har Tamanna Manzoor Kar De,.
Ya Rab Meri Jaan, Ko Har Gham Har Dukh Se Door Kar De,.

Ya Rab Mumma Daddy Ke Dukhon Ka Bojj Kam Kar De,.
Ya Rab Sidra Ki Family Par Reham Kar De,.

Ya Rab Bohat Seh Liye Usne,Choti Si Umar Mein,.
Ab Sukoon Baksh De, Uski Zindagi Ke Safar Mein,.

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Ya Rabbul Aalameen,.

Please Doston Sab Dua Karo.

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