Dastaan Hamari

by Preet.Dehlvi on February 03, 2006, 09:08:45 AM
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Dhoop zindagi ki thi
to tumhe saath paya.
Choona chaha tumhe
to haath kuch na aaya.
Raat ke andheron ne ghera jab
to tumne bhi apna daman chudaya.
Pal pal lamha lamha
tumhari bewafai ne bahut rulaya.
Zamane se choten khai hain bahut
zamane ne bhi humhe khoob aazmaya.
Har khushi ke badle ashq diye
har muskurahat ko ik karz banaya.
Ek tumse hi umeed lagaye baithe the Preet
Ek tumhe hi tha apna humdard banaya.
Jana kahan tha lekin
ki bewafai kar jayega humse,
kabhi hamara apna hi saaya.
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«Reply #1 on: February 03, 2006, 11:17:15 PM »
wonderful preet ji...ek aur bohot achi poem likhi apne!
keep writing!

 :D
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Preet.Dehlvi
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«Reply #2 on: February 06, 2006, 03:56:30 AM »
Thankyou Meenaji.
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Preet.Dehlvi
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«Reply #3 on: February 07, 2006, 08:01:45 AM »
Na bastiyan aabad chaihye
na sikkon ki tadad chahiye,
Dil mein basna chahta hun aapke
Is shayar gumnaam ko
bas aapki dad chahiye.
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«Reply #4 on: February 07, 2006, 04:28:15 PM »
nice preet ji..
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«Reply #5 on: February 10, 2006, 01:17:38 AM »
Quote from: "Preet.Dehlvi"
Na bastiyan aabad chaihye
na sikkon ki tadad chahiye,
Dil mein basna chahta hun aapke
Is shayar gumnaam ko
bas aapki dad chahiye.


 :D

meri dad kabool kijiye sache dil se,
shayari ka muqabla kijiye kisi kabil se!

 :D
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«Reply #6 on: February 11, 2006, 10:59:26 PM »
Wah Preet ji,bohat khoob likha hai Usual Smile .
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