Dhulaan

by Nino on September 28, 2004, 09:46:10 PM
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Nino
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Aas jab ban ke toot jati hai
rooh kis tarah kasmasati hai
puch us bad  naseeb dulhan se
jiski barat laut jati hai
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Pooja
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«Reply #1 on: September 29, 2004, 01:00:53 AM »
Very Touching Nino...

Tan per lal jorra, aor man mai jawala hai
ankhon mai Ansoo aor lub per tala hai
khari hai najare jhuka kar, samne jalim jamana sara hai
kaya kahe unki bebasi ka, jisne is dulhan ko janam de kar pala hai....
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Raj Naruka
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«Reply #2 on: September 29, 2004, 01:21:40 AM »
pooja ji kya kahe aapka shayari kasam se ..............
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Pooja
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«Reply #3 on: September 29, 2004, 01:30:05 AM »
Thanks Raj, Kuch alag hi likhane ko milla, thanks to Nino..
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Nino
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«Reply #4 on: September 29, 2004, 12:37:48 PM »
Thank u very much pooja
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Nino
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«Reply #5 on: September 29, 2004, 12:41:34 PM »
pooja ji very touching

aaisa bhi koi jawaab milega
ye to maine soocha na tha
tumne dil ki gehraiyo se likha hai
aaisa maine soocha na tha

main to zindagi ko khel samajh kar ji rah tha
tum ne mujhe neend se jaga diya
wo sapne sare toot jainge
aaisa maine soocha na tha
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nishita
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«Reply #6 on: September 29, 2004, 01:23:48 PM »
pooja & nino very very nice..
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Raj Naruka
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«Reply #7 on: September 29, 2004, 03:32:53 PM »
NINO JI,

SAPNO MAIN JEENE WALE HAQIQAT KO KYA SAMAJHENGE,
PYAAR SE DARNE WAALE HUM DEEWANO KO KYA SAMJHENGE.
JO SAMAJH JAAYE YEH PYAAR KI BHASHA,
TO MANN MAIN NA RAHE PHIR KOI ABHILASHA
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Nino
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«Reply #8 on: September 29, 2004, 07:54:07 PM »
RAJ JI AAP KE LIYE


ab to na sapne rahe na haqiqat kam aayi
wo chood ke chal diye jaise hi hum pe aafat aayi
ab tum hi batao aye dost ki pyaar kis se karon
yahan to hai har ek sanam harjai
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #9 on: September 29, 2004, 09:20:25 PM »
nice nino..............
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Pooja
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«Reply #10 on: September 29, 2004, 09:24:09 PM »
nice Deepak and bahoot khoob Nino..

sapne to sapne hai toot jaty hai
sathi bhir sathi hai choot jaty hai
takdeer aor kismat se bhi maar khai hai
jise banaya khuda, usse se hi thokar khai hai
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Nino
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«Reply #11 on: September 29, 2004, 09:38:39 PM »
pooja ji ------ waheed ji----

aap ne dekha is nacheez ko
to zindagi sawar si gayi
main to sochta tha ki is
zamene se dosti mar gayi

mager mujhe maaf karna aye dosto
main to ek zara hoon ,jo dhol mein mil jayega
aap apna hath na badaho damen mein daag lag jayega
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Pooja
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«Reply #12 on: September 29, 2004, 09:40:48 PM »
dhool mai mile ji wo hi asli HERO hota hai
jo bach kar chalna chahe dhool se
wo lakh kare koshish,
magar ZERO hota hai
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Nino
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«Reply #13 on: September 29, 2004, 09:59:11 PM »
shukria aap ka pooja ji ---------
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Nino
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«Reply #14 on: September 29, 2004, 10:01:14 PM »
main to dhol ke bhi qabil na tha
tumne bhita diya asman mein
banya to hai hero hume
kahin ko na jaye is jahan mein
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