dil ke dar_o_deewaar se lipaTtii tanhaaii

by aarzoomehek on March 20, 2008, 10:45:39 PM
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dil ke dar_o_deewaar se lipaTtii tanhaaii
jii uThtii maiN aur mahektii tanhaaii

raunaq-e-maHfil meN tanhaa meraa wujood
dil ke kissi kone meN machaltii tanhaaii

raushan kiyaa charaaGh-e-bazm ko aaNsuuoN se
chamak uThtii hai raat aur bikhartii tanhaaii

tere aane aur na aane ke beech ka taweel safar
kash_ma_kash-e-intizaar meN bhaTaktii tanhaaii

terii sheeriinii meN ghuli meeThii baateN
bhaTak gaii maiN naadaan aur bahektii tanhaaii

zamaane meN haiN kitne TooTe, bikhre log
kasmasaate dil, naa-suboor, taRaptii tanhaaii

veeraanii-e-dasht meN sisak rahii thii parchhaayiiN
dekhaa qareeb jaa kar, maiN thii aur sisaktii tanhaaii

thak gaii hai Aarzoo-e-umeed, wafa ke deep jalaaye
ab na aayegaa vo rah gaii sirf chhalaktii tanhaaii

yaa Rab, bulaa le! ab jee na lage teri dunya meN...
taRap rahii hai "Aarzoo" aur sulagtii tanhaaii
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«Reply #1 on: March 20, 2008, 11:23:33 PM »
Aarzoo Ahh kahuya wah kahu is kavita per!! bahoot khoobsurati se apne tanhaai ko bayan kiya hai..

ek ek shabd dard se lipta hua
ek ek shabd tanhai se siskta hua
dil e khyalaat kaya kahu is per
ek ek armaan hai yaha bikhara hua....
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GURCHARAN NARANG
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«Reply #2 on: March 20, 2008, 11:45:41 PM »
WAAH! BEAUTIFUL,WHAT AN EXPRESSION OF TANHAAIE
MEHAKTI, MACHALTI, BIKHARTI ,SULAGTI,BHATAKTI,TARAPTI,SISAKTI, CHHALAKTI HUI TANHAAI. MARVELLOUS KYA ANDAZE BYAAn HAI TANHAAI KA.
"SISAKTE HAI SANNATEY AUR GHAMZADA HAI TANHAAI
JAANE   KIS MUKAAM   PE   ZINDGI   HAI LE AAIE "
APNI KALAM SE NIKLE HUE MOTIYON KO DARD MEIN ITNA NA BHIGOIYE
KE KISI DARD KE SAMANDAR KA EHSAS HONE LAGE. ANY HOW KAMAAL.

NARANG.
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«Reply #3 on: March 21, 2008, 03:52:33 AM »
Very Nice AarzooMehek & Nice Reply Pooja... Applause
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«Reply #4 on: March 21, 2008, 03:55:34 AM »
ummmm...........good one...keep it up
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«Reply #5 on: March 21, 2008, 11:02:14 AM »
Really a very good shayari. Par ye tanhai kaun hai, kahi ye kisi larki ka naam to nahi.
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«Reply #6 on: March 21, 2008, 03:10:49 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on March 20, 2008, 11:23:33 PM
Aarzoo Ahh kahuya wah kahu is kavita per!! bahoot khoobsurati se apne tanhaai ko bayan kiya hai..

ek ek shabd dard se lipta hua
ek ek shabd tanhai se siskta hua
dil e khyalaat kaya kahu is per
ek ek armaan hai yaha bikhara hua....

Shukriya pooja for liking it...ab kya keh sakte hai Tanhaai to tanhaai hi hai...chaahe jis rang main bhi zindagi main aai...boht khoobsurat sher se mere kalam ki shobha barhaai hai..Usual Smile

bikhar gai main reza reza hoke
tanhaai ke nazr zindagi karke
ab milta hai sukoon is sannate main
ansuon ke naam jawaani karke
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«Reply #7 on: March 21, 2008, 05:53:30 PM »
Quote from: aarzoomehek on March 20, 2008, 10:45:39 PM
dil ke dar_o_deewaar se lipaTtii tanhaaii
jii uThtii maiN aur mahektii tanhaaii

raunaq-e-maHfil meN tanhaa meraa wujood
dil ke kissi kone meN machaltii tanhaaii

raushan kiyaa charaaGh-e-bazm ko aaNsuuoN se
chamak uThtii hai raat aur bikhartii tanhaaii

tere aane aur na aane ke beech ka taweel safar
kash_ma_kash-e-intizaar meN bhaTaktii tanhaaii

terii sheeriinii meN ghuli meeThii baateN
bhaTak gaii maiN naadaan aur bahektii tanhaaii

zamaane meN haiN kitne TooTe, bikhre log
kasmasaate dil, naa-suboor, taRaptii tanhaaii

veeraanii-e-dasht meN sisak rahii thii parchhaayiiN
dekhaa qareeb jaa kar, maiN thii aur sisaktii tanhaaii

thak gaii hai Aarzoo-e-umeed, wafa ke deep jalaaye
ab na aayegaa vo rah gaii sirf chhalaktii tanhaaii

yaa Rab, bulaa le! ab jee na lage teri dunya meN...
taRap rahii hai "Aarzoo" aur sulagtii tanhaaii

KYA BAAT HAI...BAHUT HI KHOOOB AARZOO..BAHUT HI JAZBAATI KAVITA LIKHI HAI..BAHUT ACHE.. Applause  Applause  Applause
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«Reply #8 on: March 21, 2008, 06:13:13 PM »
Waah Ji Waah Bahoot Khoob Likha Hai,.
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«Reply #9 on: March 21, 2008, 06:16:08 PM »
aarzomehek bohat hi khoob likha hai.. Applause
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«Reply #10 on: March 21, 2008, 06:20:04 PM »
Tanhaai Bhi Ab Hume Raas Nahi,.
Jab Se Tu Mere Paas Nahi,.

Khushi Ka To Bas Naam Suna Humne,.
Aur Khushi Ko Bhi Humse Aas Nahi,.

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«Reply #11 on: March 21, 2008, 08:12:34 PM »
Quote from: aarzoomehek on March 21, 2008, 03:10:49 PM
Quote from: Pooja on March 20, 2008, 11:23:33 PM
Aarzoo Ahh kahuya wah kahu is kavita per!! bahoot khoobsurati se apne tanhaai ko bayan kiya hai..

ek ek shabd dard se lipta hua
ek ek shabd tanhai se siskta hua
dil e khyalaat kaya kahu is per
ek ek armaan hai yaha bikhara hua....

Shukriya pooja for liking it...ab kya keh sakte hai Tanhaai to tanhaai hi hai...chaahe jis rang main bhi zindagi main aai...boht khoobsurat sher se mere kalam ki shobha barhaai hai..Usual Smile

bikhar gai main reza reza hoke
tanhaai ke nazr zindagi karke
ab milta hai sukoon is sannate main
ansuon ke naam jawaani karke

Bikhari tanhaai mai jab ahsaas bikhar jaate hai
madhoshi ke alam mai, khud se hum khud gungunate hai
Dunia kahti hai mujhko deewani uski
hum itne sun kar hi, dekho khush ho jaate hai!!!
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«Reply #12 on: March 21, 2008, 10:35:38 PM »
Quote from: GURCHARAN NARANG on March 20, 2008, 11:45:41 PM
WAAH! BEAUTIFUL,WHAT AN EXPRESSION OF TANHAAIE
MEHAKTI, MACHALTI, BIKHARTI ,SULAGTI,BHATAKTI,TARAPTI,SISAKTI, CHHALAKTI HUI TANHAAI. MARVELLOUS KYA ANDAZE BYAAn HAI TANHAAI KA.
"SISAKTE HAI SANNATEY AUR GHAMZADA HAI TANHAAI
JAANE   KIS MUKAAM   PE   ZINDGI   HAI LE AAIE "
APNI KALAM SE NIKLE HUE MOTIYON KO DARD MEIN ITNA NA BHIGOIYE
KE KISI DARD KE SAMANDAR KA EHSAS HONE LAGE. ANY HOW KAMAAL.

NARANG.

bohot bohot shukriyaaa parhne aur pasand karne ke liye...Ab jitne bhi naam dedo kitne bhi rang main dhaaalo tanhaai to tanhaai hi hoti hai..jaan leva...ek musalmusal hajd-o-jahad isse nikalne ki...bas koshish kihai tanhaai ko har muqaam par bikherne ka...Usual Smile

zindagi naam hai jeeye jaane ka
khushiyon ko pakarne ki koshish sa..Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: March 21, 2008, 10:53:25 PM »
Quote from: aarzoomehek on March 21, 2008, 10:35:38 PM
Quote from: GURCHARAN NARANG on March 20, 2008, 11:45:41 PM
WAAH! BEAUTIFUL,WHAT AN EXPRESSION OF TANHAAIE
MEHAKTI, MACHALTI, BIKHARTI ,SULAGTI,BHATAKTI,TARAPTI,SISAKTI, CHHALAKTI HUI TANHAAI. MARVELLOUS KYA ANDAZE BYAAn HAI TANHAAI KA.
"SISAKTE HAI SANNATEY AUR GHAMZADA HAI TANHAAI
JAANE   KIS MUKAAM   PE   ZINDGI   HAI LE AAIE "
APNI KALAM SE NIKLE HUE MOTIYON KO DARD MEIN ITNA NA BHIGOIYE
KE KISI DARD KE SAMANDAR KA EHSAS HONE LAGE. ANY HOW KAMAAL.

NARANG.

bohot bohot shukriyaaa parhne aur pasand karne ke liye...Ab jitne bhi naam dedo kitne bhi rang main dhaaalo tanhaai to tanhaai hi hoti hai..jaan leva...ek musalmusal hajd-o-jahad isse nikalne ki...bas koshish kihai tanhaai ko har muqaam par bikherne ka...Usual Smile

zindagi naam hai jeeye jaane ka
khushiyon ko pakarne ki koshish sa..Usual Smile
Quote from: Pooja on March 21, 2008, 08:12:34 PM
Quote from: aarzoomehek on March 21, 2008, 03:10:49 PM
Quote from: Pooja on March 20, 2008, 11:23:33 PM
Aarzoo Ahh kahuya wah kahu is kavita per!! bahoot khoobsurati se apne tanhaai ko bayan kiya hai..

ek ek shabd dard se lipta hua
ek ek shabd tanhai se siskta hua
dil e khyalaat kaya kahu is per
ek ek armaan hai yaha bikhara hua....

Shukriya pooja for liking it...ab kya keh sakte hai Tanhaai to tanhaai hi hai...chaahe jis rang main bhi zindagi main aai...boht khoobsurat sher se mere kalam ki shobha barhaai hai..Usual Smile

bikhar gai main reza reza hoke
tanhaai ke nazr zindagi karke
ab milta hai sukoon is sannate main
ansuon ke naam jawaani karke

Bikhari tanhaai mai jab ahsaas bikhar jaate hai
madhoshi ke alam mai, khud se hum khud gungunate hai
Dunia kahti hai mujhko deewani uski
hum itne sun kar hi, dekho khush ho jaate hai!!!

Had se guzar kar pyaar main
Naam kar gai aitebaar main
Ab aa bhi jaa dasne lagi tanhaai
Dil machalne laga intezaar main...Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: March 22, 2008, 02:04:47 PM »
Quote from: Aryaan on March 21, 2008, 03:52:33 AM
Very Nice AarzooMehek & Nice Reply Pooja... Applause

thanks for reading Aryaan...Usual Smile
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