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by sonalxoxo on July 23, 2010, 12:14:24 AM
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chaha hai tumhe is kadar khud bhi nahi samaj pa rahe
manga nahi kuch tumse par zindagi kardi tumhare hawale
itne kareeb aagaye hai ke tere dil ki dhadkan sun sakte hai
afsoos ke teri har dhadkan kisi aur ka naam le rahi hai
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«Reply #1 on: July 23, 2010, 05:59:35 PM »
Wah wah Sonal ji bahot khoob. Achhi lagi aapki ye lines. Daad hazir hai.
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«Reply #2 on: July 24, 2010, 12:48:44 PM »
chaha hai tumhe is kadar khud bhi nahi samaj pa rahe
manga nahi kuch tumse par zindagi kardi tumhare hawale
itne kareeb aagaye hai ke tere dil ki dhadkan sun sakte hai
afsoos ke teri har dhadkan kisi aur ka naam le rahi hai


Nice one.....sona Ji
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«Reply #3 on: July 24, 2010, 12:53:33 PM »
uffffffff ye gazab bhi hona tha kya....

bht pyare alfaaz hain ji nht khubbb
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