Dil ke riste hue fafole hain.

by Sudhir Ashq on February 16, 2013, 04:34:41 AM
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Ishq me nafraton ke shole hain.
Doston, Aap kitne bhole hain.

Raj jo dil ke dil me rakhne the,
Kya kahun, aapne wo khole hain.

Hain ahinsa ke wo pujari,magar
Rakhte haathon me hathgole hain.

Bante hain jo wafa ke pagember,
Sone-chaandi se dil ko tole hain.

Bah rahe hain jo Ashq aankhon se,
Dil ke riste hue fafole hain.

                   -Sudhir Ashq
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«Reply #1 on: February 16, 2013, 04:47:13 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah waah. Bahut khoob likha hai aapne. dheron daad
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«Reply #2 on: February 16, 2013, 06:01:10 AM »
aap chhotee behar badaa kamaal kar rahe hain keep it up
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«Reply #3 on: February 16, 2013, 06:31:03 AM »
wah kya baat hai achi ghazal hai sudhir jee lekin muafi chahuNga akhri shair ka akhri misra samajh nahi aaya

dil ke rishte hue fafole haiN ka kya matlab hai, thoda roshni daleN... icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch
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«Reply #4 on: February 16, 2013, 08:50:07 AM »
Sudhir Jee Aadaab!



Bahut khoob janab, kia kahne aaj bade naye naye aNdaaz ki kalaam padhne
mili hai... aapki yeH kalaam bhi gazab ki rahi janab...

Bade khoob khayaal bayaaN kiye hai.. Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile




Ishq me nafraton ke shole hain.
Doston, Aap kitne bhole hain.

RaZ jo dil ke dil me rakhne the,
Kya kahun, aapne wo khole hain.

Hain ahinsa ke wo pujari,magar
Rakhte haathon me hathgole hain.

Bante hain jo wafa ke pagember,
Sone-chaandi se dil ko tole hain.

Bah rahe hain jo Ashq aankhon se,
Dil ke riste hue fafole hain.

                   -Sudhir Ashq
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«Reply #5 on: February 16, 2013, 09:37:08 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: February 16, 2013, 09:43:54 AM »
Ishq me nafraton ke shole hain.
Doston, Aap kitne bhole hain.

Raj jo dil ke dil me rakhne the,
Kya kahun, aapne wo khole hain.

Hain ahinsa ke wo pujari,magar
Rakhte haathon me hathgole hain.

Bante hain jo wafa ke pagember,
Sone-chaandi se dil ko tole hain.

Bah rahe hain jo Ashq aankhon se,
Dil ke riste hue fafole hain.

                   -Sudhir Ashq


waaaaaaaaah achcha kafia hai.........!
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«Reply #7 on: February 16, 2013, 10:28:30 AM »
Ishq me nafraton ke shole hain.
Doston, Aap kitne bhole hain.

Raj jo dil ke dil me rakhne the,
Kya kahun, aapne wo khole hain.

Hain ahinsa ke wo pujari,magar
Rakhte haathon me hathgole hain.

Bante hain jo wafa ke pagember,
Sone-chaandi se dil ko tole hain.

Bah rahe hain jo Ashq aankhon se,
Dil ke riste hue fafole hain.

                   -Sudhir Ashq
very well written ..keep writing
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«Reply #8 on: February 16, 2013, 10:52:46 AM »
Ishq me nafraton ke shole hain.
Doston, Aap kitne bhole hain.

Raj jo dil ke dil me rakhne the,
Kya kahun, aapne wo khole hain.

Hain ahinsa ke wo pujari,magar
Rakhte haathon me hathgole hain.

Bante hain jo wafa ke pagember,
Sone-chaandi se dil ko tole hain.

Bah rahe hain jo Ashq aankhon se,
Dil ke riste hue fafole hain.

                   -Sudhir Ashq

waaaaaah... bahut khoob.
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«Reply #9 on: February 17, 2013, 03:53:16 AM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #10 on: February 18, 2013, 04:42:33 AM »
wah
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