Chupke Chupke....

by Naya_Daur on November 30, 2006, 05:03:51 PM
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Subha se Sham, Sham se subha hone ko aayi hai
Tere Intezar mein JEET ne har ghadi beetayi hai

naa tu aayi,naa tera koi Paigam aaya abhi tak
bata de mujhe,maine kis baat ki sajja payi hai

ankhein hain laal,ashQon ki barasat hai
basant mein kayun,Sard ritu ki maar hai

Chupke chupke kisi kone mein sisak leinge hum
teri khamoshi ki lehar ne,atama tak aaj jalai hai
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«Reply #1 on: November 30, 2006, 05:36:32 PM »
very nice jeet bhai...........

ummido ka meri honslaa bikharne laga hai
dil mai dard chupke se phir ubharne laga hai

mud gayi hai zindagi bhi manzil ke karib aakar
kuch nayi raaho pe kaafila theharne laga hai  

aankhe hai ashko se bhari,sansein ruki hui hai
labo pe muskuarhat ka naqab siharne laga hai

kya shaam ki hai bela ,roshniya subah ki kya
mera to har din andhero mai gujarne laga hai

........................@fahi@..........................
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Talat
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«Reply #2 on: November 30, 2006, 07:03:57 PM »
Bohot khoob Jeet.....!! Nice one Fahi !!
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Pooja
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«Reply #3 on: November 30, 2006, 08:53:31 PM »
wah kay abaat hai, bahoot dil se likh rahe hai app.... good job... good one fahi ji.. bahoot hi acha likh ahai apne..
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«Reply #4 on: November 30, 2006, 09:21:21 PM »
nice jeet ji....apki poems kafi bohot achi hoti hai.. kep it up!!!

nice fahi ji as well

 :D
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #5 on: December 17, 2006, 12:48:31 AM »
Thanks n nice reply fahi... keep going

thanks again Talat

thanks pooja... aapko mera likha pasand aa hi jata Usual Smile thanks again for always encouraging n supporting

n also thanks Meena ji... its always encouraging when someone with esteemed hold over poetry compliments poet like me Usual Smile
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Tosha
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«Reply #6 on: December 17, 2006, 01:00:26 AM »
very nice jeet!!
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gr_ajimal
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HI
«Reply #7 on: December 17, 2006, 11:49:20 AM »
:cry: Oh Sochde Rahe Khush Ha Assin,

Par Assi Tut K Chooro-Chur ho gaye,

Sanu Pyaar Karan di Mili 'SAZA',

Te Oh Maar K Sanu "BEKASOOR" Ho Gaye..... :cry:
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«Reply #8 on: December 23, 2006, 03:24:27 PM »
Quote from: "burniing_desiires"
Thanks n nice reply fahi... keep going

thanks again Talat

thanks pooja... aapko mera likha pasand aa hi jata Usual Smile thanks again for always encouraging n supporting

n also thanks Meena ji... its always encouraging when someone with esteemed hold over poetry compliments poet like me Usual Smile



aisi ko baat nahin hai, mai kaunsa koi shayar hoon. par jo mujhe acha lagta hai mai bata deti hoon.

Usual Smile
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