***Deewar***

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«Reply #30 on: January 29, 2005, 02:40:05 PM »
very well both of u meena & thycreator ji.

har sham dafan hote hain kuch armaan
har subah ummeedon ki fasal khadi hoti hai.
har kabr pe ugta hai koi nanha sa paudha
har deewar me koi khidki khuli hoti hai.

ghalib.
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«Reply #31 on: January 29, 2005, 02:40:46 PM »
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wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh brillientttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Thanx :oops:
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«Reply #32 on: January 29, 2005, 02:43:26 PM »
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very well both of you meena & thycreator ji.

har sham dafan hote hain kuch armaan
har subah ummeedon ki fasal khadi hoti hai.
har kabr pe ugta hai koi nanha sa paudha
har deewar me koi khidki khuli hoti hai.

ghalib.


beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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«Reply #33 on: January 29, 2005, 02:47:42 PM »
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very well both of you meena & thycreator ji.

har sham dafan hote hain kuch armaan
har subah ummeedon ki fasal khadi hoti hai.
har kabr pe ugta hai koi nanha sa paudha
har deewar me koi khidki khuli hoti hai.

ghalib.


Gud one TDTS

Ummeed pe hi toh ye dunia hai chal rahi,
Warna khak e jameen kar diya kuch khaksaro ne..
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«Reply #34 on: January 29, 2005, 02:54:08 PM »
very nice creator ji!

kuch to majbooriaan unki bhi rahi hongi
yun he koi bewafa nahi hota.          nm
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«Reply #35 on: January 29, 2005, 03:09:16 PM »
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very nice creator ji!

kuch to majbooriaan unki bhi rahi hongi
yun he koi bewafa nahi hota.          nm


Thanx TDTS

Sahi kaha apne,
Bewafa ko bewafa kehti hai har mod pe dunia,
Kissi ne bhi toh na jhaka kabhi dil mein uske..
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«Reply #36 on: January 29, 2005, 03:09:39 PM »
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Gud one Meena ji,

Wo humse kehte hai ki deewaron ne unhe humse bacha rakha hai,
Unhe koi ye bataye ki unhone humpe kya sitam dha rakha hai,
Unse hum dur hi  rehte toh kuch gila bhi na hota uska,
Wo mere pas hai par phir bhi kyu matam mana rakha hai...

Kyu soniyo???


kya baat hai creatore ji nice answer

good meena ji pandit ji and tanha ji
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«Reply #37 on: January 29, 2005, 03:12:25 PM »
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Gud one Meena ji,

Wo humse kehte hai ki deewaron ne unhe humse bacha rakha hai,
Unhe koi ye bataye ki unhone humpe kya sitam dha rakha hai,
Unse hum dur hi  rehte toh kuch gila bhi na hota uska,
Wo mere pas hai par phir bhi kyu matam mana rakha hai...

Kyu soniyo???


kya baat hai creatore ji nice answer

good meena ji pandit ji and tanha ji


Thanx Sandhaya ji
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«Reply #38 on: January 29, 2005, 03:20:23 PM »
Hui hum se ye nadani
Kay teri mehfil mein aah bethay
Ho kay zameen ki khakh
Asman se dil lega bethay
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«Reply #39 on: January 29, 2005, 04:17:32 PM »
thanx sandhaya ji!

bohot ache creator ji and tanha ji!

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«Reply #40 on: January 29, 2005, 06:40:56 PM »
'unhe apne hi bhoole hue sitam yaad aaye
 jab gair ne tadpaya to hum yaad aaye"
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«Reply #41 on: January 29, 2005, 07:09:31 PM »
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Gud one Meena ji,

Wo humse kehte hai ki deewaron ne unhe humse bacha rakha hai,
Unhe koi ye bataye ki unhone humpe kya sitam dha rakha hai,
Unse hum dur hi  rehte toh kuch gila bhi na hota uska,
Wo mere pas hai par phir bhi kyu matam mana rakha hai...

Kyu soniyo???


kya baat hai creatore ji nice answer

good meena ji pandit ji and tanha ji


thanx sandhyaji... :oops:
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«Reply #42 on: January 30, 2005, 03:43:17 PM »
wow everyone Shocked meena,pandit,amit,sandhaya........excellent.
Very nice starting meena :hug:
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«Reply #43 on: January 30, 2005, 03:44:13 PM »
thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx nidhiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!

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«Reply #44 on: January 30, 2005, 03:56:23 PM »
u r always welcome that too with a sweet hug :hug: Winking
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