Dil Rota Raha

by Aryan Raj on December 10, 2013, 06:06:44 AM
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aankh thi bhari, dil rota raha.
Tuta tha dil, jhuthi muskan sajaye ghoomta raha.
Apno ke diye dard ko hum kaise bhool jaye,
Dil tha ki bar bar rota hi raha,
Darkar na thi unse, wo aisa rup dikhayenge,
Kabr me sookun se mai sota raha,
Chand lamhe beet gaye,
Beet gai wo kali amawas ki rat,
Surkh sangeeno ke saye me,
Bs do gaj kafan me mai sota raha!!!
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«Reply #1 on: December 10, 2013, 09:25:30 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: December 10, 2013, 09:54:07 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: December 10, 2013, 02:49:29 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: December 10, 2013, 03:45:17 PM »
good work.


dear mene aapki post ko Shayri e dard section m move kiya hai--

kosis karie ki aap apni poetries ko appropriate section me hi post Karen..
aur agr iss bare me kuch puchna ho to mujhe ya phir Yoindia Shayariadab ke dusre monitors ko PM kar skte hain..

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Thank u sir.
Mai new hun. Forum samjhne me kuch samay lagega. Thanks for helping me.
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«Reply #5 on: December 10, 2013, 03:47:39 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: December 10, 2013, 03:49:16 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: December 10, 2013, 05:23:03 PM »
bahut khoob Aryan ji.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: December 10, 2013, 06:09:23 PM »
wha wha bhut khub
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«Reply #9 on: December 10, 2013, 08:14:05 PM »
Bahut khooooooooooooob...
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«Reply #10 on: December 10, 2013, 11:38:53 PM »
bahut khoob Aryan ji.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: December 10, 2013, 11:40:24 PM »
wha wha bhut khub
Shukriya bhai
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«Reply #12 on: December 10, 2013, 11:41:27 PM »
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«Reply #13 on: December 11, 2013, 02:45:21 PM »
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