Chup reh kar woh hame rula gaye.

by deepika_divya on November 29, 2007, 10:11:50 AM
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Mile the ak sadion baad hum unse
  Na koi sikhwa na Gila thi
Mile the do ajanabiyon ki tarah hum
  Kehne ko kai baat dil mea dabi thi

Chalne pade the usse raha mea
   Jahan par phir milen ki umeed na thi
Ajeeb se betabi thi man mea
   Musrahte rahe , Sirf  lafzo ki kami thi

Pucha unse hamare bare mea
  Jiski ab tak unhone kabar talak na li thi
Humne bhi muskara ke jawab diya
   Sab kuch tha mere pass bas tumhari kami thi

woh bhi muskara diye kuch na kaha unhone
    Ankho mea tho unke bhi nami thi
Humne bhi uss  vakt chup rehna behtar samja
   Kyunki jakmo ki na unke pass na mere pass kami thi

Yaad kiya kuch hasi k palo ko humne
  Dard ki ehsaas mea meeti khushi ki jalak basi thi
Pucha unke bavishaye k bare mea tho
  Tho unki nazre mujhse nazre chura gai thi
   
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usmancaf
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«Reply #1 on: November 29, 2007, 12:50:49 PM »
tanhaa ishq ke khwaab na bun
kabhi hamari baat bhi sun

thora gham bhi uthaa pyaare
phool chune hain khaar bhi chun

sukh ki neendein sone wale
marhoomi ke raag bhi sun

Qitaa

tanhaii mein teri yaad
jaise ek sureeli dhun
jaise chaand ki thandi lau
jaise kirnon ki kun mun
jaise jal-parioN ka taaj
jaise paayal ki chhun chuun
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #2 on: November 30, 2007, 03:48:22 AM »
bahoot khoob Usmaan ji.. Welcome to YOindia.. Keep writing Lyk this...
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usmancaf
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«Reply #3 on: December 01, 2007, 10:36:00 AM »
Thanks
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muskan_bye
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«Reply #4 on: December 01, 2007, 05:11:08 PM »
very good "deepika ji" well done and "usman ji" well done and keep it up..........

aapne bhi chup rahekar sab kuch likh diya
apne dil ka haal suna diya..............

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~"Khushboo"~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #5 on: December 04, 2007, 04:22:28 AM »
Thank u muskaan..
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #6 on: December 04, 2007, 04:51:33 AM »
Really Liked it...Gud one...Keep it up in a Flow..!!
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #7 on: December 04, 2007, 12:14:26 PM »
Thank u so much Gaurav.
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suffi
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«Reply #8 on: December 07, 2007, 11:41:57 AM »
hello divya suffi is here

      phoolo sang hotte hai kante
      jin ko aapnana padta hai
      kucch dard hotte hai esse
      jin ko dil m chupana padta hai

rahha nahi koyyi bhi aassa
phir bhi un rasto pe janna padta hai
manjile to bahut hai rasto m
per mussfiro ko tikhana kahha milta hai

divya tum bahut lagan s kaam karti ho tum  m janun hai maine dekha tumhara likha huua . so issliyya soccha tumhe commentes de doo vaise divya mujhe amit suffi kehte hai or meri do ktabe bhi market m mill jayye ge . pehli yaade or dusari betiya anmol . any way keep it up ur shayari god blss you take care .

amit suffi

suffi_amit @yahoo.co.in
 
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«Reply #9 on: December 07, 2007, 03:51:22 PM »
Quote from: deepika_divya on November 29, 2007, 10:11:50 AM
Mile the ak sadion baad hum unse
  Na koi sikhwa na Gila thi
Mile the do ajanabiyon ki tarah hum
  Kehne ko kai baat dil mea dabi thi

Chalne pade the usse raha mea
   Jahan par phir milen ki umeed na thi
Ajeeb se betabi thi man mea
   Musrahte rahe , Sirf  lafzo ki kami thi

Pucha unse hamare bare mea
  Jiski ab tak unhone kabar talak na li thi
Humne bhi muskara ke jawab diya
   Sab kuch tha mere pass bas tumhari kami thi

woh bhi muskara diye kuch na kaha unhone
    Ankho mea tho unke bhi nami thi
Humne bhi uss  vakt chup rehna behtar samja
   Kyunki jakmo ki na unke pass na mere pass kami thi

Yaad kiya kuch hasi k palo ko humne
  Dard ki ehsaas mea meeti khushi ki jalak basi thi
Pucha unke bavishaye k bare mea tho
  Tho unki nazre mujhse nazre chura gai thi
  


BAHUT KHOOB DEEPIKA..BEHTEREEN LIKHA HAI AAPNE..
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«Reply #10 on: December 07, 2007, 04:26:05 PM »
AJIB LAGTI HAI YEH SHAAM KABHI-KABHI
ZINDAGI LAGTI HAI YEH BEJAAN KABHI-KABHI..

HONTON TAK AA JAATI HAI BAAT PAR
KUCH KEH NAHI PAATA
SAWAALO KI BHEED MEIN ULAJ SA JATA HOON,
JO SAANS CHALTI HAI,
WOH BI LAGTI HAI MEHMAAN KABHI-KABHI..

KHWAISH HAI YEH MERI KE
ZINDAGI BAR MAIN TUJHE DEKHTA RAHOON,
JAANTA HOON KE,KHWAISH BHI HOTI HAI
MUKAMBAL IS JAHAN MEIN KABHI-KABHI..

SAMAJ AAYE AAPKO,
TO KABHI HUMEIN BHI BATANA
KYON KARTI HAI YAADEIN PARESHAAN KABHI-KABHI..

IN AANSUO KO SAMBHAL KAR RAKHNA ZINDAGI BAR,
YEH AANSU BHI TANHAI MEIN SUNAYENGE,
BEETE HUE WAQT KI DASTAAN KABHI-KABHI
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«Reply #11 on: December 08, 2007, 01:34:18 AM »
Quote from: deepika_divya on November 29, 2007, 10:11:50 AM
Mile the ak sadion baad hum unse
  Na koi sikhwa na Gila thi
Mile the do ajanabiyon ki tarah hum
  Kehne ko kai baat dil mea dabi thi

Chalne pade the usse raha mea
   Jahan par phir milen ki umeed na thi
Ajeeb se betabi thi man mea
   Musrahte rahe , Sirf  lafzo ki kami thi

Pucha unse hamare bare mea
  Jiski ab tak unhone kabar talak na li thi
Humne bhi muskara ke jawab diya
   Sab kuch tha mere pass bas tumhari kami thi

woh bhi muskara diye kuch na kaha unhone
    Ankho mea tho unke bhi nami thi
Humne bhi uss  vakt chup rehna behtar samja
   Kyunki jakmo ki na unke pass na mere pass kami thi

Yaad kiya kuch hasi k palo ko humne
  Dard ki ehsaas mea meeti khushi ki jalak basi thi
Pucha unke bavishaye k bare mea tho
  Tho unki nazre mujhse nazre chura gai thi
  

Quote from: usmancaf on November 29, 2007, 12:50:49 PM
tanhaa ishq ke khwaab na bun
kabhi hamari baat bhi sun

thora gham bhi uthaa pyaare
phool chune hain khaar bhi chun

sukh ki neendein sone wale
marhoomi ke raag bhi sun

Qitaa

tanhaii mein teri yaad
jaise ek sureeli dhun
jaise chaand ki thandi lau
jaise kirnon ki kun mun
jaise jal-parioN ka taaj
jaise paayal ki chhun chuun

Wah wah divya & Usman kya baath hai... bahut khoob
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Najaf ali khan
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«Reply #12 on: December 08, 2007, 12:51:12 PM »
geele kagaz ki tarah,apni to zindagi thehri
koi likhta bhi nahi,koi jalata bhi nahi........................
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Sahiba Zehra
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«Reply #13 on: December 08, 2007, 01:05:39 PM »
wah najaf ali ji
bohot hi umda

bohot gehri baat kahi !
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tushar_4u_im
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«Reply #14 on: December 08, 2007, 01:25:47 PM »
chup reh kar wo humko rula gaye....
chand lamho me hume kai sapne dikhane k baad ...
kuch pal zindgi k guzar jane k baad....
wo humara sath nibhane k baad....
humare zakhmo ko aapne dil tak pahuchane k baad...

aakho hi aankho me muskura gaye ...
chup reh kar wo humko rula gaye....


hum sochte rahe k kaun the wo...
hum poochte rahe sabse k kaun hai wo....
wo hume aapna naam dheere se bata gaye...

chup reh kar wo humko rula gaye....
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