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by nishita on January 11, 2005, 04:29:56 PM
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yog
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«Reply #15 on: January 13, 2005, 06:06:21 PM »
Quote from: "nishita"
Ek zara si bhool khata ban gayi,
Meri waffayein hi saza ban gayi,....
Dil liya aur khel ke tod diya unhone.....
humari jaan gayi aur unki ada ban gayi .



HAMMRI ADDA KA NAHI HAI KOI KASOOOR
BHOOL ASSSI HAI KOI JAROOOR
DIL NAHI THAA KHILONA JO TOOOT JATA ESSSAY
JAAN TUMHARI JAYEGI TO HAM KASEY JEYENGAY HAJOOR !!!
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Meena
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dil
«Reply #16 on: January 13, 2005, 09:33:37 PM »
Quote from: "nishita"
thanks both

Tum hi jante the hum ko
koi anjaan to nahiN haiN hum,
Tum to yeh hii samjhtey ho na!
ke be-Waffa ho gaye hum..

Tum bhi majboor they or kuch
be-bass bhii ho gaye hum,
Koi qasoor nahiN hum donoN ka
Waffa hi thi hum maiN kam..

nm


wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! just love it! well said!!!

 :D
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #17 on: January 13, 2005, 09:41:34 PM »
Quote from: "yog"
Quote from: "nishita"
Ek zara si bhool khata ban gayi,
Meri waffayein hi saza ban gayi,....
Dil liya aur khel ke tod diya unhone.....
humari jaan gayi aur unki ada ban gayi .



HAMMRI ADDA KA NAHI HAI KOI KASOOOR
BHOOL ASSSI HAI KOI JAROOOR
DIL NAHI THAA KHILONA JO TOOOT JATA ESSSAY
JAAN TUMHARI JAYEGI TO HAM KASEY JEYENGAY HAJOOR !!!


wow superb work all................very touching words...........

hamari shuratoon ki mout be-naam-o-nishan hogi
na koi tazkira hoga na koi daastaan hogi....................
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Nino
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«Reply #18 on: January 13, 2005, 10:03:54 PM »
Quote from: "nishita"
Ek zara si bhool khata ban gayi,
Meri waffayein hi saza ban gayi,....
Dil liya aur khel ke tod diya unhone.....
humari jaan gayi aur unki ada ban gayi .



too good nishita

aap ke liye

Bhoole se kahin bhool na kar dena
apni wafaawo ko apni aada na bana dena
jaan dene ki karti ho tum baat yahaan
kabhi pyaar mein koi khata na ker dena

mein to sajjde main khoya raha unke din raat
kabhi unhe qaber se uhtta ke kahin jagga na dene
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Nino
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dil
«Reply #19 on: January 13, 2005, 10:07:53 PM »
Quote from: "nishita"
Kisi ke saamne roye to hai ruswai Aansu ki
Hame Rona agar aaya to hum chup chup ke ro lenge
Khile they phul gulshan mein sawarne aur mehakne ko
Kise malum tha wo ashk se palke bigho denge




Good work again


ek koshish

Zindagi roone ka nahi jeene ka naam hai
gulshan koi kizan ka nahi bahaar ka naam hai
is tarha na bighoona mere gulshan ko aansoowo se
phoolo se kabhi puchoo ki mohabat kis bala ka naam hai
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Nino
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dil
«Reply #20 on: January 13, 2005, 10:14:01 PM »
Quote from: "nishita"
Rahenge saamne lekin, aadhar apne na kholenge
Shabdh hai hum kitabo ke, chup reh rehkar bolenge
Hamari reshmi muskaan ek rangeen dhaga hai
Girenge Aankh se moti to dhage mein piro lenge


Good one

Arz hai


Na pirona in motiyoon ko ye ab kis kaam ke
kahi koi bazaar mein na bik sakenge ye ab kis dam ke
hum ne to chood di sari kitabein tere ishq mein
ab to bas dhai aksher prem ke hi hain mere kaam ke
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Meena
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dil
«Reply #21 on: January 13, 2005, 10:23:40 PM »
brillientttttttt waheed ji and nino ji!

 :D
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bond
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dil
«Reply #22 on: January 14, 2005, 12:50:56 AM »
Quote from: "thycreator"
Quote from: "nishita"
waah creator gud one.. Usual Smile very intense..!

Rahenge saamne lekin, aadhar apne na kholenge
Shabdh hai hum kitabo ke, chup reh rehkar bolenge
Hamari reshmi muskaan ek rangeen dhaga hai
Girenge Aankh se moti to dhage mein piro lenge


Wow, heavy duty stuff....ek koshish karta hu jawab ki....agar na de pau toh mafi chahunga...

Apke larazte hoton ko toh khulna hoga,
Apki surmayi aawaz ko ghulna hoga.
Apki reshmi muskan ho sada kayam,
Ab in aankh ke moti ko bhi rukna hoga.
Ye mana waqt ne kiye hai tumpe sitam kai,
Kissi ke pyar mein phir bhi tumhe jhukna hoga.



grrr8...grr888....stuff buddy......ek baat to kehna hi padega..ki pune waaloon ka jawab nahi....lolzzz
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dil
«Reply #23 on: January 14, 2005, 06:14:23 PM »
Quote from: "bond"
Quote from: "thycreator"
Quote from: "nishita"
waah creator gud one.. Usual Smile very intense..!

Rahenge saamne lekin, aadhar apne na kholenge
Shabdh hai hum kitabo ke, chup reh rehkar bolenge
Hamari reshmi muskaan ek rangeen dhaga hai
Girenge Aankh se moti to dhage mein piro lenge


Wow, heavy duty stuff....ek koshish karta hu jawab ki....agar na de pau toh mafi chahunga...

Apke larazte hoton ko toh khulna hoga,
Apki surmayi aawaz ko ghulna hoga.
Apki reshmi muskan ho sada kayam,
Ab in aankh ke moti ko bhi rukna hoga.
Ye mana waqt ne kiye hai tumpe sitam kai,
Kissi ke pyar mein phir bhi tumhe jhukna hoga.



grrr8...grr888....stuff buddy......ek baat to kehna hi padega..ki pune waaloon ka jawab nahi....lolzzz


lolzz bond ..bas puna puna karte raho tum :lol:  hum mumbai walo ka bhi jawab nahi Winking
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nishita
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dil
«Reply #24 on: January 14, 2005, 06:15:23 PM »
wowowooww ninooo and waheed too good.. Usual Smile gus one yog..Usual Smile

thankssssss meena Usual Smile
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Just_Hate_Love
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dil
«Reply #25 on: January 15, 2005, 01:01:55 PM »
teri rahon mein ankhen bichhaye bethe hain...
tere ane ki umeed lagaye bethe hain....
jo rehti hain saanse seene mein dil ke saath...
ab to vo bhi hum tushpe lutaye bethe hain
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sandhaya
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dil
«Reply #26 on: January 15, 2005, 01:25:43 PM »
nice job by all of u
very nice nishita,nino ji, creator, waheed ji

mahobaat ka diya jala kar tuh dekho
zara dil ki duniya basa kar tuh dekho
tumhe ho na jaye mahobaat tuh kehna
jara hum se dil laga ke tuh dekho.
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Just_Hate_Love
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dil
«Reply #27 on: January 15, 2005, 02:09:05 PM »
Nice one Sandhyaji...


Baaki kuch na raha ab is zamane main,
Jawani guzar rahi hai maikhane main,
Ab to karle meri dosti pe yakeen zaalim,
warna zindagi guzar jaayegi aazmaane main.
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Meena
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dil
«Reply #28 on: January 15, 2005, 11:15:05 PM »
nice everyone!!!

 :D
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nishita
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dil
«Reply #29 on: January 17, 2005, 12:50:56 PM »
wowww sandhya n just hate ji
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