Dekha Hai 3_____________Baadal:Shayri-E-Dard

baadal102

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Apno ko apno ke jajbaato se kehelte dekha hai,
Jhut sun sun ke sach ka katl hote dekha hai,

Nahi farq padta unhe ki kya gujeregi kisi pe,
Unhe to bas humne armano ko kuchalte dekha hai,

Lamha lamha dur hone ka dard sata.ta rehta hai,
Us doori ka humne faida unhe uthate dekha hai,

Kar ke sitam fir khate hai apno ki jhuti kasam,
Un kasmo ko humne hamesha tut.te hue dekha hai,

Farebi nahi hai hum fir bhi kehlate hai farebi,
Farebi keh hume us ko humne haste hue dekha hai,

Sambhali apni har khusi us sachi ibadat ke liye,
Khushia baant.te humne unhe gairo ke saath dekha hai,

BAADAL to le jaayega apna sab dard khud mai samet ke,
Lakin iss dard mai humne bahuto ko jalte dekha hai,

Lakin iss dard mai humne bahuto ko jalte dekha hai.....

Baadal


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riyaz106

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Re: Dekha Hai 3_____________Baadal

«Reply #1 on: May 07, 2010, 11:20:15 AM »

Bahot khoob Baadal ji. Bahot dard bhari poem likhi hai aapne.


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Re: Dekha Hai 3_____________Baadal

«Reply #2 on: May 07, 2010, 11:05:30 PM »

Bahut khoobsurat ghazal likhi hai aapne Baadal ji. Bahut dard hai isme. Dard ek ek shabd me jhalak raha hai. Hamaare dil ko chhoo gayi aapki ye kavita. Bahut achcha likha hai aapne. Bahut khoob....

kabhi kisi se ye shikayat nahi karte ki tanha hai hum,
aaye the is jahaan me tanha, tabhi tanhaayi ka ghum nahi karte,
shikayat to bas itni hai ki kuch pal ka saath q diya,
jaana tha to aaye hi kyun, varna hum jhooti ummeed to na karte,


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: Dekha Hai 3_____________Baadal

«Reply #3 on: May 08, 2010, 12:38:59 AM »

Bahut khoob Baadal Ji


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baadal102

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Re: Dekha Hai 3_____________Baadal

«Reply #4 on: May 08, 2010, 12:42:16 PM »

bahut bahut sukria Riyaz ji

Klaskar ji

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Harish ji notworthy


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dead heart

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Re: Dekha Hai 3_____________Baadal

«Reply #5 on: May 08, 2010, 07:33:59 PM »

Bahaut dard aur thoda sa gussa dekha hai...maine iss nazm main apki Baadal..aj dil udaas hai aur apki nazm parrke toh bas maza agaya...kehne ko toh bahaut hai mere pas mager bas itna kehna chahta hoon... Applause


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baadal102

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Re: Dekha Hai 3_____________Baadal

«Reply #6 on: May 09, 2010, 02:28:37 PM »

bahut bahut sukria rahim ji


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Re: Dekha Hai 3_____________Baadal

«Reply #7 on: May 09, 2010, 05:09:25 PM »

Quote from: klaskar on May 07, 2010, 11:05:30 PM

Dil ki baat kehdete ho Dost... Applause


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Tanha(Saurabh)

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Re: Dekha Hai 3_____________Baadal

«Reply #8 on: May 10, 2010, 04:47:32 AM »

bohat bohat khoob baadal ji. bohat dard likha hai aapne. bohat achchhi peshkash.... Applause


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Re: Dekha Hai 3_____________Baadal

«Reply #9 on: May 10, 2010, 10:13:31 AM »

Shukriya Dost...!!!

Quote from: -Rahim- on May 09, 2010, 05:09:25 PM

Dil ki baat kehdete ho Dost... Applause


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baadal102

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Re: Dekha Hai 3_____________Baadal

«Reply #10 on: May 11, 2010, 12:22:44 PM »

bahut bahut sukria suarabh ji


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