DIL MEIN REHNE WALO NE

by BHONDU on July 14, 2006, 04:16:53 AM
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Dard se phutte hue bola pairo ke chalo ne ,
Door banaya ghar kyn itna dil mein rahnewalo ne,
Deker aapna lahu jigar ka seech rahe hum her pal,
Khusboo dene se bhi mana kiya aaj un baharo ne,
Dil mein bas ker tod diya dil, dil mein rehnewalo ne
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«Reply #1 on: July 14, 2006, 04:20:40 AM »
Quote from: "BHONDU"
Dard se phutte hue bola pairo ke chalo ne ,
Door banaya ghar kyn itna dil mein rahnewalo ne,
Deker aapna lahu jigar ka seech rahe hum her pal,
Khusboo dene se bhi mana kiya aaj un baharo ne,
Dil mein bas ker tod diya dil, dil mein rehnewalo ne


Wah kya baat hai Kavi dost.....Sach me relly Awesome

Jiske Dhoonde humne Nishan......
Unki Mehek bhi haath na lag saki......

Bas tha paas mere ek hee Kamjor Dil......
Tootne ke baad uski bhi Laash mujhe na mill saki......

Aye Sanam tukde kar hazaar Dil ke.....
Use Dafan hee kar dia hota......

Na thee use Char kandho ki Jaroorat.....
Bas apne Najuk haathon se Kabr me phaink dia hota........!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #2 on: July 14, 2006, 04:48:33 AM »
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Wah kya baat hai Kavi dost.....Sach me relly Awesome

Jiske Dhoonde humne Nishan......
Unki Mehek bhi haath na lag saki......

Bas tha paas mere ek hee Kamjor Dil......
Tootne ke baad uski bhi Laash mujhe na mill saki......

Aye Sanam tukde kar hazaar Dil ke.....
Use Dafan hee kar dia hota......

Na thee use Char kandho ki Jaroorat.....
Bas apne Najuk haathon se Kabr me phaink dia hota........!!!!!!!!!


bahut aacha likha hai sach mein BS ji...

unki saansoo ki mahak mere dil per cha gayi hai.
unki khamoshi humko pyaar seekha gayi hai.
unki moujoodgi ne khusiyoon ka her sama bandha
unki ruksati humko tadpa gayi hai

dard se bheg jati aankhe ye dard nhi jaata
soochta hu kaash kabhi ye dil na lagata.
laash ban gaya hu maut ke intzaar mein
adhmare aashiq ko to dafnaya bhi nhi jaata
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«Reply #3 on: July 14, 2006, 07:58:14 AM »
too good to give any comment yaar......

sadion pehle teri chuwan ka ehsasa aaj bhi hai
tere gesuon ke wo haseen shaam aaj bhi hai
yaadon mai tera chehra taaza aaj bhi hai
jo tu nahi sath mere tere badan ki mehak
saanso mai mere aaj bhi hai.......
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«Reply #4 on: July 14, 2006, 09:21:37 AM »
bahut khoob ......

unke khayal se bad kar koi khayal nahi
yeh hum unke pyaar mein dub kar samjhe
jab dekha sahare ke liye unki taraf hamne
toh woh hamari baat samjh ke bhi na samjhe
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«Reply #5 on: July 14, 2006, 02:45:14 PM »
nice work all
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«Reply #6 on: July 15, 2006, 01:31:06 PM »
Quote from: "vikas2210"
too good to give any comment yaar......

sadion pehle teri chuwan ka ehsasa aaj bhi hai
tere gesuon ke wo haseen shaam aaj bhi hai
yaadon mai tera chehra taaza aaj bhi hai
jo tu nahi sath mere tere badan ki mehak
saanso mai mere aaj bhi hai.......


tum roothti rahi hum tumko manate rahe.
teri ibaadat mein hum sar jhukate rahe.
tere badan ki khusboo ko sanso mein samate rahe .
tera chehra kabhi murjha na jaye isliye ashq bahate rahe.
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«Reply #7 on: July 15, 2006, 04:34:37 PM »
Gud Job Ranju.....Vikas and Kavi ji

Bheegi ho jab Palkein......
Toh Dil me ehsaas tera paata hoon......

Bhool jata Deen Dunia main......
Par tujhe kyu Bhula nahi pata hoon......

Tu toh Dil ke Dard se saji ek Saiez hai......
Jaise Badnaami Ka manzar hamara hairatangez hai......!!!!!!!
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«Reply #8 on: July 16, 2006, 06:27:46 AM »
Quote from: "badnaam_shayar"
Gud Job Ranju.....Vikas and Kavi ji

Bheegi ho jab Palkein......
Toh Dil me ehsaas tera paata hoon......

Bhool jata Deen Dunia main......
Par tujhe kyu Bhula nahi pata hoon......

Tu toh Dil ke Dard se saji ek Saiez hai......
Jaise Badnaami Ka manzar hamara hairatangez hai......!!!!!!!


palke beegti hai bas kisi ke gujar jaane se,
ya phir bheegti hai teri yaad aane se.

chorker tu humko kyn ker gayi tanha,
galti to ho hi jaati hai akasar anjaane se.

ab to karam ker de aur... aa jaa bahon mein.
ki dard chalakta jaa raha hai mere paimaane se
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