°°° Zaif - Haqeeqat °°°

by Zaif on December 15, 2013, 08:55:09 AM
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(Zindagi ki kadwi haqeeqat bayaan karti ye ghazal. Ye ghazal kisi ko thes dene ke liye bilkul bhi nahi hai. Ye ek maamoli se shayar ki chhoti si koshish hai haqiqat zaahir karne ki. Is ghazal se apne ko hargiz na jodein.)
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Ho chala tha jeewan yun ranjoor kisi ka..
Karz chukaate mar gaya majdoor, kisi ka..

Kokh mein hi maar diya maasoom ko kyun?
Kya bigaada usne tha huzoor! Kisi ka?

Kahin hai raunaq, dulhan ke ghar aane ki,
Kahin hijr mein ghar hua be'noor kisi ka..

Koi ghar ko chhor gya hai yaar ki khaatir,
Kar gaya hai jate hue dil choor kisi ka..

Maza namak udaane mein mil raha kisi ko,
Kahin ho raha ghaaw-ghaaw, naasoor kisi ka..

Koi laga kar baith gaya hai taale munh par,
Koi tan ko noch raha bhar'poor kisi ka..

Pankhe par phansi jhool gayi beti kisi ki,
Kahin baap ik ro raha majboor kisi ka..

Fauji kahin shaheed hua ek sarhad par,
Or kahin pe bujh gaya sindoor kisi ka..

Ro raha hun is ghazal ko likhte, 'Zaif',
Yaad aaya wo chale jaana door kisi ka..

© Zaif
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«Reply #1 on: December 15, 2013, 09:28:56 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: December 15, 2013, 12:44:08 PM »
Quote from: Zaif on December 15, 2013, 08:55:09 AM
(Zindagi ki kadwi haqeeqat bayaan karti ye ghazal. Ye ghazal kisi ko thes dene ke liye bilkul bhi nahi hai. Ye ek maamoli se shayar ki chhoti si koshish hai haqiqat zaahir karne ki. Is ghazal se apne ko hargiz na jodein.)
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Ho chala tha jeewan yun ranjoor kisi ka..
Karz chukaate mar gaya majdoor, kisi ka..

Kokh mein hi maar diya maasoom ko kyun?
Kya bigaada usne tha huzoor! Kisi ka?

Kahin hai raunaq, dulhan ke ghar aane ki,
Kahin hijr mein ghar hua be'noor kisi ka..

Koi ghar ko chhor gya hai yaar ki khaatir,
Kar gaya hai jate hue dil choor kisi ka..

Maza namak udaane mein mil raha kisi ko,
Kahin ho raha ghaaw-ghaaw, naasoor kisi ka..

Koi laga kar baith gaya hai taale munh par,
Koi tan ko noch raha bhar'poor kisi ka..

Pankhe par phansi jhool gayi beti kisi ki,
Kahin baap ik ro raha majboor kisi ka..

Fauji kahin shaheed hua ek sarhad par,
Or kahin pe bujh gaya sindoor kisi ka..

Ro raha hun is ghazal ko likhte, 'Zaif',
Yaad aaya wo chale jaana door kisi ka..

© Zaif


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Nice and impressive lines and full of emotions.
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«Reply #3 on: December 15, 2013, 12:51:45 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: December 15, 2013, 02:15:14 PM »
Ap sabhi ka shukriya !!
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«Reply #5 on: December 15, 2013, 05:56:59 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: December 15, 2013, 06:41:07 PM »
dilfareb ghazal ..

Ro raha hun is ghazal ko likhte, 'Zaif',
Yaad aaya wo chale jaana door kisi ka..

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«Reply #7 on: December 15, 2013, 11:23:43 PM »
Shukriya sahal bhai..
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«Reply #8 on: December 15, 2013, 11:36:53 PM »
Quote from: Zaif on December 15, 2013, 08:55:09 AM
(Zindagi ki kadwi haqeeqat bayaan karti ye ghazal. Ye ghazal kisi ko thes dene ke liye bilkul bhi nahi hai. Ye ek maamoli se shayar ki chhoti si koshish hai haqiqat zaahir karne ki. Is ghazal se apne ko hargiz na jodein.)
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Ho chala tha jeewan yun ranjoor kisi ka..
Karz chukaate mar gaya majdoor, kisi ka..
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Kokh mein hi maar diya maasoom ko kyun?
Kya bigaada usne tha huzoor! Kisi ka?
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Kahin hai raunaq, dulhan ke ghar aane ki,
Kahin hijr mein ghar hua be'noor kisi ka..
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Koi ghar ko chhor gya hai yaar ki khaatir,
Kar gaya hai jate hue dil choor kisi ka..
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Maza namak udaane mein mil raha kisi ko,
Kahin ho raha ghaaw-ghaaw, naasoor kisi ka..
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Koi laga kar baith gaya hai taale munh par,
Koi tan ko noch raha bhar'poor kisi ka..
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Pankhe par phansi jhool gayi beti kisi ki,
Kahin baap ik ro raha majboor kisi ka..
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Fauji kahin shaheed hua ek sarhad par,
Or kahin pe bujh gaya sindoor kisi ka..
 tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed
Ro raha hun is ghazal ko likhte, 'Zaif',
Yaad aaya wo chale jaana door kisi ka..
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«Reply #9 on: December 16, 2013, 01:54:45 AM »
Waah bahaut achhee ghazal kahee Zaif ji dheron daad aap ko !!!
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«Reply #10 on: December 17, 2013, 12:39:13 PM »
behad umda dil ko chhu lene wali aapki ye ghazal bahut pasand aayi zaif ji.. Usual Smile

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