punam
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« on: February 19, 2008, 11:11:18 AM » |
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jab logon ne kaha main aap ke kabil nahi
dil ko samjhaya yehan mera koi kaam nahi..
main tanha reh gayi zindagi ke safar me
saath mere tanhai ke siva kuch bhi nahi...
aaj apne zakhm kis ko dikhaun..
jab khuda bhi aaj mujhpe meharban nahi...
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Pooja
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« Reply #1 on: February 19, 2008, 11:39:04 AM » |
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bahoot khoob Punam
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zakhmola
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« Reply #2 on: February 19, 2008, 12:00:46 PM » |
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Usne Dil ke badley Dard diya
khushi manao lein-dein poora toh kiya...
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« Reply #3 on: February 19, 2008, 12:03:28 PM » |
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ha ha bahoot khoob zakhmola ji!!! apke comments pard kar to yahi man mai ayya...
Be Positive..
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khwaish
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« Reply #4 on: February 19, 2008, 12:43:24 PM » |
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kaun kehta hai ke aap uss shaks ke kaabil nahi
kabhi puchna uske dil se, aapko jawaab milega
aap ka koi saani nahi...
kyon kehte ho sirf tanhai hai aapki zindagi mein
aapse khoobsurat insaan koi nahi hoga,
iss baat pat kisi ko hairaani nahi...
hum to dua karte hai ke zindagi mein aapke
koi gham na ho,par yaad rakhna aap
bina dard aur imtehaan ke bhi koi zindegani nahi....
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Pooja
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« Reply #5 on: February 19, 2008, 12:53:10 PM » |
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nice reply khwaish!!
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punam
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« Reply #6 on: February 20, 2008, 07:42:59 AM » |
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bahoot khoob Punam
Thanx pooja di.. |
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punam
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« Reply #7 on: February 20, 2008, 07:45:21 AM » |
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kaun kehta hai ke aap uss shaks ke kaabil nahi
kabhi puchna uske dil se, aapko jawaab milega
aap ka koi saani nahi...
kyon kehte ho sirf tanhai hai aapki zindagi mein
aapse khoobsurat insaan koi nahi hoga,
iss baat pat kisi ko hairaani nahi...
hum to dua karte hai ke zindagi mein aapke
koi gham na ho,par yaad rakhna aap
bina dard aur imtehaan ke bhi koi zindegani nahi....
thanx khwaish ji..yehan reply kiye aap..bahot acha likhe aap ne.. |
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« Reply #8 on: February 20, 2008, 08:52:28 AM » |
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bahut acha likha hai punam ...
khwaish ji aapka reply bhi utna hi acha hai
zakhmola ne ek hi shair me sab kah diya
good
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punam
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« Reply #9 on: February 20, 2008, 10:39:03 AM » |
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Thanx samnoj ji...
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« Reply #10 on: February 20, 2008, 10:43:08 AM » |
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Mile jab iss baar hum..aap kuch badle badle se lage
dil ne poocha humse kahin yeh hamari nazar ka dhoka toh nahi..
aap milne aaye sahi par..
kaise kaate din bagair aap ke yeh poocha hi nahi..
chehre se kuch chupane ki koshish aap karte rahe
yeh aap badal gaye k koi majboori hai samajh me aaya nahi...
dil sawal karta raha samjhana chaha mujhe par
aap ki berookhi chup na saki iss nazar se..
aap kyun badal gaye yeh aap se pooch payi hi nahi..
milne ki khushi se neend udd gayi raat ko par
aaj milne k baad kab neend aayegi yeh hame maaloom nahi...
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« Reply #11 on: February 20, 2008, 10:47:46 AM » |
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wah punam bahoot hi acha likha hai!!!
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« Reply #12 on: February 21, 2008, 02:13:51 AM » |
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Bohat acha likha hai punam dear.. 
Dil koh samjha na muskil hai..
Na samjhe woh dil ki pareshani aisa dard hai..
Hum aasu chupakar rehete hai aur woh mukar jate hai..
Mohabatt mein hoti hai taklif itni yeh toh muskil hai..
Dard-e-tanhai bhi sahe liya hum ney yeh aise uljan hai..
Na rokh sake yeh pyaar toh ek haseen kwabh hai.
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« Reply #13 on: February 21, 2008, 07:29:37 AM » |
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bahut ache punam n honey
ho ke mayoos na aangan se ukhado paude
dhoop barsi hai yaha to barish bhi yahi per hogi
nm
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« Reply #14 on: February 21, 2008, 07:39:46 AM » |
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Thanx pooja di...
Thanx Honey di...bahot acha likha aapne ..
Thanx samnoj ji...nice sharing ji..
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