Dhoondta hoon~~~ Saahil

by salil2002 on June 01, 2009, 11:26:51 AM
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doston yeh ek aise musafir kii kahaani hai jo zindgi meinchalta gaya jab ruka toh socha kii kya chhoot gaya...shayad aapko pasand aaye

in darakhton par ukere huye naamon ko dekhta hoon
toh apne haathon se likhe tere naam ko dhoondhta hoon

aaj bahut waqt hua mujhko tanha huye
mein aaj apni duniya main tera ehsaas dhoondta hoon
woh waqt ka daur tham gaya jab tum pahle mein rehte thay
aaj mein teri tasveeron mein yaadon ka bikhra samaan dhoondta hoon

jaane kya wajah rahi teri chale jaane kii
kabhi maine roka nahin , kabhi tujhse poochha nahin
aaj jab waqt k is mod par kadam ladkhate hain
toh apne haathon mein tere haath dhoondta hoon

teri majboori rahi hogi kucch toh
magar mere dil ne poochhne kii izazat na di
aaj jab saawalon k katghare mein gherte hai jawaab
toh apne bhi kucch sawaalon k jawaab dhoondta hoon


kat gaya yeh safar tanha ,jis par saath chalna tha
magar is baat kii bhi shikayat na huyi
aaj jab band ho rahi hai aankhen  "Saahil' Kii
toh apne saath chalne walon k nishaan dhoondta hoon
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«Reply #1 on: June 01, 2009, 12:52:24 PM »
Bahut khoob likha hai Salil Ji
Wah wah
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #2 on: June 07, 2009, 06:46:08 AM »
doston yeh ek aise musafir kii kahaani hai jo zindgi meinchalta gaya jab ruka toh socha kii kya chhoot gaya...shayad aapko pasand aaye

in darakhton par ukere huye naamon ko dekhta hoon
toh apne haathon se likhe tere naam ko dhoondhta hoon

aaj bahut waqt hua mujhko tanha huye
mein aaj apni duniya main tera ehsaas dhoondta hoon
woh waqt ka daur tham gaya jab tum pahle mein rehte thay
aaj mein teri tasveeron mein yaadon ka bikhra samaan dhoondta hoon

jaane kya wajah rahi teri chale jaane kii
kabhi maine roka nahin , kabhi tujhse poochha nahin
aaj jab waqt k is mod par kadam ladkhate hain
toh apne haathon mein tere haath dhoondta hoon

teri majboori rahi hogi kucch toh
magar mere dil ne poochhne kii izazat na di
aaj jab saawalon k katghare mein gherte hai jawaab
toh apne bhi kucch sawaalon k jawaab dhoondta hoon

kat gaya yeh safar tanha ,jis par saath chalna tha
magar is baat kii bhi shikayat na huyi
aaj jab band ho rahi hai aankhen  "Saahil' Kii
toh apne saath chalne walon k nishaan dhoondta hoon

Wah wah...Saahil dear... bahut bahut accha likha hai aapne.
Very tochy lines...  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #3 on: June 07, 2009, 07:21:51 AM »
Really Salil Bhai.. Ek ek Lafz se Dard Bayan ho raha hai.. Is Rachna ko Bhi Jo Padhega Dost.. use Kahin Na Kahin Yeh apni si Kahaani Lagegi.. Bahut Bahut Khooooooooooooooooob.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #4 on: June 07, 2009, 12:52:40 PM »
BOhat Khoob Sahil Bhai, Bohat Achche, Har Baar Ki Tarah,.
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«Reply #5 on: June 09, 2009, 07:40:10 AM »
Bahut khoob likha hai Salil Ji
Wah wah
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Wah wah...Saahil dear... bahut bahut accha likha hai aapne.
Very tochy lines...  Thumbs UP

Really Salil Bhai.. Ek ek Lafz se Dard Bayan ho raha hai.. Is Rachna ko Bhi Jo Padhega Dost.. use Kahin Na Kahin Yeh apni si Kahaani Lagegi.. Bahut Bahut Khooooooooooooooooob.. Applause Applause


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BOhat Khoob Sahil Bhai, Bohat Achche, Har Baar Ki Tarah,.
thanks roja,mann bhai,azeem bhai and sarvesh bhai
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«Reply #6 on: June 09, 2009, 12:03:19 PM »
very nice sahil
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«Reply #7 on: June 09, 2009, 02:47:56 PM »
shukriya aslam bhai
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«Reply #8 on: June 09, 2009, 02:52:23 PM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob Salil Bhai..

Bahut Dard Chupa Tha Iss Nazm Mein..Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: June 09, 2009, 02:58:20 PM »
shukriya khwahish bhai
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«Reply #10 on: June 10, 2009, 09:14:05 PM »
Bohot hi khoob....bohot dard hai is nazm main tumhari Saahil  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: June 13, 2009, 06:37:27 AM »
thanks a lot di
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