Dil Par Haath Rakh Kar Keh Do "Khwaish":Shayri-E-Dard

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Saath Chalne Ko To Chale The Sabhi lekin.....!!!!!
Meri Manzil Tak Kaa Saathi Sirf Mera Saaya Nikla!!!!!!

Udaas Hoon Par Tujhse Naraaz Nahi
Tere Dil Mein Hoon Par paas Nahi

Jhoot Kahoon To Sab Kuch hai Paas Mere!!!
Sach kahoon To Tere Siwa Kuch Khaas Nahi

AankhoN Ki Namee Ne Waise To Sab Kuch Hi Keh Diya
Thak Gaya Hoon Par Bhujti Kabhi Pyaas Nahi

JazbaatoN Ke Dam Par Zinda Hai Yahan kayee Rishte!!
Dooriyan Badh Jaane Par Bhi Marte Kabhi Ehsaas Nahi

"Khwaish" Kyon Jhoot kehte Ho ke Sab Kuch Bhoola Diya.!!
Dil Par Haath Rakhkar keh Do,Ab Koi Dil mein Aas Nahi

~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


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Re: Dil Par Haath Rakh Kar Keh Do "Khwaish"

«Reply #1 on: February 18, 2012, 03:51:43 PM »

bahut bahut khoob khwaish ji.
aap salaamat rahen.
kya zazbaat bayan kiye hain.
specially
1st four lines.

Quote from: khwaish on February 18, 2012, 03:29:35 PM

Saath Chalne Ko To Chale The Sabhi lekin.....!!!!!
Meri Manzil Tak Kaa Saathi Sirf Mera Saaya Nikla!!!!!!

Udaas Hoon Par Usse Naraaz Nahi
Uske Dil Mein Hoon Par paas Nahi

Jhoot Kahoon To Sab Kuch hai Paas Mere!!!
Sach kahoon To Tere Siwa Kuch Khaas Nahi

AankhoN Ki Namee Ne Waise To Sab Kuch Hi Keh Diya
Thak Gaya Hoon Par Bhujti Kabhi Pyaas Nahi

JazbaatoN Ke Dam Par Zinda Hai Yahan kayee Rishte!!
Dooriyan Badh Jaane Par Bhi Marte Kabhi Ehsaas Nahi

"Khwaish" Kyon Jhoot kehte Ho ke Sab Kuch Bhoola Diya.!!
Dil Par Haath Rakhkar keh Do,Ab Koi Dil mein Aas Nahi

~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


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Re: Dil Par Haath Rakh Kar Keh Do "Khwaish"

«Reply #2 on: February 18, 2012, 05:15:35 PM »

wah wah kya khoobsurati aur sagdi se lafzon ko piroya hai, shuru se akhir tak sabhi ashaar khoob kahen hain aapne khwaish ji, bohat achcha laga aapki is khoobsurat peshkash ko parhkar khoob
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Re: Dil Par Haath Rakh Kar Keh Do "Khwaish"

«Reply #3 on: February 18, 2012, 05:16:00 PM »

Bahut bahut khoob Khwaish ji
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Saath Chalne Ko To Chale The Sabhi lekin.....!!!!!
Meri Manzil Tak Kaa Saathi Sirf Mera Saaya Nikla!!!!!! Applause


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Re: Dil Par Haath Rakh Kar Keh Do "Khwaish"

«Reply #4 on: February 18, 2012, 05:44:45 PM »

Khawaish ji bahot achhi nazm kahi aapne. Mubarakbad aur daad pesh hai.


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Re: Dil Par Haath Rakh Kar Keh Do "Khwaish"

«Reply #5 on: February 18, 2012, 07:21:40 PM »

sach kehta hoon Khwaish ji
dil me ghr kar gai aapki kalaam
aapne jis khhobi se aaghaz ko anjaam tak pahuchaya--
kabil e tareef hai janaab
bht saadgi se dil ke zazbaat kah gye--

dili daad aor mubarakbad
khus rahen
muskurate rahen

aap ek jadugar hain
likhte rahie


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Re: Dil Par Haath Rakh Kar Keh Do "Khwaish"

«Reply #6 on: February 19, 2012, 02:33:59 AM »

bahut khoob. nicely written.


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Re: Dil Par Haath Rakh Kar Keh Do "Khwaish"

«Reply #7 on: February 19, 2012, 03:40:51 AM »

boht khoob janab daad kabol karen


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Re: Dil Par Haath Rakh Kar Keh Do "Khwaish"

«Reply #8 on: February 19, 2012, 03:43:50 AM »

boht khoob janab daad kabol karen


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Re: Dil Par Haath Rakh Kar Keh Do "Khwaish"

«Reply #9 on: February 19, 2012, 06:38:43 AM »

bahut khoob kahaa khwaish ji badhaai ho


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Re: Dil Par Haath Rakh Kar Keh Do "Khwaish"

«Reply #10 on: February 19, 2012, 07:07:46 AM »

bahut behytrin peskas khwaish ji notworthy


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Re: Dil Par Haath Rakh Kar Keh Do "Khwaish"

«Reply #11 on: February 19, 2012, 09:05:23 AM »

Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on February 18, 2012, 03:51:43 PM

bahut bahut khoob khwaish ji.
aap salaamat rahen.
kya zazbaat bayan kiye hain.
specially
1st four lines.

Inn Duawon Ke Liye Aapka bahut bahut Shukriya Sureshji

Aapki Daad Sar Aankhon par


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Re: Dil Par Haath Rakh Kar Keh Do "Khwaish"

«Reply #12 on: February 19, 2012, 12:38:57 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on February 18, 2012, 03:29:35 PM

good.........!


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Re: Dil Par Haath Rakh Kar Keh Do "Khwaish"

«Reply #13 on: February 19, 2012, 04:18:21 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on February 18, 2012, 03:29:35 PM

Waaaaaaaaaaaah! Waaaaaaaaaaaah! Khwaish ji kya baat hai. Bahut khoob.
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