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Dil tlabdaar hai hamara unko ek nazar dekhne ka
Magar zamane ki khatir unko dekhne ke kasir hai hum

Na jaane kab aur kahan ho jaye mulakat hamari aur unki
Zindagi ki raahon mein auron ki tarah musafir hai hum




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«Reply #1 on: October 22, 2012, 02:48:00 AM »
Dil tlabdaar hai hamara unko ek nazar dekhne ka
Magar zamane ki khatir unko dekhne ke kasir hai hum

Na jaane kab aur kahan ho jaye mulakat hamari aur unki
Zindagi ki raahon mein auron ki tarah musafir hai hum
Aunty jee kuch to sharam kar lo, buddape me ishq farmaa rahii ho




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Kalaam achchii hai.
Sirf achchii hi nahii bahut achchii hai.
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«Reply #2 on: October 22, 2012, 02:54:27 AM »
v v nice.....but masoom ji aap ko yesa likhana shobha nahi deta....kyun ki shayar jo likhata hai wo sab us ka personal mamla nahi hota.....
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«Reply #3 on: October 22, 2012, 03:16:59 AM »
wonderful.....sumanji.....
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«Reply #4 on: October 22, 2012, 03:27:28 AM »
bohut khoob mam achche ashar haiN
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«Reply #5 on: October 22, 2012, 03:28:57 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: October 22, 2012, 04:14:19 AM »
 icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #7 on: October 22, 2012, 05:47:31 AM »
very nice suman ji  Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
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«Reply #8 on: October 22, 2012, 05:57:18 AM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #9 on: October 22, 2012, 09:34:51 AM »
Dil tlabdaar hai hamara unko ek nazar dekhne ka
Magar zamane ki khatir unko dekhne ke kasir hai hum

Na jaane kab aur kahan ho jaye mulakat hamari aur unki
Zindagi ki raahon mein auron ki tarah musafir hai hum




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bahut khoob Applause
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«Reply #10 on: October 23, 2012, 11:41:30 AM »
Dil tlabdaar hai hamara unko ek nazar dekhne ka
Magar zamane ki khatir unko dekhne ke kasir hai hum

Na jaane kab aur kahan ho jaye mulakat hamari aur unki
Zindagi ki raahon mein auron ki tarah musafir hai hum




kasir - bebas/majbur

gr8 maa'm
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«Reply #11 on: October 23, 2012, 03:02:25 PM »
Kalaam achchii hai.
Sirf achchii hi nahii bahut achchii hai.

hahaha budda hoga................... baap. tongue3

thanks for reading beta
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«Reply #12 on: October 23, 2012, 03:04:36 PM »
v v nice.....but masoom ji aap ko yesa likhana shobha nahi deta....kyun ki shayar jo likhata hai wo sab us ka personal mamla nahi hota.....

Thank you very  much dear Gaytri. aapne bilkul sahi kaha. Jo koyi likhte hai, yeh zaruri nahi k wo pyar mein kho gaya ho etc. etc. bas kuch ehsaas ko lafzon mein sajakar post karte hai. kavita ko mazak na banaya toh accha hi hoga... khair

Itna personal lena nahi tha masoom jee ko tongue3

thank you onceagain dear
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«Reply #13 on: October 23, 2012, 03:05:24 PM »
wonderful.....sumanji.....

thank you aqsh jee
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«Reply #14 on: October 23, 2012, 03:06:00 PM »
bohut khoob mam achche ashar haiN

shukriya aarish jee
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