~~~~~Dard Ke Bedaag Daaman Mein~~~~~..... {Angel}

by angel4u on March 21, 2009, 06:03:04 AM
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Milte Hai Aksar Aansuon Ke Keemti Tohfe Kuch Rishte Nibhaane Mein,
Jhalakti Hai Laashein Ummeedon Ki Aankhon Ki Tasveeron Mein,

Ghar Ki Raahon Se Door Safar Karte Hue Nikal To Aate Hai Log,
Shaam Hote Hi Jala Lete Hai Khwaab Roshni Ki Chahaton Mein,

Ye Kyon Gulaab Ki Shaakhon Pe Shabnam Nahi Sambhalti Aajkal,
Hansti Chehekti Hui Kaliyan Kyon Gumsum Hai Kisiki Yaad Mein,

Ek Khayal Se Aksar Uth Jaate Hai Raaton Mein Aajkal,
Ke Kahin Gunj Na Uthe Dard Ki Siskiyaan Veerano Mein,

Usine Hi Jagamagayi Andheron Mein Ek Kiran Khushiyon Ki,
Kyun Sametta Nahi Wo Aaj Apne Dard Ke Be-Daag Daaman Mein...
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«Reply #1 on: March 21, 2009, 07:21:55 AM »
Good work
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angel4u
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«Reply #2 on: March 21, 2009, 07:32:54 AM »
Thanks Tousif
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #3 on: March 21, 2009, 08:33:37 AM »
Bada bemaza sa dard tera nazar aata hain
Door door tak nahi nam GHAYEL ka nazar aata hain
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«Reply #4 on: March 21, 2009, 02:35:26 PM »
dard koi numayish nahi hai jo maze ke liye bayan kiya jaaye,
tadapti hai rooh khud ka naam tak bhool jaati hai aankhein...
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«Reply #5 on: March 21, 2009, 05:25:15 PM »
Bohat Avhche Huzaina Sis,.
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«Reply #6 on: March 21, 2009, 05:33:21 PM »
Bahut khoob dear Hasina  Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: March 21, 2009, 05:35:08 PM »
Bohat Avhche Huzaina Sis,.

Thanks a lot Azeem...
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«Reply #8 on: March 21, 2009, 05:35:29 PM »
Bahut khoob dear Hasina  Applause Applause

Thanks Roja...
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«Reply #9 on: March 21, 2009, 06:22:26 PM »
bebas hai, khamosh rehke humne har ilzaam liya,
sajdon me khuda ke baad tera hi naam liya,

de do panaah inhe tum ab inhe mukammal kar do,
mere aansuone tera paak daaman thaam liya...
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«Reply #10 on: March 21, 2009, 06:36:50 PM »
"Ghar Ki Raahon Se Door Safar Karte Hue Nikal To Aate Hai Log
Shaam Hote Hi Jala Lete Hai Khwaab Roshni ki Chahaton Mein"

Bahut Bahut Khoob Angel..Waise To Iss Poetry Ka Har Ek Alfaaz,Har ek line  Kaabil-e-taarif Hai par Iss Sher Mein Bahut Gehrai Nazar Aai Hai..Bahut Khoob. Applause Applause Applause  Applause
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«Reply #11 on: March 21, 2009, 06:41:37 PM »
"Ghar Ki Raahon Se Door Safar Karte Hue Nikal To Aate Hai Log
Shaam Hote Hi Jala Lete Hai Khwaab Roshni ki Chahaton Mein"

Bahut Bahut Khoob Angel..Waise To Iss Poetry Ka Har Ek Alfaaz,Har ek line  Kaabil-e-taarif Hai par Iss Sher Mein Bahut Gehrai Nazar Aai Hai..Bahut Khoob. Applause Applause Applause  Applause


wah bahut khoob Khwaish

Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #12 on: March 22, 2009, 04:46:36 AM »
"Ghar Ki Raahon Se Door Safar Karte Hue Nikal To Aate Hai Log
Shaam Hote Hi Jala Lete Hai Khwaab Roshni ki Chahaton Mein"

Bahut Bahut Khoob Angel..Waise To Iss Poetry Ka Har Ek Alfaaz,Har ek line  Kaabil-e-taarif Hai par Iss Sher Mein Bahut Gehrai Nazar Aai Hai..Bahut Khoob. Applause Applause Applause  Applause


Bahut shukriya khwaish ji...

achha laga aapke comments padhke... Usual Smile
its always inspiriting to get comments from you..

Thanks once again...  angel11 icon_flower
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