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by nishita on January 11, 2005, 04:29:56 PM
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sandhaya
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«Reply #30 on: January 17, 2005, 12:56:44 PM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Nice one Sandhyaji...


Baaki kuch na raha ab is zamane main,
Jawani guzar rahi hai maikhane main,
Ab to karle meri dosti pe yakeen zaalim,
warna zindagi guzar jaayegi aazmaane main.


kuch rahe na rahe zamane mein tere saath hum tuh hain
aise kaise gujar jayegi teri jawani yuhi
tu tuh meri nazaron ke maikhane mein hain
karte hain hum teri dosti par yakeen khud se bhi jyada
lekin zindagi mein dosti ka maza kahi kabhi aazmane mein hai
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tanha dil tanha safar
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«Reply #31 on: January 17, 2005, 01:06:42 PM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Nice one Sandhyaji...


Baaki kuch na raha ab is zamane main,
Jawani guzar rahi hai maikhane main,
Ab to karle meri dosti pe yakeen zaalim,
warna zindagi guzar jaayegi aazmaane main.


very well!!!

Aaj phir woh muskuraana jaan meri le gayaa
aankh sharmaa kar milaana jaan meri le gayaa

Jaan par tha intezaar-e-yaar to bhaari bohot
har ahat pey uskaa aana jaan meri le gayaa

Ek adaa sey apna aanchal ungliyoun mein baandhna
aur phir nazrein uthana jaan meri le gayaa

Jhoom kar angdaayi sey woh faasloun ko torna
aur achanak aazmana jaan meri le gayaa .
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dil
«Reply #32 on: January 17, 2005, 04:41:26 PM »
wah sandhya ..just hate and tanha dil

Door Jo Aaj Hain
Yaad Aate To Hain
Khwab Adhure Sahi
Khwab Sahare To Hain
Aaj Bhi Meri
Rahein Rokti Hain
Yaadein Teri
Daman Khenchti Hain
Bhool Chukhe
Hain Jo Humein
Yaad Aate To Hain
Sadion Ke Fasley
Aaj Hain Darmian
Hojayein Magar
Jitni Bhi Dorian
Aap Jahaan Bhi Rahein
Aap Hamare To Hain
Khwab Adhure Sahi
Khwab Sahare To Hain
Janey Phir Kab Miley
Tere Mere Raastey
Aas Tootey Nahin
Yaad Itna Rahey
Raat Dhalni To Hain
Aane Ujale To Hain

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«Reply #33 on: January 17, 2005, 04:46:42 PM »
bahut ache nishi
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«Reply #34 on: January 17, 2005, 04:52:23 PM »
thank u Usual Smile
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sandhaya
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dil
«Reply #35 on: January 17, 2005, 05:10:01 PM »
Quote from: "tanha dil tanha safar"
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Nice one Sandhyaji...


Baaki kuch na raha ab is zamane main,
Jawani guzar rahi hai maikhane main,
Ab to karle meri dosti pe yakeen zaalim,
warna zindagi guzar jaayegi aazmaane main.


very well!!!

Aaj phir woh muskuraana jaan meri le gayaa
aankh sharmaa kar milaana jaan meri le gayaa

Jaan par tha intezaar-e-yaar to bhaari bohot
har ahat pey uskaa aana jaan meri le gayaa

Ek adaa sey apna aanchal ungliyoun mein baandhna
aur phir nazrein uthana jaan meri le gayaa

Jhoom kar angdaayi sey woh faasloun ko torna
aur achanak aazmana jaan meri le gayaa .


very nice tanha dil
bahut acha likhga hai aapne

Tum tuh ho jaan unki
phir kaise simmat tum dah rahe ho
tumhari jaan lekar tuh vo khud maar jayenge
phir kyun tum unhi ki nazaron se unhi ko
gira rahe ho, kyun aise unhe tadpa rahe ho
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dil
«Reply #36 on: January 17, 2005, 05:14:58 PM »
nice nishita.........good
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tanha dil tanha safar
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dil
«Reply #37 on: January 17, 2005, 06:07:37 PM »
thanks sandhya!
& nice lines too!
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sandhaya
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dil
«Reply #38 on: January 18, 2005, 03:32:20 PM »
Quote from: "tanha dil tanha safar"
thanks sandhya!
& nice lines too!


ur welcome tanha dil

Meri chahat mein kami kuch bhi na thi,
jane kyun tu begaana ho gaya,
tujhe lagta hai ki bahut khush hun main,
lekin mujhe hase ek zamana ho gaya
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dil
«Reply #39 on: January 19, 2005, 12:22:58 PM »
Good job by all....
 
Gajab hai tera ese mein roth jana,
Khafa ho ke daman chhudana,
Hum ko to nahi tum ko kahega zamana,
Kiya tha pyar par na aaya nibana.
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Meena
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dil
«Reply #40 on: January 19, 2005, 03:19:29 PM »
bohot ache aap dono!

 :D
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nishita
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dil
«Reply #41 on: January 19, 2005, 04:57:46 PM »
wow gud both

Humne unko yaadon mein laana chhod diya ...
Humne pyaar mohobbat jataana chhod diya ...
Jiski hasin par marte the hum ...
Usne humein dekh kar muskurana chhod diya ...
Ab na sunaayenge haal-e-dil apna ...
Kyunki humne dil lagaana chhod diya.
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waheed_rose2004
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dil
«Reply #42 on: January 19, 2005, 08:33:51 PM »
wah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1  excellent work........all.........  

Jo Soz Hai Tere Dard Key Naghmon Mein
Woh Saaz Bhardo Suroor Key Lamhon Mein

Halqa-E-Daam-E-Gul Ki Shukhiyaan Mat Pooch !
Dil Bhi Aseer Hogaye Rangon Main

Woh Naqsh-E-Dil Tha Keh A'ks-E-Hayaat Mera ?
Shikastagee Jeski Saj Gayee Zulfon Main !!

Yeh Keh Kar Bujh Gaye Nigaahon Key Charaagh
Koi Khwaab Soraha Hai Aankhon Main.............
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nishita
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dil
«Reply #43 on: January 20, 2005, 05:22:54 PM »
wah waheed.. bohat khoob
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nishita
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dil
«Reply #44 on: January 21, 2005, 07:10:10 PM »
Jane wala mere angan me dobara hota,
Me ne ae kash use dil se pukara hota,
Tum bohat ache rehe tarke mohabbat kar ke,
Warna jo hal mera he voh tumhara hota

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