Do Toote Taare Aasmaan Ke,. -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

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Re: Do Toote Taare Aasmaan Ke,.

« Reply #15 on: November 29, 2008, 07:21:25 PM »

Quote from: sajid_ghayel on November 29, 2008, 06:37:30 PM

Bohat Khoob Azeem

Toota hota to jod bhi lete shayed
Jo chur chur ho gaya us dil kya kare ghayel

-sg-

Shukriya And
Nice One Sajid Bhai,.

Uska Bhi Dil Zakhmi Hua Hoga, Jisne Tera Dil Tord Diya,.
Lamba Safar Hai Zindagi Ka, Wo Bhi Bhatkega Ek Din, Jisne Tujhe Chord Diya,.

______________________________________-Jaanasheen-


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Re: Do Toote Taare Aasmaan Ke,.

« Reply #16 on: November 29, 2008, 07:51:54 PM »

Bohat khoob Azeem bhai ,,shally,,SG ji....

Kuch dard aise hai joh mitne se bhi nahi mithe
Kuch dil ke bojh kahene se nahi jaate

Hum toh unki isqh mein dil gawa baithe hain
Door rahekar bhi aankhon mein ashq chupaye baithe hain

______honeyrose_________


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Re: Do Toote Taare Aasmaan Ke,.

« Reply #17 on: November 29, 2008, 07:54:31 PM »

Quote from: Jaanasheen on November 29, 2008, 07:21:25 PM

Na na azeem mera mehboob jaisa bhi use duaye dena
Kam unka waise hain aajkal GHAYEL ko badduaye dena

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Re: Do Toote Taare Aasmaan Ke,.

« Reply #18 on: November 29, 2008, 07:58:21 PM »

Quote from: honeyrose on November 29, 2008, 07:51:54 PM

Suna ke apni dastan-e-mohabbat hame satati q ho

Jis baat se hame jalen ho woh baat batati q ho


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Re: Do Toote Taare Aasmaan Ke,.

« Reply #19 on: November 29, 2008, 08:19:32 PM »

Quote from: sajid_ghayel on November 29, 2008, 07:58:21 PM

Suna ke apni dastan-e-mohabbat hame satati q ho

Jis baat se hame jalen ho woh baat batati q ho

Dil ne unke pyaar mein ye kya kar diya
Jise ki muhabbat usney hi zindagi se door kar diya

Iss qadar chaha hai meine unhe paas laane ko
Us dard de dil ne mujhe zindagi se kyun door kar diya

________honeyrose_______


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Re: Do Toote Taare Aasmaan Ke,.

« Reply #20 on: November 29, 2008, 08:29:20 PM »

Aacha khiyal aur acha likha aap nay Honeyrose ji... Keep it up... Applause

Sajid Hadayat


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Re: Do Toote Taare Aasmaan Ke,.

« Reply #21 on: December 01, 2008, 10:58:39 AM »

Quote from: Jaanasheen on November 29, 2008, 04:08:23 PM

Nice One Again,.

Jinke Labon Pe Hasi Thi, Dard Dil Mein Bhare The,.
Khushi Sirf Chehre Pe The, Zakham Magar Hare The,.

Sitaaron Timtimaati Roshni Gawaah Hai "Shally,.
Meri Dil Ki Tanhaai Dekh, Ye Kitne Dare The,.

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BAHUT PYARA REPLY... Applause

SEHAM HAM BHI GAYE THE CHEHRA USKA AASLI DEKHKAR,
BADE SHARAMSAAR HUE THE USE PRAIYO KA HAQ JAANKAR,
BADII GAMGEEN AUR SADIYO SE LAMBI RAAT GUJARII HAMNE
USS DIN TAAROO SE BATIYAKAR...


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Re: Do Toote Taare Aasmaan Ke,.

« Reply #22 on: December 01, 2008, 11:04:18 AM »

Quote from: honeyrose on November 29, 2008, 08:19:32 PM

Nice One Jaya Sis,.


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Re: Do Toote Taare Aasmaan Ke,.

« Reply #23 on: December 01, 2008, 11:05:17 AM »

Quote from: honeyrose on November 29, 2008, 07:51:54 PM

SHUKRIYA HONEY DIDI,
& NICE FROM UR SIDE 2


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Re: Do Toote Taare Aasmaan Ke,.

« Reply #24 on: December 01, 2008, 11:08:43 AM »

Quote from: k.shael on December 01, 2008, 10:58:39 AM

BAHUT PYARA REPLY... Applause

SEHAM HAM BHI GAYE THE CHEHRA USKA AASLI DEKHKAR,
BADE SHARAMSAAR HUE THE USE PRAIYO KA HAQ JAANKAR,
BADII GAMGEEN AUR SADIYO SE LAMBI RAAT GUJARII HAMNE
USS DIN TAAROO SE BATIYAKAR...

Bohat Achche,.

Us Waqt Khaali Reh Gaya Aasmaan Saara,.
Jab Tootkar Giraa Meri Kismat Ka Taara,.

Aaj Ghayal Hai Seena Mera Uske Zakhmo Se,.
Kaise Bataaon, Usne Kis Tarah Khanjar Utaara,.

Haseen Thi Wo, Log Jaante The,.
Qateel Bhi Hai, Ye Nahi Maante The,.
Aaj Jab Marr Gaya "Azeem, To Pachtaa Rahe Hain,.
Aur Keh Rahe Hain, Sahi Kaha Usne, Ye Hai Hatyaara,.

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Re: Do Toote Taare Aasmaan Ke,.

« Reply #25 on: December 01, 2008, 11:13:12 AM »

Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 01, 2008, 11:08:43 AM

BAHUT KHOOB, BAHUT KHOOB,AZEEM...

KHANZAAR TO UTAAR DIYA USNE SINNE ME MERE,
PHIR ROYA BAHUT WO LAGA KAR GALEE SE MUJHE,

KOI PASS NA THA JO DEKHTA HALAT MERI AUR USKI
MEIN THI SHAANT KI MUJHE MOHABBAT KA TOHFA MILA

AUR WO CHILLA RAHA THA KYUNKI USE AAJ ZAMIR KE
HAATHOON DHOKHA MILA....


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Re: Do Toote Taare Aasmaan Ke,.

« Reply #26 on: December 01, 2008, 11:27:23 AM »

Quote from: k.shael on December 01, 2008, 11:13:12 AM

Waah,.
Starting Ke Do Lines Dil Choo Gaye,.

Sabke Hoton Pe Tabbassum Tha Mere Marne Ke Baad,.
Jaane Kya Sochkar Rota Raha Kaatil Mera,.

Jo Bayaan Karta Gaya, Shayari Ki Zabaan Mein,.
Jab Wo Saamne Aaye To Kehna Saka Kuch Bhi, Ye Dil Mera,.

Jab Ruksat Hua Duniya Se, Manzar Hi Kuch Aur Tha,.
Mere Saath Wo Khud Margaya, "Haay Wo Kaatil Mera,.

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Re: Do Toote Taare Aasmaan Ke,.

« Reply #27 on: December 01, 2008, 11:32:29 AM »

Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 01, 2008, 11:27:23 AM

NICE ONE AZEEM... Applause

KHUDA JAANE MERA QATAL KARNE KE BAAD MERA WO
QATIL ROYA KYUN, USNE KI THI MAN KI MARZI PHIR
WO KHUD SE KHAFA HUA KYUN, MEIN TO MAR GAYYI PYAR
KE LIYE YE MERI KHUSHNASIBI THI, WO JEETE JI MAR
GAYA AISA USKE SAATH HUA KYUN...


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Re: Do Toote Taare Aasmaan Ke,.

« Reply #28 on: December 01, 2008, 11:35:40 AM »

Quote from: Jaanasheen on November 29, 2008, 02:37:14 PM

Do Toote Taare Aasmaan Se Girrke, Zameen Par Bikhar Gaye,.
Sochte Hain Neeche Aake,
Jo Hume Dekhaa Karte The, Wo Log Aaj Kidhar Gaye,.

Aarzoo Poori Karte Gaye, Tootkar Bhi Ye Logon Ki,.
Inhe To Kuch Mila Nahi, Tootte Hue Inhe Jo Dekha Wo Log To Sawar Gaye,.

Roshan Thi Saari Duniya, Taaron Ki Mehfil Se "Azeem",.
Kya Hua Aaj Do Taare, Roshan Karte Karte, Guzar Gaye,.

_________________________________-Jaanasheen-

bahoot khoob kalpna hai azeem ...bahoot hi achcha likha aapne

Quote from: k.shael on December 01, 2008, 11:13:12 AM

bahoot umda reply shally