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by zindagi_kal_ho_na_ho on May 07, 2004, 07:36:07 PM
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Gahar se hum chal diye  manzil ki talaash mein ,
Raho mein hum chalte rahe ,
Kushi pane k khwaab mein,
Choot khakar bhi hum na ruke  -  manzil pane k liye ,
Raho mein bhecha kaato per bhi hum chalte rahe ,
 
Per jab waqat aaye manzil pane ka,
Per jab waqat aaya manzil pane ka ,
tab hum ne aye dekha mehboob ko kisse aur ki bhaho mein .....
 :cry:
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«Reply #1 on: May 08, 2004, 02:56:48 AM »
tumhari yaad hi to hai jo ek pal main humen rula deti hai
tumhari yaad hi to hai jo pal main tumhen apane paas bula deti hain
tumhari yaad hi to hai hamare jine ka jariya
tumhari yaad hi to hai jo hamare har dard ko bhula deti hai
chehare pe to hamare bhi the mushkaraht ke tabassum
magar tumhari yaad hi to hain jo mere mushkarahat ko chura deti hain
palken band karate hain yaad main tumhare to didaar tumhara ho hi jata
magar tumhari yaad hi to hai jo mere palkon se aanshu gira deti hain

YE DOSHT HUM TUMHEN HI YAAD KARATE HAI  AUR KARATE RAHENGE JAB TAK CHAND SAASHEN PAAS HAI
WELL YOUR POETRY AND YOUR  WRITEING STYLE IS VERY GOOD AND THANKS FOR ENCOURAGE & REPLYING US
AUR DUWA KARATA HOO KI APAKO MANZIL BAHUT JALAD MILE
PLEASE MAIL ME AT
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take care sameer
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«Reply #2 on: May 08, 2004, 05:43:27 AM »
yaado ka hi sahara hai ,
ab yaadein hi mere jine ka bhahana hai .
chahe tera didar na ho per kabhi to tera sahara ho,
kushiyo ka yeh kabhi absana ho !
ghamo ka ghana anhera chaya ho,
 per bas tere ek muskaan ka sahara ho ,
ki kushi ka ek mauka to do .
bas teri yaad he yaad ho ,
aap per hum kurban ho.
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«Reply #3 on: June 30, 2004, 10:19:38 AM »
Quote from: "zindagi_kal_ho_na_ho"
yaado ka hi sahara hai ,
ab yaadein hi mere jine ka bhahana hai .
chahe tera didar na ho per kabhi to tera sahara ho,
kushiyo ka yeh kabhi absana ho !
ghamo ka ghana anhera chaya ho,
 per bas tere ek muskaan ka sahara ho ,
ki kushi ka ek mauka to do .
bas teri yaad he yaad ho ,
aap per hum kurban ho.


you r shairy is very good
aap aise hi likhe aur hum log padein
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«Reply #4 on: June 30, 2004, 10:43:18 AM »
Hmm. Simran.. I am giving you thank from their behalf...

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you r shairy is very good
aap aise hi likhe aur hum log padein


Well you can also create your own creation and then we will also tell your thoughts abt ur work !

You are most welcome.
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«Reply #5 on: July 01, 2004, 01:42:26 PM »
ty friends   , i am happy to see new members here & i welcome u simran rizvi & all members ty
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