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Hai koi dard main dooba hua
koi nashe main choor hai
kissii ko talaash hai kissii kii
toh koi kissiii se door hai
chaha tha jisko woh sabse alag
sabse alag woh hoor hai
zakhm hota toh bhar jata
tune diya hai jo nasoor hai
hai judaai naseeb main
mohabbat ka ye dastoor hai
main kehta hoon oose chhod do
main hoon mujrim woh beqasoor hai
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«Reply #1 on: February 04, 2007, 09:20:01 PM » |
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Wah !! bohot khoob Salil !!
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«Reply #2 on: February 04, 2007, 10:10:30 PM » |
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thnks talat ................aap bahut dino se kucch naya nahi likh rahi hai ....................
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«Reply #3 on: February 04, 2007, 10:37:30 PM » |
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likha to hai...par tumne dekha hi nai  |
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«Reply #4 on: February 04, 2007, 10:43:55 PM » |
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abhi dekhte hain ..................humse galti kahan huyi
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«Reply #5 on: February 04, 2007, 11:01:02 PM » |
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bahot khoob Salil.............
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«Reply #6 on: February 04, 2007, 11:48:19 PM » |
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shukriya waheed bhai ..............
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«Reply #7 on: February 05, 2007, 11:18:57 AM » |
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Good Sahil
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«Reply #8 on: February 05, 2007, 01:26:45 PM » |
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thnks paani ............
dard ko dhhoondte phirte thay is jahan main
mohabbat karke dekhi sirf dard hi mila hai
rukti nahi hai safar phir bhi yeh zindgi ka
aashiqon kii maut se banta ye silsila hai
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«Reply #9 on: February 05, 2007, 03:45:21 PM » |
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Hai koi dard main dooba hua
koi nashe main choor hai
kissii ko talaash hai kissii kii
toh koi kissiii se door hai
chaha tha jisko woh sabse alag
sabse alag woh hoor hai
zakhm hota toh bhar jata
tune diya hai jo nasoor hai
hai judaai naseeb main
mohabbat ka ye dastoor hai
main kehta hoon oose chhod do
main hoon mujrim woh beqasoor hai
Waah Waah... Bahut Khoob Salil... Good Sailing... :D |
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«Reply #10 on: February 05, 2007, 03:56:05 PM » |
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thnks shikha
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«Reply #11 on: August 16, 2008, 10:58:56 AM » |
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har taraf chhayi huyi jab ishq kii khumaari thi
dekha hua tha humne bikharte huye oonko kinhe ishq kii bimaari thi
kar li hai tauba ishq se ab dard se ho gayi apni yaari hai
mar gaye hain ishq main magar saansein badstoor zaari hain
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«Reply #12 on: August 16, 2008, 06:38:51 PM » |
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Hai koi dard main dooba hua
koi nashe main choor hai
kissii ko talaash hai kissii kii
toh koi kissiii se door hai
chaha tha jisko woh sabse alag
sabse alag woh hoor hai
zakhm hota toh bhar jata
tune diya hai jo nasoor hai
hai judaai naseeb main
mohabbat ka ye dastoor hai
main kehta hoon oose chhod do
main hoon mujrim woh beqasoor hai
Wonderful... |
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«Reply #13 on: August 17, 2008, 12:09:38 PM » |
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thnks angel its gr8 to see u after a lng time a poem for u
paani mein dekh kar ek aks jab main palta toh usko wahan paaya tha
shayad woh thi sehmi huyi ya parda haya ka chhaya tha
bheegi huyi laton se oosne boondon ko dhalkaya tha
hum mar mite thay oos hoor par jo karishma ban kar aaya tha
chala kuch din mohabbat ka daur phir ek aisa waqt bhi aaya tha
jo saaya ban k rehta tha woh kohre sa kumhalaya tha
aakhri baar jab dekha oose khanjar le k aaya tha
qatl kar k ro ootha woh mera shayad oose aaj mujhpe pyaar aaya tha
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thnks angel its gr8 to see u after a lng time a poem for u
paani mein dekh kar ek aks jab main palta toh usko wahan paaya tha
shayad woh thi sehmi huyi ya parda haya ka chhaya tha
bheegi huyi laton se oosne boondon ko dhalkaya tha
hum mar mite thay oos hoor par jo karishma ban kar aaya tha
chala kuch din mohabbat ka daur phir ek aisa waqt bhi aaya tha
jo saaya ban k rehta tha woh kohre sa kumhalaya tha
aakhri baar jab dekha oose khanjar le k aaya tha
qatl kar k ro ootha woh mera shayad oose aaj mujhpe pyaar aaya tha
Really kya kahoon. i was lost reading this poem. after such a long time read such a beautiful poem... Wonderful... |
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