Dil ki aag in ashko se bujh jaati to achha hota

by KKSKRISHNA on October 30, 2012, 03:42:38 PM
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Dil ki aag in ashko se bujh jaati to achha hota,
bahut jatan kiye bahut pukaara jo ruk jaate to achha hota,
pyar ke saazo par humne the geet likhe agar mere sang gaa paate to achha hota,
tamanna thi unn hotho ki kaliyo ko choone ki phool agar wo khil jaate to achha hota,
tere pyar ke dum se jo ye thi jaan meri YE SAANSE BHI LE JAATE TO ACHHA HOTA.
 
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«Reply #1 on: October 30, 2012, 03:57:03 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: October 30, 2012, 06:41:54 PM »
Quote from: KKSKRISHNA on October 30, 2012, 03:42:38 PM
Dil ki aag in ashko se bujh jaati to achha hota,
bahut jatan kiye bahut pukaara jo ruk jaate to achha hota,
pyar ke saazo par humne the geet likhe agar mere sang gaa paate to achha hota,
tamanna thi unn hotho ki kaliyo ko choone ki phool agar wo khil jaate to achha hota,
tere pyar ke dum se jo ye thi jaan meri YE SAANSE BHI LE JAATE TO ACHHA HOTA.
 


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«Reply #3 on: October 31, 2012, 12:45:58 AM »
bahut khoob Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: October 31, 2012, 02:47:33 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut hi umda
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«Reply #5 on: October 31, 2012, 03:31:44 AM »
bahut khub  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: October 31, 2012, 04:08:51 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: October 31, 2012, 06:00:03 AM »
Bahut khoob behad shandaar creation Krishna ji ..
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«Reply #8 on: October 31, 2012, 09:11:42 AM »
bohat khoob,........
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