DHUAN-DHUAN SA KHWAB HUA/ धुआं-धुआं सा ख्वाब हुआ......ANAND MOHAN

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धुआं धुआं सा ख्वाब हुआ,

कुछ जला था जो, था दिल मेरा

यूँ टीस उठी कुछ सीने में

मन बरबस  ही बेताब हुआ.



कुछ कहना-सुनना कहाँ रहा,

कुछ बनना-बिगडना कहाँ रहा,

जिह्वा ने मौन थी साध रखी,

पर अंतर में आलाप हुआ.



मैं शोक करूँ, संताप करूँ,

दुःख से कातर विलाप करूँ,

या जश्न मनाऊँ जीने का,

जो जीवन का अभिशाप हुआ.



ना सगे, ना किसी  पराये से,

मैं लड़ता खुद के साये से,

ना जीत सका, ना हारा मैं,

मेरे द्वन्द का ऐसा हिसाब हुआ.


                -   आनंद मोहन .




DHUAN-DHUAN SA KHWAB HUA,

KUCHH JALA THA JO, THA DIL MERA,

YUN TEES UTHI KUCHH SEENE MEIN,

MAN BARBAS HEE BETAAB HUA.



KUCHH KAHNA-SUNNA KAHAN RAHA,

KUCHH BANNA-BIGADNA KAHAN RAHA,

ZIHWA NE MAUN THI SAADH RAKHI,

PAR ANTAR MEIN AALAAP HUA.



MAIN SHOK KAROON, SANTAAP KAROON

DUKH SE KAATAR VILAAP KAROON,

YA JASHN MANAAOON JEENE KA,

JO JEEVAN KA ABHISHAAP HUA.



NAA SAGE, NAA KISI PARAYE SE,

MAIN LADTA KHUD KE SAAYE SE,

NAA JEET SAKA NAA HAARA MAIN,

MERE DWAND KA AISA HISAAB HUA.


       -   ANAND MOHAN




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«Reply #1 on: November 09, 2012, 11:14:55 AM »
Bahot achhi rachna hai Anand Mohan ji. Antardwand ka bahot sateek varnan aapne kiya. Aise uttam rachna ke liye badhaai.
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«Reply #2 on: November 09, 2012, 11:19:46 AM »
bahut khoob, dhero dad
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«Reply #3 on: November 09, 2012, 11:21:17 AM »
bahut bahut khoob dheron daad
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«Reply #4 on: November 09, 2012, 12:09:37 PM »
kya baat hai, umda peshkash hai anand jee , bohut khoob 3rd aur 4rt bandh lajwab raha dherroon daaad qubool kareN.....aaj ka rau aap ke liye...
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«Reply #5 on: November 09, 2012, 12:27:06 PM »
Anand Mohan ji lajabab rachna hai aap ki ...bahut-bahut badhayi....
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«Reply #6 on: November 09, 2012, 01:13:28 PM »

धुआं धुआं सा ख्वाब हुआ,

कुछ जला था जो, था दिल मेरा

यूँ टीस उठी कुछ सीने में

मन बरबस  ही बेताब हुआ.



कुछ कहना-सुनना कहाँ रहा,

कुछ बनना-बिगडना कहाँ रहा,

जिह्वा ने मौन थी साध रखी,

पर अंतर में आलाप हुआ.



मैं शोक करूँ, संताप करूँ,

दुःख से कातर विलाप करूँ,

या जश्न मनाऊँ जीने का,

जो जीवन का अभिशाप हुआ.



ना सगे, ना किसी  पराये से,

मैं लड़ता खुद के साये से,

ना जीत सका, ना हारा मैं,

मेरे द्वन्द का ऐसा हिसाब हुआ.


                -   आनंद मोहन .




DHUAN-DHUAN SA KHWAB HUA,

KUCHH JALA THA JO, THA DIL MERA,

YUN TEES UTHI KUCHH SEENE MEIN,

MAN BARBAS HEE BETAAB HUA.



KUCHH KAHNA-SUNNA KAHAN RAHA,

KUCHH BANNA-BIGADNA KAHAN RAHA,

ZIHWA NE MAUN THI SAADH RAKHI,

PAR ANTAR MEIN AALAAP HUA.



MAIN SHOK KAROON, SANTAAP KAROON

DUKH SE KAATAR VILAAP KAROON,

YA JASHN MANAAOON JEENE KA,

JO JEEVAN KA ABHISHAAP HUA.



NAA SAGE, NAA KISI PARAYE SE,

MAIN LADTA KHUD KE SAAYE SE,

NAA JEET SAKA NAA HAARA MAIN,

MERE DWAND KA AISA HISAAB HUA.


       -   ANAND MOHAN







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«Reply #7 on: November 09, 2012, 02:39:03 PM »
bahut hee sunder
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«Reply #8 on: November 09, 2012, 03:00:09 PM »
bahut hi achhi kavita... bahut hi khubsoorat rachna........ aise hi likhte rahiye...
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«Reply #9 on: November 09, 2012, 03:52:49 PM »
Bahot achhi rachna hai Anand Mohan ji. Antardwand ka bahot sateek varnan aapne kiya. Aise uttam rachna ke liye badhaai.
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«Reply #10 on: November 09, 2012, 06:37:25 PM »
Anand Mohan Jee Aadaab!


WaaH waaH waaH janab kia khoob rachna kahi hai... bahut khoob..
bade hi khoobsurati se dard ke ahsaas ko lafz diye haiN aapne.. Usual Smile

Is khoobsurat rachna par humari dheroN dili daad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile                 

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«Reply #11 on: November 09, 2012, 06:42:25 PM »

धुआं धुआं सा ख्वाब हुआ,

कुछ जला था जो, था दिल मेरा

यूँ टीस उठी कुछ सीने में

मन बरबस  ही बेताब हुआ.



कुछ कहना-सुनना कहाँ रहा,

कुछ बनना-बिगडना कहाँ रहा,

जिह्वा ने मौन थी साध रखी,

पर अंतर में आलाप हुआ.



मैं शोक करूँ, संताप करूँ,

दुःख से कातर विलाप करूँ,

या जश्न मनाऊँ जीने का,

जो जीवन का अभिशाप हुआ.



ना सगे, ना किसी  पराये से,

मैं लड़ता खुद के साये से,

ना जीत सका, ना हारा मैं,

मेरे द्वन्द का ऐसा हिसाब हुआ.


                -   आनंद मोहन .




DHUAN-DHUAN SA KHWAB HUA,

KUCHH JALA THA JO, THA DIL MERA,

YUN TEES UTHI KUCHH SEENE MEIN,

MAN BARBAS HEE BETAAB HUA.



KUCHH KAHNA-SUNNA KAHAN RAHA,

KUCHH BANNA-BIGADNA KAHAN RAHA,

ZIHWA NE MAUN THI SAADH RAKHI,

PAR ANTAR MEIN AALAAP HUA.



MAIN SHOK KAROON, SANTAAP KAROON

DUKH SE KAATAR VILAAP KAROON,

YA JASHN MANAAOON JEENE KA,

JO JEEVAN KA ABHISHAAP HUA.



NAA SAGE, NAA KISI PARAYE SE,

MAIN LADTA KHUD KE SAAYE SE,

NAA JEET SAKA NAA HAARA MAIN,

MERE DWAND KA AISA HISAAB HUA.


       -   ANAND MOHAN





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«Reply #12 on: November 10, 2012, 05:09:31 PM »
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«Reply #13 on: November 13, 2012, 03:37:22 AM »
bahut khoob, dhero dad
THANK YOU NANDBAHUJEE
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«Reply #14 on: November 14, 2012, 03:20:27 AM »
bahut bahut khoob dheron daad
shukriya, aqsh sahab
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