***Deewar***

by Meena on January 27, 2005, 05:37:25 PM
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Meena
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Ajeeb sawal uthe hai humari larkarati hui chal ke upar,
Kaise batayen hum ke paon ke niche sholon ko chupa rakha hai...

Dikhayenge nahin kabhi in taza chalon ko hum,
Yeh to woh gum hai jine seense se laga rakha hai...

Kaise girayen un deewaron ko jo hai dil ke aas pas,
Inhone hi to is bedard duniya se ab tak bacha rakha hai...

Kaise batlaye hum apne gum ki paidasih ko aaj,
Ke zuban ko mile dhokon ne gunga bana rakha hai...

Chod jate hai humsafar bhi rast me saath apna,
Jo apne raston ko tanha chupi se saja rakha hai...

Gum ke badal rehte nahin, kushiyon ki kirne zaroor milengi,
In jhoote waadon se kismat ne hume latka rakha hai...
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Pooja
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«Reply #1 on: January 27, 2005, 05:55:53 PM »
wah!!!!
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Meena
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«Reply #2 on: January 27, 2005, 05:57:14 PM »
shukriya ji shukriya!!

 :D
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HumTum
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«Reply #3 on: January 28, 2005, 12:44:20 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Ajeeb sawal uthe hai humari larkarati hui chal ke upar,
Kaise batayen hum ke paon ke niche sholon ko chupa rakha hai...

Dikhayenge nahin kabhi in taza chalon ko hum,
Yeh to woh gum hai jine seense se laga rakha hai...

Kaise girayen un deewaron ko jo hai dil ke aas pas,
Inhone hi to is bedard duniya se ab tak bacha rakha hai...

Kaise batlaye hum apne gum ki paidasih ko aaj,
Ke zuban ko mile dhokon ne gunga bana rakha hai...

Chod jate hai humsafar bhi rast me saath apna,
Jo apne raston ko tanha chupi se saja rakha hai...

Gum ke badal rehte nahin, kushiyon ki kirne zaroor milengi,
In jhoote waadon se kismat ne hume latka rakha hai...




wah meena ji ....... it's just mindblowing. don't have any words to explain.... aap ki is kalam ko ped ker aur yaad kissi ko ker le kuch likhne ki himmat ki hai. shayad aap oko pasand aaye...

ashq-e-nazar se jhakhm-e-dil ko bhar leNge..
inam-e-ishq se wo gham-e-dastaan bhar leNge...

ujale se nikal ja phunche gumnaam andhere maiN..
jaam-e-jehar se roshan dar-e-kabristan ko kar leNge...

tujhko bhula doouN ye kash munkin hota mere liye...
nakabil-e-faramosh pal rukhsati-e-paigam ko kar leNge...


*na bhoolne wala ** aakhiri khat...


yadoN ke gali main bikta dikh raha "HumTum"...
keemat-e-wafa laga ghayal dil-o-jaan ko kar leNge...

phir karegi ruswa mere jazbaat-e-dil ko jamane main...
luta gairat-e-nazar, khuda eitbaar-e-yaar ko kar leNge...


HumTum
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Meena
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«Reply #4 on: January 28, 2005, 02:53:27 PM »
wowwwwwww nicee!!

thanx hum tum ji!

 :D
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pandit
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«Reply #5 on: January 28, 2005, 02:59:40 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Ajeeb sawal uthe hai humari larkarati hui chal ke upar,
Kaise batayen hum ke paon ke niche sholon ko chupa rakha hai...

Dikhayenge nahin kabhi in taza chalon ko hum,
Yeh to woh gum hai jine seense se laga rakha hai...

Kaise girayen un deewaron ko jo hai dil ke aas pas,
Inhone hi to is bedard duniya se ab tak bacha rakha hai...

Kaise batlaye hum apne gum ki paidasih ko aaj,
Ke zuban ko mile dhokon ne gunga bana rakha hai...

Chod jate hai humsafar bhi rast me saath apna,
Jo apne raston ko tanha chupi se saja rakha hai...

Gum ke badal rehte nahin, kushiyon ki kirne zaroor milengi,
In jhoote waadon se kismat ne hume latka rakha hai...



wah nice one  meena ji....
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pandit
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«Reply #6 on: January 28, 2005, 03:03:24 PM »
deewaro se sir takraana achaa lagta hai,
dard me aansu girana achaa lagta hai,
is duniya me laash ki tarah zindaa hai hum,
jamane k pattharo ka chot achaa lagta hai.
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Meena
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«Reply #7 on: January 28, 2005, 03:10:58 PM »
Quote from: "pandit"
Quote from: "Meena"
Ajeeb sawal uthe hai humari larkarati hui chal ke upar,
Kaise batayen hum ke paon ke niche sholon ko chupa rakha hai...

Dikhayenge nahin kabhi in taza chalon ko hum,
Yeh to woh gum hai jine seense se laga rakha hai...

Kaise girayen un deewaron ko jo hai dil ke aas pas,
Inhone hi to is bedard duniya se ab tak bacha rakha hai...

Kaise batlaye hum apne gum ki paidasih ko aaj,
Ke zuban ko mile dhokon ne gunga bana rakha hai...

Chod jate hai humsafar bhi rast me saath apna,
Jo apne raston ko tanha chupi se saja rakha hai...

Gum ke badal rehte nahin, kushiyon ki kirne zaroor milengi,
In jhoote waadon se kismat ne hume latka rakha hai...



wah nice one  meena ji....


shukriya!

 :D
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Meena
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«Reply #8 on: January 28, 2005, 03:11:18 PM »
Quote from: "pandit"
deewaro se sir takraana achaa lagta hai,
dard me aansu girana achaa lagta hai,
is duniya me laash ki tarah zindaa hai hum,
jamane k pattharo ka chot achaa lagta hai.


last line samajh me nahin ayi :?
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pandit
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«Reply #9 on: January 28, 2005, 03:13:55 PM »
dard ko seene me lekar jine waale hi samajh sakte hai use,
aap kya jaane jis ki zindagi me bahar hi bahar hai.
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Pooja
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«Reply #10 on: January 28, 2005, 03:17:03 PM »
Pandit ji apki in lines ne ek purani gazal ki yaad dila di.

Deewaro se milkar rona acha lagta hai
hum bhi pagal ho jayegy aisa lagta hai!!! (NM)
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Meena
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«Reply #11 on: January 28, 2005, 03:19:03 PM »
Quote from: "pandit"
dard ko seene me lekar jine waale hi samajh sakte hai use,
aap kya jaane jis ki zindagi me bahar hi bahar hai.


wahhh!!

baharon ko dekh kar yeh dhoka na kha,
ke kayi poohl hai usme mujre hue,
mere hooton ki jhoit hasi pe mat ja,
ke dil me khayi dard hai chupaye hue!
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pandit
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«Reply #12 on: January 28, 2005, 03:21:33 PM »
ur right poojaji..
dard e dil dard e gigar kisko sunaye hum,
apne dard ko jamaane ko kaise dikhaye hum,
deewana kahti hai hume jo duniya,wohi deewani hai kaise bataye use hum.
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Pooja
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«Reply #13 on: January 28, 2005, 03:24:18 PM »
Nice one Pandit ji and Meena!!!!
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thycreator
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«Reply #14 on: January 28, 2005, 03:41:05 PM »
Gud one Meena ji,

Wo humse kehte hai ki deewaron ne unhe humse bacha rakha hai,
Unhe koi ye bataye ki unhone humpe kya sitam dha rakha hai,
Unse hum dur hi  rehte toh kuch gila bhi na hota uska,
Wo mere pas hai par phir bhi kyu matam mana rakha hai...

Kyu soniyo???
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