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by ~Hriday~ on December 18, 2012, 07:19:32 PM

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Re: -----/// Main tumse nazar kaise milaaun ///----- Hriday

«Reply #1 on: December 18, 2012, 09:03:43 PM »

Bohot hi jazbaati peshkash hai, kahin kahin toh bohot acchi ban padi hai, agar jazbaat ke saath thoda si mehnat asharon ek wazan karne main ki hoti toh aur bhi khoobsurat ho jaati.

Umeed hai meri bebak raye aapko buri nahi lagi hogi.


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Re: -----/// Main tumse nazar kaise milaaun ///----- Hriday

«Reply #2 on: December 19, 2012, 01:15:36 AM »

bahut khoob


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Re: -----/// Main tumse nazar kaise milaaun ///----- Hriday

«Reply #3 on: December 19, 2012, 02:24:28 AM »

kp....

ek story fir yaad dila di tumne.......

par maloom naa tha ki mumkin nahi dard denaa apno ko
yahi wajaa hai ki aaj bhi tumse chhip rahaa hoon hoon
tumhaare paas hi magar main kaise kahun tumse
khud ki nazron se gir chukaa hoon, khud ko tumse chhipaa rahaa hoon...
haan sach hai, main aaj bhi khud ko tumse chhipaa rahaa hoon....

post achhci hai par inn dino jitna tum likhe ho aur better ho sakti thi.. try to edit .....


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Re: -----/// Main tumse nazar kaise milaaun ///----- Hriday

«Reply #4 on: December 19, 2012, 03:12:32 AM »

bahut bahut shukriyaaa CIC ji... maine to bas yunhi kisi post ke jawaab me likh diya thaa... likhte waqt kuch socha nahi ki ryhming wageraa milaanaa hai.. bas jo dil me aayaa likhtaa chalaa gayaa... thanks for the advice... aage dhyaan rakhunga.. Usual Smile

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Re: -----/// Main tumse nazar kaise milaaun ///----- Hriday

«Reply #5 on: December 19, 2012, 03:13:43 AM »

bahut bahut shukriyaaa Nandbahu ji....!!!!

Quote from: nandbahu on December 19, 2012, 01:15:36 AM

bahut khoob


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Re: -----/// Main tumse nazar kaise milaaun ///----- Hriday

«Reply #6 on: December 19, 2012, 03:15:33 AM »

hmmmmm ... ye to bas yunhi kisi ke jawaab me likhaa hai.... kahaani hi samjhiye.... poem ki tarha mat samjhiye... bas flow thaa likh diyaa... isi theme me ek poem likhtaa hon aage..... isko aur kyaa edit karun samajh nahi aayaa... Usual Smile

take care... Usual Smile

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