$Dil ki aag.....$

by Style_guru on November 10, 2005, 08:21:52 PM
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The Style Guru says:


Ab ke dil ko yoon saza di humne,
Unki har baat bhula di humne,
ek ek phool bahut yaad aaya,
Shakh-e-gul jab wo jala di humne,
Shaher-e-jahan raakh se aabaad hua,
Aag jab dil ki bujha di humne........
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Meena
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«Reply #1 on: November 17, 2005, 10:53:44 PM »
beautiful... last 4 liens to bohot hi achi lagi!!! keep it up!

 :D
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #2 on: November 17, 2005, 11:19:11 PM »
very  nice  style_guru
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roshni246
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«Reply #3 on: November 18, 2005, 11:34:30 AM »
very nice stlye guru

Unki yaad me sab kuch bhulaye baithe hai,
Chirag khushiyon ke jalaye baithe hai,
Hum marenge unki hi bahon me,
Maut se bhi yehi shart lagaye baithe hai.
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #4 on: November 18, 2005, 01:16:50 PM »
wah wah wah good one u both.........and great work roshni
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tushar_4u_im
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«Reply #5 on: November 18, 2005, 02:51:35 PM »
Quote from: "roshni246"
very nice stlye guru

Unki yaad me sab kuch bhulaye baithe hai,
Chirag khushiyon ke jalaye baithe hai,
Hum marenge unki hi bahon me,
Maut se bhi yehi shart lagaye baithe hai.



yadd me teri  sab kuch bhulaye ja raha hu ......

aapni khushiyo ko bhi aag lagaye ja raha hu ......

teri chahat me hua hiu barbab na jane kab se mai.,......

phir bhi tere aane ki aasss lagaye ja raha  hu......
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«Reply #6 on: November 18, 2005, 07:05:27 PM »
Thanx a lot every one and Roshu........

Ab arz hai.......

Jab paas ho to ruKh se nigaahen na modna,
Jab door ho to mera tasavvur na chhodna,
Ae dost dil lagaane se pahle ye soch le,
Mushkil bahut hai rishton ki zanjeeren todna…..
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Style_guru
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«Reply #7 on: December 16, 2005, 06:53:35 PM »
The Style Guru Says.....

Thanx every1 for the support on this post.........

Ab arz hai.....

Ek wamanda rahru ke liye,
Sange rahe safar hi kya kam hai,
Koi taskeene jawadeen hi na yahan,
Rahate mukhtasar hi kya kam hai……
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Saman Firdaus
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«Reply #8 on: December 09, 2013, 05:33:38 AM »
Niceee onee... Applause Applause
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