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ish.q kee aag mein jalnaa chaahey
dil to saNdal sa meHaknaa chaahey
dar.d ik beil sa ban kar deiikho
dil ke aaNgan se lipattNa chaahey
ruk gaYee thi jo meRey honton par
un kaHee baa.t vo kehNaa chaahey
teiiri yaaDon ka ye baDal dil par
aa.j baRkhaa sa bAras naa chaahey
jis ko mai.n bhulabeThee hun kab se
gham ka vohHee qiSa sunnaa chaahey
laaiba ali
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Mohammad Touhid
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«Reply #1 on: September 04, 2012, 09:25:47 AM » |
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wah laiba ji.. bahut khoob..  bahut gehre ehsaas.. |
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«Reply #2 on: September 04, 2012, 09:30:41 AM » |
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ish.q kee aag mein jalnaa chaahey
dil to saNdal sa meHaknaa chaahey
dar.d ik beil sa ban kar deiikho
dil ke aaNgan se lipattNa chaahey
ruk gaYee thi jo meRey honton par
un kaHee baa.t vo kehNaa chaahey
teiiri yaaDon ka ye baDal dil par
aa.j baRkhaa sa bAras naa chaahey
jis ko mai.n bhulabeThee hun kab se
gham ka vohHee qiSa sunnaa chaahey
laaiba ali
 :clapping bahut bahut khoob gazal likhi hai apne laaiba ji daad qabool kijiye. :clapping :clapping :clapping :clapping :clapping :clapping :clapping :clapping :clapping :clapping :clapping :clapping :clapping :clapping :clapping :clapping :clapping :clapping :clapping |
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«Reply #3 on: September 04, 2012, 09:49:52 AM » |
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: September 04, 2012, 10:01:04 AM » |
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Bahut khoob Laaiba jee sabhi ashaar bahut gahraai bhare.. umda bayaanee.. likhti rahiye.. :Clap:  |
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«Reply #5 on: September 04, 2012, 10:25:09 AM » |
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bahut khoob laaibaa kamaal kee peshkash
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«Reply #6 on: September 04, 2012, 11:09:22 AM » |
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wah laiba ji.. bahut khoob.. bahut gehre ehsaas.. bohat bohat shookria touhid ji aapkaa.... |
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«Reply #7 on: September 04, 2012, 11:10:27 AM » |
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:clapping bahut bahut khoob gazal likhi hai apne laaiba ji daad qabool kijiye. :clapping :clapping :clapping :clapping :clapping :clapping :clapping :clapping :clapping :clapping :clapping :clapping :clapping :clapping :clapping :clapping :clapping :clapping :clapping thnku thnku thnku..... |
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«Reply #8 on: September 04, 2012, 11:10:57 AM » |
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #9 on: September 04, 2012, 11:11:37 AM » |
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Bahut khoob Laaiba jee sabhi ashaar bahut gahraai bhare.. umda bayaanee.. likhti rahiye.. :Clap: bohat bohat shooria aapkaa.... |
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«Reply #10 on: September 04, 2012, 11:12:27 AM » |
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bahut khoob laaibaa kamaal kee peshkash
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«Reply #11 on: September 04, 2012, 11:24:11 AM » |
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Bahut Khub Laiba Ji Shad o Aabaad Rahiye Shihab aapkaa bohat shukria shihab ji aap bhi shaad rahiye |
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«Reply #12 on: September 04, 2012, 11:35:58 AM » |
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MASHALLAH ACHHA LAGA HAI
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«Reply #13 on: September 04, 2012, 05:24:54 PM » |
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shookria sahal aapkaa....
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«Reply #14 on: September 05, 2012, 12:16:26 AM » |
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ish.q kee aag mein jalnaa chaahey
dil to saNdal sa meHaknaa chaahey
dar.d ik beil sa ban kar deiikho
dil ke aaNgan se lipattNa chaahey
ruk gaYee thi jo meRey honton par
un kaHee baa.t vo kehNaa chaahey
teiiri yaaDon ka ye baDal dil par
aa.j baRkhaa sa bAras naa chaahey
jis ko mai.n bhulabeThee hun kab se
gham ka vohHee qiSa sunnaa chaahey
laaiba ali
bahut bahut khoob |
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