*~Dil ~*

by honeyrose on December 13, 2008, 01:25:39 PM
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Dil diya dard liya tere pyaar mein humne kya kya na kiya
Tumare ulfat mein meine kudh ko khoya kya kya na kiya

Dil diya dard liya sanam tere pyaar mein duniya gawaya
Samajh kar tere wafa ko humne ashq tohfe mein liya
 
Kuch lamhon ko yaad kiya kuch seene mein chupaya
Katm ho chuki hai pyaar ki dastan humne dard tohfe mein liya..

__________honeyrose_________
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #1 on: December 13, 2008, 01:34:34 PM »
Quote from: honeyrose on December 13, 2008, 01:25:39 PM
Dil diya dard liya tere pyaar mein humne kya kya na kiya
Tumare ulfat mein meine kudh ko khoya kya kya na kiya

Dil diya dard liya sanam tere pyaar mein duniya gawaya
Samajh kar tere wafa ko humne ashq tohfe mein liya
 
Kuch lamhon ko yaad kiya kuch seene mein chupaya
Katm ho chuki hai pyaar ki dastan humne dard tohfe mein liya..

__________honeyrose_________

bahut hi accha kaha aap neh


DIL DEY KEY HI DARD MILTA HAI
ABB TOH SAPNEY MEH HI WOH MILTA HAI
KYA JANEY KYA HOGEY AAGEY
JIWAN MEH NA JANEY ABB HUMEY KYA MILTA HAI


JASBIR SINGH
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honeyrose
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«Reply #2 on: December 13, 2008, 01:40:49 PM »
Quote from: jasbirsingh on December 13, 2008, 01:34:34 PM
bahut hi accha kaha aap neh


DIL DEY KEY HI DARD MILTA HAI
ABB TOH SAPNEY MEH HI WOH MILTA HAI
KYA JANEY KYA HOGEY AAGEY
JIWAN MEH NA JANEY ABB HUMEY KYA MILTA HAI


JASBIR SINGH

Shukriya Jasbir ji
aur khoob likha hai aapne...
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #3 on: December 13, 2008, 01:44:36 PM »
Quote from: honeyrose on December 13, 2008, 01:40:49 PM
Shukriya Jasbir ji
aur khoob likha hai aapne...




THANKS HONEY


JASBIR SINGH
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #4 on: December 13, 2008, 08:52:02 PM »
Quote from: honeyrose on December 13, 2008, 01:25:39 PM
Dil diya dard liya tere pyaar mein humne kya kya na kiya
Tumare ulfat mein meine kudh ko khoya kya kya na kiya

Dil diya dard liya sanam tere pyaar mein duniya gawaya
Samajh kar tere wafa ko humne ashq tohfe mein liya
 
Kuch lamhon ko yaad kiya kuch seene mein chupaya
Katm ho chuki hai pyaar ki dastan humne dard tohfe mein liya..

__________honeyrose_________
Nice Honey Ji
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Deepati
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«Reply #5 on: December 14, 2008, 12:53:08 AM »
Quote from: honeyrose on December 13, 2008, 01:25:39 PM
Dil diya dard liya tere pyaar mein humne kya kya na kiya
Tumare ulfat mein meine kudh ko khoya kya kya na kiya

Dil diya dard liya sanam tere pyaar mein duniya gawaya
Samajh kar tere wafa ko humne ashq tohfe mein liya
 
Kuch lamhon ko yaad kiya kuch seene mein chupaya
Katm ho chuki hai pyaar ki dastan humne dard tohfe mein liya..

__________honeyrose_________

Very nicely written, Honey Ji
Quote from: jasbirsingh on December 13, 2008, 01:34:34 PM
bahut hi accha kaha aap neh


DIL DEY KEY HI DARD MILTA HAI
ABB TOH SAPNEY MEH HI WOH MILTA HAI
KYA JANEY KYA HOGEY AAGEY
JIWAN MEH NA JANEY ABB HUMEY KYA MILTA HAI


JASBIR SINGH

Nice reply, Jasbir Ji
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taheer khaja
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«Reply #6 on: December 14, 2008, 07:27:51 AM »
honeyrose ji..jasbirsingh ji..aap dono ka jawaab nahi
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #7 on: December 14, 2008, 08:30:15 AM »
Quote from: Deepati on December 14, 2008, 12:53:08 AM
Very nicely written, Honey Ji
Nice reply, Jasbir Ji


Thanks Deepati

JASBIR SINGH
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #8 on: December 14, 2008, 08:31:18 AM »
Quote from: taheer khaja on December 14, 2008, 07:27:51 AM
honeyrose ji..jasbirsingh ji..aap dono ka jawaab nahi

THANKS TAHEER

JASBIR SINGH
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honeyrose
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«Reply #9 on: December 14, 2008, 06:51:19 PM »
Thank you Jasbir ji... notworthy
Thank you Rajesh ji... notworthy
Thanks deepti dear... notworthy

Thanks taheer ji... notworthy
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #10 on: December 14, 2008, 07:07:07 PM »
DIL SEY JAB DIL KI BAAT KARTEY HAI
UNHI KA BUS NAAM JAPTEY HAI
SUBAH SHAAM BUS EK HI KAAM KARTEY HAI
HUM AAJ BHI DIL SEY UNHEY PYAR KARTE HAI


JASBIR SINGH
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